Rarity's Obsession (The Original)

Authors Note: This was my first story ever written on fimfiction, that had been featured for a given while before closing, due to my desperation for popularity for a time. Over the next few years, I learned more about writing and how instead to write: "Write for your passion, not for popularity". I managed to find the raw part of the story through Google. Please enjoy.

The sun rose above the hill, signaling the beginning of a new day. The light raced through the fields of ponyville and through equestria. Twilight lifted an eyelid and looked out the window to see the sun over the horizon through her bedroom window, she then got up out of the bed. On the way down the stairs she looked across her shoulder to see spike still tired and restful. Twilight went back downstairs and wrote a note to spike. Telling him that she had some research to attend to. Twilight went out of the tree house leaving spike all alone.

That was her mistake.

Spike shot up from his bed, he scrambled and looked downstairs. No twilight. He had the tree all to himself. Faster than he ever ran, he bolted to the kitchen.

He was never asleep in the first place, just waiting for the right time for twilight to leave. He was about to make a love potion to rarity. He can never truly tell her how he feels. But with the potion he won't  have to. Inside, he went through a pile of books left on the ground by twilight from her late study. He got out the love and magic book and placed it next to the stove, got out some pots and pans, then began to make the potion just for rarity. He gotten all the ingredients he needed until it lay a small cup full of blue and pink liquid. Spike pulled a large grin on his face, thinking of what it would be like to have rarity as a girl friend. He giggled in spite of it. Spike took the cup and left twilights home towards  carousel boutique.

Spike knocked on the door of the the large mares home. “coming!” yelled rarity. Spike stood there and waited for her. But he had second thoughts. He knew that a love potion completely locks out the victims will for as long as it last. He knew that if he did this a lot of changes would start to happen. But he loved rarity too much to be desired. The door opened and the beautiful rarity stood in front of him.

“Oh, spike! what ever are you doing here?”

He gulped and looked at her.

“I, umm... i made this for you, rarity.”

He bought the cup up to her for her to examine it.

“What is it?”

“It's, um...TEA!”

“Tea?”

“Yeah! I know you've been working hard and i wanted to make you it.”

“Oh that's so thoughtful of you spike!”

Rarity lifted the cup with one hoof and drank the contents of the potion. Spike started to sweat, images and thoughts started to race through his mind. But rarity was already done. But said nothing, she stood there stiff as a board. Her pupils turned wide. She looked down at spike. Then they returned to normal again.

“Well... what do you think?”

Rarity still didn't move. After a moment of awkward silence she shut the door on spike, without speaking a word.

“Well that was scary.”

Spike walked off in disappointment, back to the library.

Sweetie belle came back to the boutique from the C.M.Cs silly antics of trying to find their cutie marks, starting the day of bothering the pony neighbors with poorly drawn art, and of course it didn't work . But as she walked in the lights were all off. It was dim until she saw one of the rooms barely lit. She walked over to the room to see rarity in a room, crouched in a corner with only a candle light for her to see into. It wasn't until she walked in when she looked at all the writing on the walls and the pictures.

They all said and pictured spike.

SPIKE

SPIKE

SPIKE

SPIKE....

The words written in all different colors all pointing towards rarity. Sweetie belle slowly went towards her. As she got closer she can hear her giggling. Rarity craned her head to sweetie belle.

“Oh darling? Have you seen spike anywhere?”

“Spike! can you hand me that book?”

As requested, he picked up the purple spellbook off the ground and gave it to twilight. He was still bummed about how the potion didn't work. But he hid his emotions from twilight. There was a knock at the door.  Twilight paused from her studies and answered it. There stood rarity with her saddle bag.

“Oh hi rarity! what do you-”

But before she could finish her sentence, rarity burst past twilight like a train.Shoving her against the wall. She went into a full gallop until her eyes were just a few inches to spikes.

“Hello my little sugar bear!”

“Um, hey rarity.”

Spike didn't understand , the potion didn't seem to work before, why now?

Rarity had her saddle bag with her, she pulled out an envelope and gave it to spike. He opened to see a large paper red heart  with gemstones, diamonds, and both spike and rarity on the cover, with some extra  gems for a snack.

“Wow rarity” said Twilight

“That's really... detailed. how did you-”

“Quiet!” interrupted Rarity.

She looked  back at spike with large eyes as big as the moon. and a grin that grew ear to ear.

“I hope you enjoy my small present!”

“Small?’’ said Spike.

Rarity bent down and kissed spike, then bolted out the door.

“Since when did rarity had interest in you?” said twilight

But Spike didn't hear, because he was too lost in both acceptance and denial.