TIME and DUST

sometime the dark start out as light, this is my first fanfic so my grammer really sucks but no matter if its positive or negitave i would like to know what you think

Its my first story but I'm proud of it, this is my first chapter, I'm trying to split it into 3-4 chapters. And updating about once a week,

What I'm looking for is feedback, that being positive or negative, I just want to know where I went well . And where I need work,

Everyone