The Case of the Missing Mare

by MrPandaa
When Locke uncovers the kidnapping of three mares, he can't help but investigate. Soon, Lock finds himself grappling with the first kingpin Manehatten has ever seen. Can Lock foil the mobster's plan and ensure the survival of Manehatten?

While vacationing in Manehatten, Detective-Adventurer-Guy Locke stumbles upon the kidnapping of three mares whose only connection is a knowledge of sewing. Enveloped by curiosity and worried for their safety, Locke soon solves the mystery of their disappearance...but sometimes, answers only lead to more questions.
Sometimes, Dr. Doofenshmirtz doesn't coordinate his -inators very well with his bosses. Sometimes, the Narrator just might talk to the main character in a first-person fic. And sometimes, taking down the bad guy can be easier than taking out the girl.

First fic woot! Comments are appreciated a ton, and if you'd give this sucker a bit of feedback I'd love you forever, 'cause Celestia knows that it's far from perfect. And about that [Incomplete] tag down there: the story is fully written, but it's going to have some rewriting and editing happening. Once all that's done and I'm never going to look at this story again, that's when I'll mark it [Complete].
Oh, yeah, this has Coco Pommel in it, but she doesn't have a button yet, so now you know.

Everyone
Incomplete
Comedy
Romance
Random
Adventure
Crossover
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
ROO

4891 words: Estimated 24 minutes to read

9 Chapters:

  1. [Not a Chapter] A dedication-of-sorts 2014-01-12 00:55:57 UTC
    144
  2. My Mystery Sense is tingling... 2014-01-12 00:56:20 UTC
    787
  3. My friend, the Narrator 2014-01-12 00:56:34 UTC
    181
  4. 'Tis simply elementary, my dear reader 2014-01-12 00:56:53 UTC
    685
  5. Ugh, receptionists... 2014-01-12 00:57:07 UTC
    332
  6. The doof 2014-01-12 00:57:31 UTC
    584
  7. Taking down the boss 2014-01-12 00:57:44 UTC
    1262
  8. "Manehatten has left its hoofprint on me" 2014-01-12 00:57:54 UTC
    345
  9. Taking out the girl 2014-01-12 00:58:16 UTC
    571