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What Am I Doing Right?

by OC Beats
He wants to be evil, he tries to be evil and bad, but for some reason he can't. Things just get better and it makes him even madder than before. He tries to kidnap Celestia, but it seems like he can't even do that right.

A stallion who tries to be the bad guy, spends all his time trying and failing to succeed. He tries to do bad deeds but when he does, it makes things better than before and it drives him crazy and mad! He goes as far as to kidnap Princess Celestia, but somehow he messes that up. See how this stallion struggles through his pitiful life.

A big thank you and shout out to the author who helped me and gave me the idea, Follow Focus.. Thank you Follow Focus!

Teen
Complete
Sex
Random
Dark
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Comedy
 
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2130 words: Estimated 11 minutes to read

2 Chapters:

  1. How Could This Have Happened? 2014-04-11 16:33:05 UTC
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  2. A Simple Plan With A Bad Outcome 2014-04-20 01:37:04 UTC
    1003