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by Rainbow l Dash

Chapter 4-Neighagra Falls [latest update 7/8-COMPLETE]

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Chapter 4


Current stats: [3-1 book-20][4-3 flowers-40][2-1 map-10][4-20 cupcakes | 1 coffee bean-30][3-1 coffee bean-20][2- -0]


"...'What was that about.' "

"I,...I..."

"Ohhh. So Gilda must've told them all about..."

"About what?"


New Characters: Gilda, Griffons, CMC


Current stats: [3-1 book-20][4-3 flowers-40][2-1 map-10][4-20 cupcakes | 1 coffee bean-30][3-1 coffee bean-20][2- -0]


"Us Ponies, just us, duh. I mean, that's not bad, that's cool. We would've been ripped to shreds if Gilda didn't."

"Well, that's good to know, but let's look at the bigger problem. The train is still back there, and the giant muffin blew up into tiny muffins. Now you tell me, how are we supposed to get to Vanhoover?" The Mane 6 couldn't come up with any good ideas, so they all decided to walk. Applejack pulled out the main map of Equestria, and the Mane 6 gathered around.



They were in the middle of Unicorn Range, about one fourth of the way through. Rainbow Dash lied down on the ground of exhaustion, and the others planned on what they were going to come across, mostly with Twilight. After a few ten minutes, they started to walk up the mountain pass. The trail looked like it was endless, but they could see a few houses in the distance, and that was part of their hope. They had packed everything they needed, not counting the cupcakes. Rainbow Dash hated being so slow, so she flew forward to see the clearing. There were a few shacks, not much like Vanhoover. She groaned again, and flew back to share the news. * "Everypony Jaw Drop!" * So they set up "camp" at the small town, using Twilight's alicorn magic, while Rarity was trying to find a more comfortable and less dirty place, and they stayed for the night.


Twilight got: -10 Mana Points +20 Experience Points


Current stats: [3-1 book-20][4-3 flowers-40][2-1 map-10][4-20 cupcakes | 1 coffee bean-30][3-1 coffee bean-20][2- -0]


The next morning, Celestia's sun was shining up high in the sky, and the Mane 6 were all awake, ready to go on another walk. The mountain pass was more narrow this time, with jagged edges protruding the "canyon". They finally rose up from the mountains after walking for thr-

"House!"

"So?"

"House! That's good!"

"What's so good about it? And what are you girls looking a- WOAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH"

"See, y'all don' pay attention t' da road, nut even whut's in front. woahhhhhhhhhh is da first thing ya should bih hearing right now."

"She's right, and if this was a story on Fimfiction.net, then-"

"What's Fimfiction.net?"

"What ever. -then we wouldn't be seeing the train over there."

"WHAT TRAIN"

"That tra- Wait what?"

The train pulled up to the Mane 6, and the train pony was on there, like before.


Twilight got: -All Mana Points +100 Mana Points


Current stats: [3-1 book-20][4-3 flowers-40][2-1 map-10][4-20 cupcakes | 1 coffee bean-30][3-1 coffee bean-20][2- -0]


"All aboard. I fixed the train, thanks to the muffin. No muffin, and I would've finished it way later. Now get on! We have a city to get to."

The Mane 6 quickly got on, and went off on the Ponyville Express, Deluxe. When they got to Vanhoover, only 2 beans were ready to be harvested.


Twilight got: +1 coffee bean +1 level LEVEL UP! +10 bits | Rarity got: +1 coffee bean +1 level LEVEL UP! +10 bits


Current stats: [4-1 book | 1 coffee bean-30][5-3 flowers | 1 coffee bean-50][2-1 map-10][4-20 cupcakes | 1 coffee bean-30][3-1 coffee bean-20][3-1 coffee bean-20]


"Now, we only need one more bean to finish our daily drink. But where can we find it? Also, we need more for the coffee shop."

"We might as well go to Neigharga Falls for the remaining beans."

"All aboard, Again!"

The train went over a canyon bridge, and they could see the forest right up ahead. The train shuddered.

"What's wrong? Is something wrong with the train again?"

"I'm pretty sure there's nothing wring with the train. Maybe the bridge is a bit bumpy."

"Wut's wrong with th' bridge? Ah don't see no nutin'. Maybe it's ta train after al- What in carnation?" Applejack was brought to attention by the sound of wood cracking- Maybe the train floor was cracking? She thought.

The train was speeding over a bridge, with the bridge emitting cracking sounds. Twilight: O_O

"I can't stop the train! The train's too fast for lil' ol' Tim.(The brake) Plus, the train can't go backward! It's the Ponyville Express, after all! Not good ol' Canter."


DUN DUN DUN


"OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG O_O O_O O_O O_O O_O HELPPPPPP"

"We have to do something! My telekinesis won't help, but Trixie's will, but she isn't here. Rarity?"

"Ready. Of course. You are going to tell me to use that silly spell of mine, aren't you?"

"Nonononononono-no. Just your regular special telekinesis."

"Ok dear, I shall."

"A one, a two, a one, two, three, G-BZZZZZXCHINGT-BZZZZZZZZZXCHINGT-FOOOOOOOOM"

*Princess Twilight Sparkle's Alicorn Magic + Rarity's Unicorn Magic Combining Sound above*

*Teleported train off bridge before it collapsed and fell into deep dark abyss*

"Phew" "Phew"


Twilight got: -60 Mana Points | Rarity got: -40 Mana Points


Current stats: [4-1 book | 1 coffee bean-30][5-3 flowers | 1 coffee bean-50][2-1 map-10][4-20 cupcakes | 1 coffee bean-30][3-1 coffee bean-20][3-1 coffee bean-20]


"That was close."

"Be glad we didn' fall."

The train teleported to a desert in the middle of nowhere. Everypony got out, alarmed and panicked by the exterior sight.

"A desert. Really, Twilight? A desert?"

"Sorry, I was just focusing on to get us off the bridge, but not where we would go. Should I teleport us to Ponyville, and teleport to Neighagra Falls?"

"Sure, fine, do what ever ya want. Just get me back to what we were supposed to be doing."

"Alright, ready? A one, a two, and a one, two, three, G- BZZZZZZZZZZZZXCHINGT-BZZZZZZXCHINGT-FOOOOOOOooooo..."

"It didn't work. We don't have enough strength..."


Twilight got: -60 Mana Points-Current Mana: -20/100 | Rarity got: -40 Mana Points-Current Mana: 20/100


Mane 6 got: - 1 x Twilight>Exhausted


Current stats: [4>EXHAUSTED-1 book | 1 coffee bean-30][5>TIRED-3 flowers | 1 coffee bean-50][2-1 map-10][4-20 cupcakes | 1 coffee bean-30][3-1 coffee bean-20][3-1 coffee bean-20]


Twilight fell to the ground immediately, and closed her eyes.

"Twilight!"

The Mane 6 rushed over to Twilight's body, and cried.

"Ah should've let ya git' ba'k ta yur homes when ya got yur beans. Then nun o' ya'll would've git' hurt. She needs t' rest now. Ya to', Rare."

Twilight&Rarity +.5 Mana

"Applejack? Darling, she is how we got so far! If she weren't here, we wouldn't be here. We would always be with our best buddies."

Twilight&Rarity +.5 Mana

"Yur right."


Later at Neighagra Falls


"Neighagra Falls. So beautiful, and-"

"Snap Outta it! We've got to find 2 more beans, one to wake up Twilight!"

"Alright. Here we go."

Rarity looked amongst the sides of the dirt path, which she highly disliked. She found one with her item finding ability, and lifted it up.

"I found one!"

"Yes! Now quick, send it to Twilight!"

"Alright. nuuuuuuhhhhh"

bzzzzzzztCHING - POOF


The coffee bean appeared out of nowhere, and landed on Twilight's head. Plip-Plip


"Really? She can't drink it. Somepony has to help her!"

bzzzzztCHING - POOF

1 second later

bzzzzztCHING - POOF

"There! Now, she's up, and awake!"

Twilight appeared next to Rarity, looking good as ever.


Twilight got: +1 x coffee bean +1 level LEVEL UP! +10 bits +10 relationship friendship points +120 recharged Mana Points


Current stats: [5-1 book | 2 coffee beans-40][5-3 flowers | 1 coffee bean-50][2-1 map-10][4-20 cupcakes | 1 coffee bean-30][3-1 coffee bean-20][3-1 coffee bean-20]


"Now we only have 1 more bean to find, and a few more to give!"


*My Little Pony End Theme Song*


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