An Adventure Gone Right?

by Trilandpk

Recovery & Estrus

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My dreams were completely empty and devoid of anything which was completely the opposite to what I was used to, where they would be filled with visions of Eterna, dreams of my lovers or random nightmares that showed the future; so I was more than happy when I started to return to reality, leaving the empty void behind.

“Are you completely sure he’s going to be okay” I heard a voice echo through my throbbing head, my vision was hazy but I managed to make out several figures that stood above me.

“You may have some doubt, but if it wasn’t for me, him you would be without” I heard an unfamiliar voice call out.

“But he still looks absolutely horrendous” I managed to make out Rarity’s voice.

“His Injuries will fade, once he ingests the potion I made” The unfamiliar voice called out again, I blinked my eyes several times before managing to make out the unfamiliar voice as a light grey earth pony that had white stripes peppering her fur; like a zebra.

My vision blurred and faded to black for I don’t know how long before I was returned to the world.

“A-Are you guys sure I should take care of him?” I heard a timid voice ring out from somewhere behind me, followed shortly afterwards by a flurry of agreement.

“Yeah we’re sure Fluttershy, we have something we need to discuss anyway” I heard a voice that was obviously Rainbow Dash reply to the question at hand.

“They have trust, in Friendship that is a must.” I heard the same rhyming voice from before call out and as if I was entranced by her voice my vision faded once again to black.

After a few more hazy wakeups I finally returned to reality for good, my head while still throbbing had certainly calmed down and didn’t ache as much as it did originally, my body however felt like it had been in a furnace after it had been beaten and rolled like dough.

“Ahh” I was met with a voice that seemed pleased at my recovery, glancing around the unfamiliar room I noticed a striped woman sitting on a chair, she was staring at me intently; almost as if I was really interesting. “You have returned to life, your lovers were in quite a bit of strife.”

She wore simple cloth robes that hugged her figure tightly, her skin was striped like that of a zebra and she seemed to be a little rough around the edges in her appearance.

“Oh no… really?” I asked while hanging my head in slight shame, pain was stinging my throat from the burns that weren’t healed yet, but what hurt the most was the feeling of having my herd worrying about me again and wasn’t dousing my already horrible mood. I was about to stay silent when a thought went through my head just before I’d fallen, “Where’s Fluttershy?” I almost demanded while trying to stand before collapsing back onto the makeshift bed I was stationed on. “Is she okay?”

“She is doing her best, so now you must rest” The striped woman replied with a phantom of a smile, she seemed more interested in me than I was in her.

“I’ve rested enough” I told the woman in a hoarse voice while trying to stand again but felt my legs give out from under me, disobeying the most simple commands I gave them. (I made a funny)

“Just as I pray, it seemed your limbs will not obey” she responded while standing and starting towards me with curiosity, “I’m Zecora and.” she spoke and for the first time since I’d started talking with her I noticed she didn’t rhyme that sentence; probably because nothing rhymed with her name. “And meds in my house are a plethora.” Nope there it was.

“Jesse” I responded simply before starting to groan in frustration as my legs were refusing to move an inch, no matter how much willpower I used they wouldn’t budge. I was so focused on moving my legs I didn’t notice how close the striped woman known as Zecora had gotten to me, she was now inches away from my face, although I wasn’t looking at her and rather staring at my legs; her own legs appeared in my vision and I looked up to find myself face to face with her.

Zecora seemed to be staring at me intently before moving closer, avoiding my face and leaning towards my neck and hairline, I heard her take a sharp inhale before I fell back in surprise. “W-What are you doing, smelling me” I cried out in surprise and slight shock while staring at the striped woman who was now enraptured in the spot.

“Your scent is filled with power;” she began to speak with ecstasy evident in her voice, “I would not mind if you took my flower.”

I felt red begin to colour my cheeks and averted my gaze from Zecora, who was lightly panting and had begun to lean over to get closer to me.

“Let us make haste” she spoke while getting right into my face, “I would only like a taste” her hands went down to my pants and fumbled with the material. I finally snapped out of my shock and shoved Zecora away from me and into a shelf that was filled with various knick knacks; the shelf collapsed and its contents fell onto Zecora.

Glasses smashed while spilling various coloured liquids over the mare and her clothing, I slowly began to lift myself up into a sitting position with my legs sitting uselessly over the edge. I felt relief flood through my body as I stared at Zecora’s unmoving body, liquid staining her clothing and some of her fur as she twitched softly.

I let loose a long exhale, I had no idea when I’d started holding my breath but my lungs had started to burn and so I began to breathe now that I could relax. As I relaxed and stared at the twitching mare on the ground I gave myself a look over in be wonderment as to why she had begun to act that way.

Did Eterna have something to do with it? Was it my sword reacting with me again? She did mention something about my power.

As I pondered these thoughts I began to hear a soft voice approach the shack I was situated inside, the voice sounded familiar and I could recognize it as Fluttershy, another thing about the voice was that it was soothing me in a way I had no idea was possible.

It felt as if all my tension and past pains fading away until I was nothing more than happiness and pleasure. As I sat on the bed listening to the beautiful voice sing a melodious tune I barely took notice of Zecora as she untangled herself from the heap of destroyed objects and dusted herself down.

“What happened to me? For what I think happened I’m sure you won’t agree.” Zecora spoke with a much more levelled head and seemed to be unaffected by the potions that spilt over her.

“Those potions?” I stated while pointing towards her in a motion that showed her what she was dowsed in, before breaking out into an agitated and painful coughing fit from using my damaged vocal chords.

“Do not think this as a lie, but these were all filled with dye” Zecora rhymed again and I felt myself calm down.

“You umm… Got all weird when you smelt me for some reason and then tried to…” I looked away as a blush covered my cheeks again, a new coughing fit overtaking my body, I was sure that Zecora was blushing although it would be impossible to tell since her face was covered in red dye.

Fluttershy was close now, her singing stopped abruptly as the door began to slowly slide open and she stepped inside. “Hi Zeco-“ she stopped when she set her eyes on her friend who was covered in dye’s and immediately rushed over, dropping a basket of unknown contents onto the floor as she went.

Fluttershy was a flurry of fur as she desperately started wiping the dye out of Zecora’s fur, to no avail as she only seemed to smudge the coloured liquid further into her fur while getting some onto herself in the process. I had to admit it was rather amusing in a weird way to watch the two get tangled up in each other, Zecora trying to push Fluttershy away but Fluttershy wasn’t letting up and continued trying to clean her friend; like a baby and its mother.

I cleared my damaged throat and Fluttershy immediately stopped her forced cleaning to look in my direction as a shocked look covered her face, her cheeks beginning to burn as red as Zecora’s were stained. “Oh hey J-Jesse” she stuttered out while trying to hide behind her mane.

“Hey Fluttershy” I spoke with a smile that was hard to muster due to the pain that was still evident in my vocal chords from the scorching, I then noticed that she was completely unharmed from the previous incident that landed me in this situation; this pleased me greatly.

“I’m so glad” she squealed in a voice I’d never heard her use, it was full of joy, happiness and what seemed like protectiveness, she rushed over and pulled me into a hug which was awkward since I couldn’t move my legs so she had to lean right over; giving me a small peak at what was underneath her shirt and painting my face redder than Zecora’s.

As she pulled me into a hug I ran my hands around her body and rested them on her back just above the base of her wings, her breasts were pushing against my chest and she continued squealing about how happy she was that I was okay, I however took no notice and was entranced by the feel of her breasts again my chest regardless of the fabric they still felt heavenly.

“I feel as if we should leave as soon as possible” I blurted out while looking at Zecora whose eyes had seemingly glazed over and she stared at me with desire and an evil intent.

“Oh but we need to wait for you to heal up first” Fluttershy spoke, quickly shooting down my previous sentence.

“Rest here you can, your scent makes me a fan” Zecora rhymed with a look that made me uneasy for the oncoming night.

“Oh no I would rather fight Spike again than stay here for the night” I spoke while throwing myself from the bed, landing on my hands and throwing myself out the open door in a quick acrobatic move; hitting the ground with a loud thud followed by a small groan.

“God damn tree stump” I groaned in pain while rubbing my head with a pain filled expression.

“Oh dear” Fluttershy gasped outside of my vision still inside the hut, I heard a clatter of bottles and two pairs of hoof steps approach the doorway.

“I’m not staying for this” I groaned while using the tree stump as a little boost and flipping myself onto my hands before very awkwardly moving away from the house; using my hands as my feet while they just dangled in the air. I stared straight down at the ground and prayed for the best to happen, unluckily for me the best was Fluttershy crash tackling me onto the ground with a short squeal.

“Jesse” she started while moving her mane out of the way, “You have to recover and not go galloping through the woods on your hands” she huffed out.

“But Zecora tried to rape me when she smelled me” I complained while looking up and noticing how close Fluttershy actually was, mere inches from my own face, her scent wafting over me and tickling my senses.

“I’m sure she did no such thin-“ Fluttershy stopped mid-sentence and before I could say anything she leant in close and gave me a sniff, her eyelids fluttered as she inhaled and I couldn’t sworn I saw her bite her lip for a second. Opening her eyes she looked more sure of what she wanted to do and quickly began telling me what she would do “Okay then Jesse, but you are going to stay with me for the next few days until you recover, so I can umm Study you… Yes study you because you are a new animal for me to learn to care for.”

I was confused at Fluttershy’s sudden change of character and the smelling was very similar to how Zecora had done so earlier but deciding it was better than being put into Zecora’s lusty hands I agreed with a smile. Fluttershy helped me up and supported most of my weight which was amazing considering she didn’t look the type to be able to lift a full grown person; we began our arduous journey to where she lived, Fluttershy constantly whispering to herself just quiet enough so I couldn’t hear anything more than mumbles, quite normal for Fluttershy as I’d come to expect.

Fifteen minutes later we came up on a small cottage located at the top of a hill, the sounds of birds chirping and other woodland critters were present as the calm air was broken by a plethora of sounds, ranging from bird call to bear roars.

“Now Jesse you need to promise me that you’ll rest up and not exert yourself to much” Fluttershy spoke with dominance which was unlike her, “if you wouldn’t mind that is” nope she is still as timid and unsure as ever.

“Okay then Fluttershy, I promise” I spoke with mock enthusiasm as she led me inside, still supporting me completely by herself before dumping me onto a rather soft couch and a rather soft sleeping bunny.

Said Bunny quickly scampered out and started waving his or her hands around like mad, pointing at me and obviously talking some trash. “Oh Angel Bunny I’m so sorry” Fluttershy spoke before picking the small rabbit up and holding him close to her chest. “Jesse this is Angel Bunny” Fluttershy spoke while holding the rabbit out for me, “Isn’t he just the cutest little guy you’ve ever laid eyes on” Fluttershy almost squealed while tossing the bunny around in her arms, “Maybe aside from you” she whispered into her mane.

“Yeah well cute would be the first thought in my head but judging by his expression I’m thinking he isn’t too happy about me crashing here.”

“Oh he’s just sour because I left him here to go and save you from Spike”

“Oh yeah” I rubbed the back of my head gently, “Thanks for that.”

“No problem” Fluttershy responded with a smile that made my heart flutter “Now you need to rest” She spoke before pushing me down onto the couch and lingering over me for a second, her cheeks turning a slight shade of red.

I felt her grip tighten on me and start to push down harder on my body, forcing me into the couch as if I would assimilate with it and become the couch. “Okay Fluttershy you can stop now” I choked out before a pillow fell over my face and my vision went black.

The iron like grip released me after a few frightening seconds of blindness and I was left by myself laying on the couch with a pillow over my face. Laying there I realized just how tired I actually was with all the struggling today and the physical exertion that my body wasn’t ready for the moment I woke up, I allowed sleep to quickly overtake me.

My dreams were pretty barren, lacking life wherever I looked, unable to find anyone or anypony in my dreams I let a soft sigh escape my lips. “What a time to be dreaming lividly” I groaned out at the boring landscape that stretched as far as I could see, Closing my eyes I collapsed into a seated position and decided to wait my dreaming period out.


Waking up to complete darkness was something that scared me more than the void, which was freaky when considering the two. Anyway when I woke up I lost my cool and started flipping out about how I’d gone blind and how bad this was for Equestria, until the pillow was pulled from my face to reveal a smirking pair of figures; one a dragon and the other a buttery yellow Pegasus.

“Jesse” Fluttershy began while trying to keep back a laugh, “Spike wants to say something to you” I looked down at Spike who just shifted uneasily at the fact he was now the centre of attention.

“Hey Jesse” He began while refusing to make eye contact with me, “I’m sorry about losing my peace of mind just before.”

I was about to go off at the small dragon, letting everything that was pent up inside me loose. I however decided against this, mostly due to how small he was and Twilight telling me he was just a baby, so I just opted to stay silent.

Spike seemed stunned that I hadn’t accepted his apology “I know you’re probably pissed off at me because I tried to kill you.” Spike shifted again in the spot, “But I just wanted to tell you I wish it hadn’t happened and it only happened because you took Rarity from me.”

“Well its not okay” I spoke for the first time today and felt pain in my throat from the still aching burns. “And I never forced Rarity into anything, she came to me and it just happened, iur hearts intertwined into one. Just like with the others, it’s strange to say but I feel the same love for each of them with no one winning my affection.”

“Yeah” Spike agreed while diverting his gaze, “I wish I could be as cool headed and forgiving as you.”

“I never forgave you for this Spike.” I deadpanned, his shocked face was priceless. “But I’m willing to forget this happened as long as you don’t do it again.” I held out my hand for a shake.

Spike hesitantly took my hand and gave it a shake before speaking “Friends, although keep your lovey dovey stuff with Rarity to a minimum around me” he warned me.

“Just so you know Spike. Things can never be the same between us because of this, I may treat you like I did before but just remember that I will never forget this.” I spoke harshly.

Spike cringed at that “Yeah sure man.”

And just like that a mutual agreement/friendship was formed between the two of us.

If only it had been this easy earlier


It’s been a few days since I’d had my fight with Spike and things have returned to normal, although I wasn’t able to use my legs for the past four days and just spent them sitting on Fluttershy’s couch or dragging myself around; much to Fluttershy’s distress. But when I had gotten the use of my legs back it wasn’t without its own struggles, the lack of use for the past four days had made my legs weaker than usual and kept me couch ridden for most of the remaining days anyway.

On the fourth day however I’d refused to stay bedridden and against Fluttershy’s wishes I’d begun to help out around the small cottage in any way I possibly could, which mostly consisted of dishwashing and basic cleaning since I couldn’t take care of any animals since I had no experience other than a Labrador back on Earth. Although something strange has been happening since I’d started staying in Fluttershy’s cottage, Fluttershy has been staying very close to me, very very close actually.

On two nights I’d woken up to find her staring at me from the other couch and once I’d woken to find her actually sleeping on top of me, her wings were curled around me as a sort of blanket, I would’ve woken her but she just looked too damn adorable in that position that I had no choice but to let her continue to sleep on me.

Today was the seventh day of my recovery process and I was up and walking around just like normal, although I still sometimes walked with a slight limp, it would fade in time I was constantly reminded by Fluttershy

“Fluttershy, where do you want these carrots put?” I asked while picking a bag of carrots up and leaving it balancing on my shoulders.

“Just put them over in the cupboard where Angel’s other foods are” Fluttershy called from the opposite room, she sounded like she was struggling with whatever she was doing.

“I’ll come and help out once I’d put the rest of these food bags away” I called out to her while placing the full bag of carrots into the cupboard, behind the many already opened bags of carrots and other foods.

Once I’d shut and locked the cupboard so that no animals could get in and gorge themselves on food I made my way over to the room where Fluttershy was and opened the already cracked door. “You need any help?” I asked while stepping into the room and freezing when my eyes locked onto the mare in question and some of my clothes that she was holding tightly to her body, her face bright red and slightly sweaty from something she had been doing.

Fluttershy instantly stopped what she was doing and looked up at me in complete silence, then she released one of the loudest screams I’d ever heard, tossing a small bottle at me and hitting me directly in the head and sending me stumbling out of the room.

“Stay out Jesse… I’m just cleaning some clothes” Followed me out of the door as I saw stars flying around my head, the door slammed shut quickly afterwards to leave me in silence on the floor. It wasn’t long until the animals that Fluttershy cared for became curious and started to gather around me and my unmoving form.

Was she doing something… adult with my clothes? I wondered from the floor, Nah she wouldn’t be doing that, probably just trying them out to see if they fit I tried to convince myself that Fluttershy wasn’t like that but the more I thought about it the more it sunk in. Finding her staring at me while I slept, sleeping with me that one night, the way she’s been acting since I got here and how she instantly changed her mind back at Zecora’s hut.

“Fluttershy are you okay inside there?” I called out in a loud voice, frightening some of the animals as they scampered away from me and hid behind the larger animals.

Fluttershy’s voice came back in a breathless tone “Yeah… Jesse I’m fine… just need a minute” she managed to get out before going silent again.

All my instincts at this moment were screaming at me to just leave Fluttershy alone and not intrude, but me being me I stood up and knocked on the door gently “You know that we can just talk about this and maybe see what happens?”

The door shot open and an out of breath Fluttershy stood there “Really?”

I shrugged my shoulders while trying to ignore the small sweat she had worked up and the faint smell that came from the room, “Sure I’ll talk about it and better yet why don’t we call it a date?”

“Sure Jesse we can go straight awa…”

“What is it?” I asked while wondering why she had stopped mid-sentence.

“We can’t go out because I need to take care of Angel and all the other animals” Fluttershy’s ears drooped and she refused to look at me.

I placed a hand on my chin and began to ponder the predicament we were in, “Why don’t we just have a date here and I’ll help with Angel and the animals.”

“No offence Jesse” Fluttershy began “But you are horrible with animals.”

“Then teach me how to care for animals” I quickly put in.

Fluttershy seemed to think about this for a long seven seconds before deciding “Okay then Jesse, it’s a date…”

I noticed she was still glancing back into the room and let a happy sigh out, “Go ahead” I spoke and was met with the door slamming in my face.

“Just be a minute.” She sang from inside.

“The things I do for you guys” I sighed while walking away and collapsing onto the couch.


A few hours later I found myself holding an armful of food for various animals, said various animals were grouped around me and trying to get at the food. “I’m a damn warrior not a bloody pet carer.” I spoke in a huff; my eyes set onto Fluttershy and took notice of how happy she seemed while watching me.

“you’re doing great, now just set the food out for each animal to eat.” Fluttershy called over the various animal sounds which filled my ears. I tried to do my best and distribute the food around the bowls and various feeding contraptions placed throughout the yard but found it incredibly hard since animals kept clinging onto my clothing and dragging me down.

“This is why I’m a dog person” I groaned after setting the last bit of food down, a trio of hungry squirrels going to town on it as soon as it was out of my arms. I heard Fluttershy mutter something that sounded strangely like “I wish I was your pony” but I ignored it.

As I stood up and looked over all I had done in the past hour I was a little proud of myself, I’d fed a plethora of animals and only came close to being mauled by a bear twice. “Jesse!” Fluttershy called from the door to the house.

I smiled happily and began to trek my way towards the house, a stupid smile plastered onto my face. “Although it was hard I still feel pleased about feeding all these animals.” I spoke once I reached the house and followed Fluttershy inside the building.

“Yes. It ummm really is quite fun once you get used to it.” Fluttershy responded from in front of me, she lead me towards the kitchen where a lovely dinner had been placed out for both of us. “I prepared dinner for our, date.”

“Thanks a bunch Fluttershy.” I smiled happily while pulling out a chair for her once we’d reached the table, she took it and sat down happily; I sat at the other chair which was just across the small table and smiled. She however didn’t and picked her chair up, moving it around so she was sitting on the same side of the small table; rubbing up against my body from the lack of distance we had.

“Fluttershy?” I asked while looking at her, “Why are you so close?”

“Just wanted to be closer to the human who will take my virginity.” Fluttershy answered without hesitation.

If I had been drinking something I would’ve spit it out at that instant, my eyes set to the mare and I stood from the table “Are you okay Fluttershy?”

“Oh I’m fine, but I’ll be much better with you inside me” She had a glint in her eyes as her wings spread and she leapt at me.

“mares be tripping yo”

Fleeing from the buttery mare I managed to dodge her for quite some time until she had me cornered, it was part of a plan I’d made up on the fly however; we were in front of the laundry room door.

She launched at me in triumph and I opened the door to the laundry room, allowing her to miss me and fly straight into the room; shutting and locking the door I waited outside for her to calm down.

I however didn’t have to wait long since Twilight burst into the house with a worried look on her face. “Jesse! Are you okay?” she asked while racing towards me.

“Yeah I’m fine Twilight” I smiled while pecking her on the cheek “Don’t know what’s happening to Fluttershy though.”

Twilight seemed relieved I was okay and quickly took notice of the banging on the door “Fluttershy is in heat right now.”

This time I got up from the door, went to the faucet got myself a glass of water; walked over to Twilight and sat down. Drinking the water I Immediately spat it out in shock, “She’s in heat?”

“All Pony Ville mares are in heat at the moment, it’s just that most of us have pills to prevent the effects of it reaching us and driving us mad; like poor Fluttershy.” Twilight answered solemnly.

“So can you give her a pill or something?” I asked as the banging on the door began to cease.

“I can give her a pill.” Twilight beamed with pride and produced the pill from her pocket “Slide this under the door and she should do the rest.”

“Okay thanks Twilight” I answered happily and kissed her gently, “I’ll see you and the girls in the next few days.”

“You most definitely will mister.” Twilight spoke as she stood, “Also be a little gentle with Fluttershy.” Twilight disappeared after speaking this and I heard nothing more from her for the rest of the night, it did raise questions though; why didn’t she just teleport here first and not run?

Sliding the pill under the door I waited for a few minutes until Fluttershy’s banging ceased completely and she tried to call out apologies to me, profusely trying to make it up to me by promising me anything she can.

I sighed loudly as I stood to unlock the door, “This is going to be a long one.” I unlocked the door and was immediately tackled by a buttery hug.

“A very very long one

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