A Great and Powerful Romance

by Fic Critic

Critical's Anger

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Critical scanned the crowd with an incredibly enraged look. "Who was the first one to start throwing trash?" Critical asked seriously.

A stallion stood up and shouted "IT WAS ME! WHAT'RE YOU GOING TO DO ABOUT I....."

Critical punched the stallion before he could finish talking. The crowd, plus Trixie gasped as Critical breathed heavily. He flew back onto the stage and shouted "WHAT WERE YOU ALL THINKING!?" Critical began to calm down and continued his speech. "I know Trixie has done some bad things in the past. And I understand your anger. But if you could just take a second to calm down, you'd notice that Trixie has changed."

"How do you know she's changed?" a pony in the crowd called out

"Because she told me herself." Critical said, wiping Trixie clean from the trash that covered her.

"And you believe her?" the pony asked.

"Yes." Critical simply said.

Trixie was shocked at the fact that Critical trusted her. "You.......you're really trust me?" she shyly aksed, speaking in the first person.

Critical looked at Trixie and saw how shy she was. He hugged Trixie and said "Of course I do."

Trixie gasped for a bit as Critical hugged her out of nowhere. She wrapped her hooves around Critical and hugged him back. "Thank you........" Trixie said through held back tears. "Thank you for helping me."

The crowd stood dumbfounded, murmuring among each other about the events that had just transpired. Out of nowhere, the pony that Critical had punched began clapping slowly. The crowd slowly joined in, and soon enough, everyone was in an uproar as Critical and Trixie hugged onstage.


Author's Note

There will be more, dear reader. Trust me, there will be more.

This isn't mature for nothing. :pinkiecrazy:

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