Chaos Reborn: The Corruption of Harmony

by Slick_Prime

Chapter 11: Mommy Loves You

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Chapter 11: Mommy Loves You

Inside the Tardis, there was significantly more space that the outside would physically allow. The Doctor pulled out his sonic screw driver and sealed the door behind them. Twilight was still too frightened and surprised from the events outside to respond to her surroundings. Whooves shook Twilight, trying to bring her back to some level of rationality so he could explain.

“Twilight! Snap out of it, we don’t have time for this!”
The Doctor yelled as he slapped her once in the face with his hoof.

Twilight finally pulled herself together. She held her face as she looked around.

“What…is this place?”
She asked, finally realizing the spatial impossibility of the room they were currently in.

“I guess you’ve figured out by now that I’m not just a simple clock maker. I’m not sure how much time we have, so I’m going to have to give you the quick version. Please sit down and I’ll explain.”

Twilight complied and took a seat as the Doctor began reveal his origins to the confused purple mare.


Outside the Tardis, Derpy and Discordia were at a standoff.

Discordia made the first move, pointing forward with her hoof, as the other five mares attacked all at once. Pinkamina lunged at Derpy with a knife, but the gray pegasus leapt out of the way with just enough time to connect her back hoof with Jappleack’s throat, crushing her trachea in the process. Jappleack fell to the ground holding her neck as she died gasping for air.

Futashy managed to head-butt Derpy in the side, causing her to lose her balance momentarily as Rainbow Dash tried to fly directly at her for a high speed kick to the head. The armored pegasus ducked just enough to have the bladed crest of her helmet to split the undead mare open from chest to flank. Dash crashed into the wall, panicking momentarily as she desperately tried to hold her organs in. Looking down, she remembered her zombified state as nothing but dried blood and cotton came out. She got up to her feet and watched, waiting for another opportunity to attack.

The gray and blond mare was giving it her best as she took on multiple opponents at once. Derpy caught Futashy by the wing, mid-flight, with her mouth while blocking Pinkamina’s knife slash with her hoof. She flung Futashy into the pink pony knocking them both into a wall. Futashy yelped in pain, as Pinkamina pushed her off, sliding the yellow pegasus off of her knife and getting it’s genitals out of her face.

“Ewwww, gross! You’re lucky my mouth wasn’t open!” Pinkamina said as she got back on her hooves

Derpy panted, exhausted from the fight. Dash saw this as the chance to make her move, and began to charge from behind, when suddenly Rarity called out to her
“Stop Rainbow Dash!” The undead pegusus skidded to a halt to see what Rarity had to say.

The scarred white unicorn smiled and looked over to Derpy.
“Mommy’s got this one.”
Rarity’s left eye flooded with a tiny sea of black as her pupil turned bright white. She stood up on two legs and revealed her underside. Blood poured from between her legs, and her abdomen began to split open. From within the cavity peeked out a blood covered Pinkamina doll.

Derpy recoiled, in and disgust and fear.

It crawled half way out, revealing razor sharp claws on each hoof slicing trough it's fabric skin. Its button eyes made contact with the pegusus, as its mouth split open at the stitching, letting out a sickening hiss as it tore free and revealed exposed teeth and a long, thin tongue.

Derpy was appalled by the sight she’d just seen and stood there for a moment, unsure of what to do.

Rarity looked down at the creature escaping from her body.
“Mommy loves you, Opal. Make me proud.”

The doll turned and looked back at her.
“I love you too, Mommy.” It said in unnatural blend of multiple voices of various genders and ages before turning back to its opponent.

This threw the Derpy off guard. She was stunned, as she remembered her own daughter in that moment. Tears filled her eyes once again, and she resumed a fighting stance. Derpy lunged first, hoping to catch the blood soaked doll in the face, but Opal dodged under and around. Derpy’s hoof connected with Rarity’s face instead, but at the same time, Opal has taken the opportunity to bury her claws deep into the gray mare’s spine, severing it in multiple locations. They both fell to the ground, but only Rarity got back up.

Derpy could no longer feel her back legs. She looked up to see Discordia and the slender pony approaching as Rarity stepped aside licking the blood from her busted lip as the monstrous doll retracted back into her waist.

With her front hooves, Derpy tried to pull herself up and fight, but didn’t have the strength.

Discordia looked down at the broken pony.
“Ah ah ah, let me help you with that.” She taunted as she lifted Derpy up off the ground with her magic. Derpy’s back legs dangled below as she struggled with with her front hooves to fight whatever invisible force was causing the choking sensation around her neck.

Pinkamina walked over to Discordia’s side.
“Can I do the honors?” She asked with a grin.
“I want to make this slow and painful. You know, have some fun with her.”

“I was going to give her to our tall friend here,” Discordia said with amusement
“but I supposed you can have this one.”

Pinkamina walked over with a big smile on her face to the suspended pegasus, and showed her the knife.
“Now I’m gonna start down low and I want you to tell me when it begins to hurt.”
She buried the knife into Derpy’s flank, but the pegasus felt nothing.

“Hmmm… Looks like I’m gonna have to cut a little higher.”
Pinkamina said as she slowly dragged the knife up her leg .

“She’s had enough!” Rainbow Dash called out, drawing everypony’s attention.

Pinkamina peeked over to her.
“What was that, Dashie?”

“I said she’s had enough. Look, she’s defeated. We still need to get Twilight. There’s no need to torture her like this!”

Pinkamina looked over to Discordia, awaiting orders on how to proceed.

Discordia looked back at the pink pony, nodded her head.
“Continue.”
She then focused her attention to Dash.
“I need to have a word with our colorful friend.”

Pinkamina proceeded to torture Derpy as the purple unicorn walked over to rainbow maned corpse, whipping open her bat like wings in a display of power. Dash cowered in fear.

“Oh Rainbow Dash, what am I going to do with you?” Discordia frowned in disappointment.
“I’ve been so generous with you, giving you life once more and a second chance to prove yourself. But it seems you’ve gone soft on me.”

“W-What are you talking about? I’m…I’m as tough as ever. Even more so than before! See?”
Dash pointed to the gaping cut on her underside.
“Nothing can stop me.”

“Really now… I think you know what I mean. I can’t let you compromise everything we’ve been working on, just because you decided to start having a heart.”
The purple unicorn turned to Rarity.
“What do you think we should do with her?”

“Well, I can’t say I’ve really liked the extra attention she’s always gotten from my dear Pinkamina. I think having her gone will just bring this team closer as a whole.”
Rarity walked over to her friend who was focused on torturing Derpy.
“What do you think, Pinkamina?” She placed a hoof on Pinkamina’s shoulder. Instinctively, the pink pony turned around and buried the knife into the unicorn’s hoof, causing her to shiver with the most delightful pain.

“Oops. Sorry Rarity. You can’t sneak up on me like that. I'm in the zone.”

“Nothing to be sorry for, darling.”
Rarity pulled out the knife, and gave it back to Pinkamina
“You know how much I love it when you play rough with me…”

Pinkamina blushed.

"...but back to the task at hand. What do you think we should do with Rainbow Dash?”

Pinkamina waved her hoof dismissively.
“Oh, I don’t care. Killing her is no fun anymore. Besides this Rainbow Dash is nothing like my Dashie back home was.”
She turned back to Derpy and sliced open her throat, finishing the pegasus off.
“I’m bored with this."
She said, turning around to face the tall faceless pony.
“Hey Slendy, you wanna go back through town pick off more kids?”

The slender pony did not move or acknowledge Pinkamina in any way.

“Awe, you’re no fun sometimes.” Pinkamina said with a pout.

Rainbow couldn’t take it anymore. She jumped in the air and took flight, trying glide overhead and out the door. The speedy pegasus was almost free when, suddenly, she heard a loud crack, followed by a rip as she fell to the ground just outside of the clock shop. She turned around to find her wing had been torn off by one of the slender pony’s tendrils. He pulled it inside of himself and stepped aside, as Discordia dropped Derpy’s body to the ground and walked up to Dash.

“It seems I no longer require your services Rainbow Dash. You’ve proven that you can’t be trusted. I’m afraid I’ll have to take back my gift.”

“Please…don’t” The de-winged blue mare pleaded.

“You know the rules. You failed, Rainbow Dash, and just like your Cloudsdale, we only have room for winners.”

Discordia’s horn zapped living corpse, absorbing her life force energy. Dash writhed in pain as she could feel the last of her strength being sucked from her body.
“Oh and one last thing, Rainbow Dash...Say hi to Scootaloo for me."

Rainbow Dash’s pale fogged over eyes filled with tears as the last thoughts that went through her mind were the haunting memories of her murdering her own adopted sister. The dying blue pegasus let out one final scream of mental and physical anguish, then fell limp to the ground.

Discordia turned to the two remaining girls, then looked to the Tardis.
“Well, now that that’s over with, how about we go finish off the Element of Magic and her friend, the Time Lord.”

Fearing for their lives Pinkamina and Rarity quickly stepped over the remains of Derpy and got to work trying to pry open the door.

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