The Broken Promise (Second Fic)

by Ribgf

Chapter 2

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Chapter 2

I can't go home, they know where I live. I need to stay somewhere else for a while, but where?......Aha! The old Cutie Mark Crusaders clubhouse, well, if it's still in a good condition

She ran as fast as she could trough the cold wind to the private part of Sweet Apple Acres. The unicorn still knew the way after all these years.

She ran through the little forest, evading all the trees. Through the trees, she could see the roof the the clubhouse.

When it was in full sight, her jaw fell open from what she was staring at.

The clubhouse was still in perfect condition. She stood there for a while panting of all the running. When she catched enough breath the unicorn carefully walked up the ramp of the clubhouse and opened the door with her horn.

Sweetie Belle was again, amazed by the perfect condition of inside of the clubhouse.

Good memories invaded Sweetie Belle's mind.

The talent show.
The crusading.
The time they spent here.

It felt good.

She sat down on the bed that was in the corner.

"We are the Cutie Mark Crusaders, on a quest to found to find out who we are. And we will never stop the journey, not until we have our cutie marks." she sang quietly.

A tear of joy rolled down her cheek. Finally some good memories of Scootaloo and Apple Bloom.

"They say that you will get your mark when the time is really right and you know what you're supposed to do and your talent comes to light, but it's not as easy as it sounds and the waiting is hard to do, so we test our talents everywhere, until our face is blue."

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Stop waisting your time or it will be soon too late.
You are an absolute pathetic excuse for a pony.
You promised us, but you didn't keep it.
Time is running out, you better do something with your life.
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Sweetie Belle layed on the bed in the corner. The bed sheets were most likely changed by Applejack from time to time, Sweetie guessed. They smelled and felt like new. Sweetie Belle was shivering, it was cold, so she got under the bed sheet. It was still morning, but she was tired and fell asleep in no time.

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It was cold, very cold. The smell was disgusting. But the pain was the worst.
Sweetie Belle regained consiousness. She slowly opened her eyes and was terrified by the big purple eyes staring at her.

"Hello Sweetie Belle. So here we are. You are too late, we warned you, but you wouldn't listen." Her voice echoed trough the room.

She stepped back and Sweetie recognized her immediately.

"S-scootal-loo." she said with a weak voice.

Sweetie Belle barely had the power to talk or keep her eyes open. She observed the room around her and found herself nailed at the wall trough her hooves. Her hooves were full of her own blood, which also dripped to the big puddle of blood on the floor.

Her eyes fell on Scootaloo again. She was also grown up, covered with blood and a big smile on her face. Her cutie mark was a knife with blood on it.

The orange pegasus chuckled.

"Well, that is what I used to be called, I listen to the name Red Liquid now. Let me introduce you to my partner. Honey! I have a present for you!"

Sweetie Belle heard hooves coming from the stairs next to her seconds later.

"Ohh, that's really nice of ya Liquid." It was Apple Bloom also grown up. Her cutie mark was a fractured bone and also has a big smile on her face.
They kissed each other on the lips with a lot of moaning. "Hmm, Thanks Liquid." she said as she let go of the pegasus and licked her lips.

Apple Bloom stood in front of the bloody, shocked unicorn. Still with a big smile on her face.

"Well, well, well, if it isn't Sweetie Belle. Nice to see ya, Ah'm Bone Fracture, know to you as Apple Bloom."

Sweetie held her head down and coughed up blood and looked up at Fracture again.

"W-what....are....you two gonna d-do with....me?" she asked weakly, while blood came out of her mouth.

Liquid and Fracture chuckled and Liquid began talking. "You made us a promise remember? You didn't keep that and now, well, you are going to pay us back. With your life ofcourse, for our enjoyment."

"Hmm..Liquid, this turns mah on so badly."

They kissed each other again and then started licking of the face of one another.

Sweetie Belle gagged from the look of it.

They stopped and Fracture started talking again,
"Ya'll didn't enjoy that huh? Maybe y'all will enjoy THIS!
She trotted over to her and bucked her right in the stomach.

"AHHHH!" Sweetie Belle managed to get out and more blood came from her mouth.

"Nice one handsome." Liquid said and smacked Fracture on her flank. She moaned and then replied to back "Thanks, honey It's yer turn."

"Let's get a little more serious, shall we Fracture?"

"Mah pleasure."

Sweetie Belle still moaned from the pain in her stomach as Liquid came up with a hacksaw.

"N-no....please" she managed to get out.

Red Liquid ignored her and started to saw through the unicorn's horn.
Sweetie Belle screamed out in pain as she struggled to get loose, but it had no use, the scream echoed through the room and tears began rolling from her cheeks.

After a while of screaming and pain, the horn was cut in half. Sweetie Belle hung her head down and cryed while the two were kissing each other on the floor with their hooves rubbing in each other's private parts and moaning.

Suddenly, Bone Fracture stopped and stood up from Red Liquid. She licked her lips and helped Liquid up.

"Ah believe it is mah turn."

"It sure is, handsome."

"N-n-no, please, I-I'll do anything." Sweetie begged them with a high, weak voice.

"It's too late for that Sweetie Belle." Liquid quickly replied.

"Oooh! A baseball bat!" Fracture excitedly yelled from the table full of tools.

She turned over trotted up to Sweetie Belle and hit her hard in her private area.

"AAAAAAAHH!"

"More Fracture! More!"

She hit her again in the stomach.

Sweetie Belle vomited and blood followed.

"P-pllease ssstop"

But they didn't pay attention, Fracture layed on a table while Liquid licked her between the legs.

"Aww yea, Liquid, that's it."

After a while, it was time for more pain for Sweetie Belle.

"Now it's time for the real fun. Enjoy it Sweetie Belle." Liquid said and the licked her lips.

She picked up the hacksaw once again and walked over the broken mare.

"P-please k-k-kill me."

"Not yet."

She lowered down and started to saw through Sweetie Belle right hind leg.

More screaming followed and blood was flying everywhere.

Once she was done, she complimented her. "You're pretty tough, Sweetie Belle, you didn't even pass out."

The blood puddle became bigger and bigger and made Sweetie vomit again.

The two were again making love to each other, but now Fracture was the one licking.

"Ahhh, Fracture, amazing."

Minutes of pain, moaning and blood passed. It was time for more torture again.

"We should hurry up a bit, the next patient is waiting." Liquid said.

"Well, it's time for the grand finale, then. Will you join me?" Fracture asked with a huge smile.

"My pleasure."

They both picked up a machete and walked over to Sweetie Belle.

"End of the line, Sweetie Belle. Goodbye" Liquid said.

And so, they started chopping of every limb of the mare with a huge smile on their face.

The remains of Sweetie Belle lay in pieces on the floor and was being looked at by the two mares while they were having sex.

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