A Great and Powerful Romance

by Fic Critic
A romance fanfiction including Trixie Lulamoon and an OC of mine, Critical Rain. I was inspired to do this after being on a forum website for some time, and after shipping Trixie with my OC. This'll be my take on it.

Critical Rain, a pegasus critic who lives in Ponyville, is off for a walk in his hometown, on his day off. He sees a cart in the distance, and notices Trixie. He walks towards her in an attempt to drive her off. After failing to drive her away, Critical learns something about Trixie he never knew. And this new information might start something Critical never intended to start. And will never want to stop.

Complete
Romance
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Sex
 
OTO

2104 words: Estimated 11 minutes to read

6 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1: Introduction 2013-10-16 00:37:13 UTC
    372
  2. Chapter 2: The Romance Begins 2013-10-19 03:15:53 UTC
    430
  3. Critical's Anger 2013-10-20 21:52:27 UTC
    297
  4. The Love Begins 2013-10-22 21:10:31 UTC
    400
  5. The Love Begins (For Real This Time) 2013-10-31 00:57:56 UTC
    262
  6. Epilogue 2013-11-05 03:06:11 UTC
    343