The Secret Mentor

by Cool_Story_Reader

First published

Twilight is talented in magic. It didn't take long for a certain pony to take interest in her.
What will happen when this pony offers to become her mentor?

So yeah, this is my first story. I wrote it for the evil Twilight contest. It was more of an experiment to see if I liked to write and if I was any good at it.
I don't have a proof reader and English isn't my first language so expect some errors here and there.
I appreciate any kind of feedback I get. If you like or hate the story please tell me why.
And I think that's about it, enjoy the story.
Oh yeah, one thing I forgot to mention. This story ignores season 4 because it was written before the premiere.