Larger than Life

by Agai_Lazen

First published January 1st, 1970 00:00

Twilight Sparkle is enjoying a nice night of stargazing, when she suddenly sees a strange object fall from the sky and into the Everfree Forest. When she gathers the rest of the Mane 6 to investigate the next morning, they see a crash site, and mysteriously large, sqare footprints. This is indeed a visitor from the stars.

This visitor has a tragic past, which continues to haunt him in more than one way as these memories threaten Equestria's quaint peace.

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Massive and massively-overdue thanks to WolfyHige for proofreading and pre-reading the story.

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I am rewriting Larger Than Life. I just can't take the current "Larger Than Life" story seriously anymore, so I'm rewriting it for the following reasons:

1) There was going to be a point where the ponies experience the visitor's world through his memories. This created a ton of problems because I wrote it out like a complete experience despite how incomplete his knowledge is supposed to be.

2) The main villain is supposed to be another visitor from the same world. Particularly from the slums of their world. The first problem is that it sounds too much like Megatron's backstory from Transformers, and the second problem is that a rich hero versus a poor villain is in really bad taste. The rewrite is necessary because there are lots of hints to the main character's aristocrat status.

3) There are tons upon tons of grammatical errors and typos that need to be corrected in the first chapter.

4) I need to reestablish my feel of the writing style I gave this story.

I hope you understand.