Cover Image

The Shadow of Smoke: A Tale From Outdoor School.

by Iam Atrie
Cheerilee's students visit an outdoor school for a few days. On the last night, a chilling ghost story is told.

Cheerilee's students visit an outdoor school for a few days. On the last night, a chilling ghost story is told.

[___^___^___}

This story was written for the Writing Lab group's Nightmare Night challenge. It's a bit short and it's not that well written, I think, but I had fun nonetheless. I tried a new writing style, and gained some more experience in writing short, fun, stories, so I'd call this a success no matter the vote outcome.

By the way, I know the ending is a little strange and kinda cliche. This was a little fun story without a serious plot.

Any and all critiques are appreciated.

Everyone
Incomplete
Random
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
DOCO

1306 words: Estimated 7 minutes to read

1 Chapter:

  1. The Shadow of Smoke. 2013-10-14 23:59:54 UTC
    1306