The True Night

by The_Deceiver

chapter 1. The Mane Intro

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chapter 1. The Mane Intro

(The names The Night Bringer And The Deceiver go to their rightful owners at games workshop for warhammer 40,000 and all content about mlp fim belongs to hasbro and of course the god empress Lauren faust)

~ The_Deceiver

The Nightbringer
and
The Deceiver

Chapter. 1 Mane Intro

“Well I'm just going to come out and say it I'm blaming you for this” Night huffed glaring at his companion.

“Why is it that every time we get disappear to another world you jump to the conclusion that it’s my fault?” said the towering green pony.

“well because it’s easier that way and it makes perfect sense that’s how I meet you, you know you come out of a white flowing portal guns blazing shooting those big metal guys and the rest is history am I right or am I right?” Night said losing himself into his thought before.

“CRASH!”

Night crashes into the back of a wagon.

“Ow….. Hey did anyone get license plate of that truck” said Night before slumping to the ground.

As he fell to the ground his jet black hat fluttered in the wind flying over the wagon knocking of the brown Stetson hat of an orange pony and landing softly onto her head.

“HEY what the…..” she said before turning with anger written on her face before suddenly her face changed to that of gobsmacked when The Deceiver slowly walked past his dark green armour clunking together as he walked.

“Whoa that is one big pony” she said looking up to Deceivers head.

“What did you just call me” he said deeply before spinning around.

“she called you a pony you idiot or have you forgotten what you look like in a mirror” a low voice coming from the back of the wagon stood a very tall very black pony wearing a black cape and wearing a hellish metal mask and blood red eyes.

Applejack suddenly was trapped between too large and equally scary ponies all she could here was her heart beating and her knees shaking.

“I'm so sorry I wasn’t looking were I was going but may I please have my hat back please miss?” Night said bowing like a gentlemen (gentlecolt)

All of a sudden there was a light tapping sound like horse hooves on metal night turned to Deceiver shocked to see on his back was a wild looking pink pony with an equally wild looking dark pink mane Deceiver quickly turned his head only to see a pink blur for only a second cracked against his helmet like a hammer to iron she quickly jumped down and dashed to two other pony’s running down a hill to them with quite serious faces on, Night and Deceiver whipped around quickly to face Their attackers before hearing a “HEY!” they looked around before they both simultaneously seeing a very fast very angry multi-coloured maned flying pony (obviously a Pegasus) darting right towards Deceiver her act only to be stopped in vain as she whipped around flying for his front but being stopped as she made contact with Deceivers metal chest she stopped immediately groaning in pain as she slid off his armour without even nudging him he sighed and brought his attention to the other three who still running towards him.

“I can sense four of them in that direction” Night said squinting his dark red eyes to see a pink tail behind a tree.

All of a sudden a bolt of energy shot forward from whom I assumed was the purple unicorn with the dark purple mane with what looks like a pink stripe running through it struck Deceiver with tremendous force that it caused him to spread his legs (and no not in that way) to keep himself from falling over which was a failed attempt and the green giant toppled to the ground onto the cyan coloured Pegasus (and still not in that way knock it off) with a loud thud Night was shocked that a small bolt of what could have been lightning had brought down Deceiver after all they had been through that feeble attack brought him down Night turning to the pony’s charging in his direction his eye’s growing red hot the purple unicorn fired another bolt not as powerful as the one that hit Deceiver, Night could feel she was straining against the amount of power she was throwing at them Night simply chuckled and raised a shield of dark energy and the bolt was immediately absorbed into the void then like it was nothing but a toy was reflected back at the trio and struck the pink pony which didn’t seem to be running but jumping which was odd since she was easily keeping up with the other two with ease, she was instantly grounded the other two suddenly paused to see their friend…..giggling? She was lying on the ground with static running all over her body laughing uncontrollably.

“well that’s new” Night said in raw confusion as the other two looked at Night then to each other looking at each other’s horn Night chuckling to himself at a thought he had then the purple mare that shot the bolt at Night asked him a question.
“H-h-how did you do that without a horn” she asked nervously.

Night responded with a thought that these unicorns can only use magic with their horns and judging by the other two types of pony’s he saw can’t use magic unlike the unicorns and by seeing this form of magic used by what can be described as an earth pony is something they couldn’t understand Night then spoke up to answer her question but not before having a bit of fun and without Deceiver there to stop him he can do what he wanted.

“A mere trick nothing compared to what you stunning mare’s dished out I almost got overwhelmed by how pretty you look” he said going somewhat over the top but with a hint of sarcasm which by the expression on the white unicorn with the well maintained purple mane seemed to pick up on and her expression was unchanged by Nights charm but less could be said about her companion who broke out into a bright reddish pink.

“Um… Uhh…t-t-that’s not what I meant” the now bright red unicorn said trying to hide her face with her hoof.

Out of the blue a voice piped up behind Night were the orange pony that Night and Deceiver had meet but completely forgot about was still wearing Nights hat spoke up to quell the fighting.

“It’s ok Twi these here…uh… stallions were just walkin’ by and I might of caused an argument between them” she said poking her head from beside the over turned wagon.

The two seemed content with what she had to say and strangely smiled and walked past Night as if nothing happened the purple unicorn blushing and looking away as she passed.

“My dear Applejack I didn’t know you had that way with stallions you heartbreaker you” the white unicorn said nudging her hoof into the side of the orange pony who was now a beet red in embarrassment.

“WHAT no, no, no it’s nothing like that they were walkin past that black one walked into the back of my here wagon and I glanced and commented to his friend” she said all in one breath that she forgot she was holding in.

“What did you say exactly Applejack?” commented the purple unicorn who’s name was apparently twilight (go figure).
“I only said he was big” she said pointing a hoof towards the great lump of metal that for a moment looked like a small hill.
“Applejack really how can you be so insensitive to others feelings” the white unicorn now known as Rarity gasped.
“Um…excuse me? You haven’t forgotten about me have you?” Night said waving a hoof at them.

“Oh so sorry my dear I had comple-ple-ple” she stuttered gazing up from Nights hooves to his head.

Finally actually getting a better look at Night she could now see he was quite tall taller than any stallion she knew that he wore a jet black cape which was finely stitched together that was covering a metal breast that came up to the base of his neck and overlapped another plate the continued under his stomach and sparkled beautifully with gold engravings and outlines of his armour she noticed his coat was a charcoal black unlike his mane and tail which was a deep pearl black that glistened in the sunlight but was horrified at the sight of his mask which covered most of his face and head but leaving his ears popping out at the top were his mouth would be on his mask was four large spiked teeth in the helmet the two outer being significantly larger than the inner two but what truly frightened her was his eyes dark crimson or scarlet of maybe even a blood red it was hard to know for sure the eyes constantly changed shades which sent chills up rarity’s back as she backed away from him.

“As you can see my friend here is actually very large in stature he took offense when you called him a pony” he said staring oddly at rarity who was slowly backing away.

“Why in the hay would he take offense?” Applejack said curiously.

“I….. Really can’t explain it” Night said tilting his head up losing himself in his thoughts while trying to hide the truth.
“Speaking of which how long will he be out for? Miss uhh?” Night asked.

“My name is Twilight Sparkle and well judging by his size and how much magic I used about four hours” she said holding her hoof to her mouth.

“that’s quite a pretty name for someone” Night said just realizing what he just said he turned his head his eyes growing a red hot crimson as Twilight also turning only turning bright red.

There was a sudden murmur coming from beneath Deceiver as two hind legs were thrashing about franticly until faint words could be heard.

“Help get this thing off me I can’t breathe!” she tried to scream with no success.

Night quickly rushed over but took his time to assess the situation but generally just being a smartass and said.

“I will get him off of you only if you promise not to attack me when I do, do you promise?” he said knelling down to where she was crushed for a few minutes before hearing a faint “yes” coming from beneath the metal hulk night smiled and his eyes brightly grew redder and the large green stallion slowly rolled off of the rainbow maned pony who started glowing black as Night dragged her out with his mysterious eldritch powers she then became quite restless and started thrashing almost breaking nights concentration.

“Whoa your feisty one aren’t ya” he said wrestling to keep her from escaping his grasp it was like trying to land a much more colourful fish.

“Let me go let me go” she said kicking and screaming like a 2 year old child.

“Please can you put her down Mr uhh….?” Twilight said placing her hoof on Nights shoulder causing him to jump and losing his concentration and dropping cyan pony who was hovering upside down when the spell was interrupted causing her to fall face first in the dirt with her rump in the air.

“Oh I'm sorry Rainbow Dash” Twilight said apologetically.

“Rainbow Dash hmmm how fitting” Night said nudging her flank with his hoof causing her to fall on her stomach.

At this minute Deceiver woke up after lying on his back in an awkward fashion and quickly thrashing about kicking a fence post out of its foundations.

“Well that was awkward” he said.

“I do hope you were behaving yourself while I was passed out” he said quickly looking around to see Twilight blushing at Night as he was looking at Deceiver “I see not” Deceiver said shaking his head in embarrassment.

All the mares stared at the sheer size of Deceiver and Night and stopped staring and thought that the two stallions were quite taller than other stallions they knew.

“Whoa your huge your even bigger than Princess Celestia” Rainbow Dash said zipping about Deceiver.

There was a faint whisper that no other pony heard but caught the attention of night when his ear twitched when he heard the soft voice he turned around to see a small face EEEEP! And then dart behind a bush.

“I guess she’s the shy one of the group I think I don’t think I should use my charm on this one she might have a heart attack out of sheer embarrassment” he thought to himself while looking back to see the rest were admiring Deceivers armour “typical” he said softly to himself he then proceeded to greet this shy creature as quietly and as calm as possible and made sure the others weren’t looking as he proceeded to removing his mask when a small click came from his magic which was undoing a latch that securely held his mask to his head he slowly removed his mask giving of a faint smile before removing the entire thing when he did he rubbed his charcoal black face with his hoof then ruffled the mane that was under his mask making a controlled but maintained messy style of mane style before opening his bright red eye’s and smiling.

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