The Secret Mentor

by Cool_Story_Reader
What would happen if a mysterious pony offered to become Twilight's mentor? Would she accept him?

Twilight is talented in magic. It didn't take long for a certain pony to take interest in her.
What will happen when this pony offers to become her mentor?

So yeah, this is my first story. I wrote it for the evil Twilight contest. It was more of an experiment to see if I liked to write and if I was any good at it.
I don't have a proof reader and English isn't my first language so expect some errors here and there.
I appreciate any kind of feedback I get. If you like or hate the story please tell me why.
And I think that's about it, enjoy the story.
Oh yeah, one thing I forgot to mention. This story ignores season 4 because it was written before the premiere.

Teen
Complete
Tragedy
Dark
Alternate Universe
Sad
 

14322 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

6 Chapters:

  1. How did it all come down to this? 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    290
  2. The Beginning 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    3579
  3. 15 Years Later 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    2323
  4. The Training 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    2314
  5. The Wedding 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1980
  6. The Battle 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    3836