The Broken Promise (Second Fic)

by Ribgf

Chapter 3

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The Broken Promise 3

"AAAAAAAAAHHHHH!"

A deafening scream came from the former Cutie Mark Crusader clubhouse.

"Oh thank Celestia, it was just a dream."

Sweetie Belle rose up to sit on the bed. She was soaking from the sweat and panting.

It was late in the afternoon when the unicorn woke up and even colder than this morning.

Sweetie Belle thought about her next move on her bed until the clubhouse door was kicked in.

"What are ya doin' in here!?" It was Applejack, she must have heard the scream. "Oh, it's you Sweetie Belle, thank goodness. Oh wait, what ARE you doin' in here? Didn't Twilight take you home with her?" She asked confused

The unicorn let the shock faint away for a moment.

"Well?"

"I sort of got into a fight with Twilight and my sis and ran away."

"About what? Don't worry, I won't tell anypony else. Pinkie Promise."

"I don't wanna talk about it." she looked away from the earth pony. "Please, just leave me alone."

Applejack sighed. "I can't let ya'll out here in this chill old clubhouse. Ya'll really can't be left alone in yer current situation. Please, just stay with me at the barn."

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You can't stop dissapointing us can you? You little shit.
You're almost out of time. The clock is ticking. The clock is ticking. Tick-tock, tick-tock.
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Sweetie Belle collapsed onto the floor and banged her against the floor.
"THE VOICES!!! MAKE IT STOP!!"

Applejack trotted over to the unicorn, stopped her from banging her head and sat her down on the bed.

"Don't do that! Now, what do ya'll mean with you said?"

Sweetie Belled tried to stand up, but Applejack stopped her.

Sweetie sighed as she wiped the blood from the wound on her forehead. "I hear voices in my head and I CAN'T MAKE IT STOP!!!"
She groaned and looked away from Applejack.

"Voices in yer head? What do they say?" Applejack looked at her with concern.

The unicorn sighed again and started to explain again. "I hear the voices of Scootaloo and Apple Bloom in my head. They say all kinds of things, like that I betrayed them. You see, I made a promise fifteen years ago. I promised that I would go on crusading here and well, after a huge dissapointment left after another try for a cutie mark. I got depressed and then the voices suddenly came."

Applejack looked at her, flabber-gasted and then shook her head, just like Twilight and Rarity.

"Why didn't ya ask fer help? This is really serious business." Applejack asked, concerned.

"I wanted to solve it on my own and I will. I accepted Twilight's help, but I shouldn't have, I don't need help." The unicorn snarled back.

She used her horn levitate the earth pony and trew her to the other side other the room.

"Don't even think about coming after me!" she yelled angry as she ran out the clubhouse.

Applejack stood up and wiped the dust of her coat and sighed.
"Ah think ah'll need some help of mah friends."


Sweetie Belles ran through the forest as hard as she could, the chilly wind blowing in her coat.

Ugh, where can I go now........

She ran, but didn't know where to go.


After a long search of a safe place, where she could hide from the ponies trying to find her, she finally found it. A abandonned shed just a few minutes into the Everfree forest. It was already dark when Sweetie Belle found the shed and cold, very cold.

She sat in the corner anxiously looking at the door to check if anypony entered. The shed was completely empty, but she didn't care, they couldn't find her here.

Sweetie Belle really longed for a glass of whisky, but the fear and the voices replaced it most of the time.

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Tick-tock, tick-tock, tick-tock,
tick-tock, tick-tock.
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Her anger took over her body and banged her head against the wall. She had enough.

*Bang!*
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Tick-tock, tick-tock
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"STOP IT!!!" The unicorn yelled as hard as she could

*Bang!*

The blood dripped of her head, but she didn't feel anything.

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Tick-tock, tick-tock, tick-tock.
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Sweetie Belle banged her head multiple times at the wall with all the power she had. The blood was spreading all across her face and dripped on the floor.

The mare did it one more time with her last power and lost control of her body. She stumbled around the room and fell on the ground with a hard thump. Sweetie Belle was unconscious.

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