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by Rainbow l Dash

Chapter 5-Sweetie Belle>Revising and Rewriting Stages>Draft4 [latest update 7/9-WiP]

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Chapter 5-Sweetie Belle


Current stats: [5-1 book | 2 coffee beans-40][5-3 flowers | 1 coffee bean-50][2-1 map-10][4-20 cupcakes | 1 coffee bean-30][3-1 coffee bean-20][3-1 coffee bean-20]


"Are you kidding me? We've been walking for like, I dunno. Pinks, I'd rather be sitting here."

"Nopey Dopey Lokey! Not if it's for coffee beans. Isn't that right, girls?"

"Well, I suppose so. I never thought coffee beans are this important to us..."

"Ah think so too. If ah didn' had no coffe beans, ah wouldn't had don' work dat fast."

"Oh Applejack, you drink coffee too? I mean, before work? For a boost?"

"Ah sure do. Git's meh ah fresh start in the mornin' al' right. Can't even send Apple Bloom to school with that pah on mah back. Big Mac carrys sum, but ah carry lots, even though he sure is ah big an' strong one."

"Wow, so you sure do work a lot! Don't you take some breaks?"

"Ah do. Ah usually take sum cider out o' th' barrels. They sure last so long. But mostly, Ah spend the time with you girls, mah friends."


"Ah don' know 'bout th's girls, bu' Ah think we're outta luck. We've found five beans so far, bu' nutin' after This much time. Ah see the sun settin' already. We have t' hurry! Celestia iz going t' let Luna raise th' moon fur nightfall.

"I suppose you're right. I'll never be standing on this plate ever again!"

"What plate? This is dirt. Dirt. Paved. Road. In the middle of- Wait where are we? Get out the map again."

"Here ya ar', Twi. The whole map o' Equestria. Old an' grand. Take a look, and tell us where we ar'."



"Well?"

Twilight looked over the folded and aged map, admiring its freshly printed golden scroll paper edges, but she knew that she had no time for that. She turned over to the legend and POI side, with the Celestia Seal printed at the bottom right edge, with the ink still fresh. Hmmm. They somehow got in the middle of-

"Wha? Ah thought we were halfway int' Unicorn Range, How'd we git t' Neighagra Falls? Tis' ain't right."

"Something's not right here. Fluttershy, do you remember what happened?"

"We were headed through Unicorn Range, and you two girls teleported us somewhere. It was probably... Dodge Jun-"

"Maybe someplace near Neighagra Falls? 'cause we're here right now. Ya know, I could be circling a view right now."

"Ah think you could. It's pretty easy for ya to fly really fast anyways. Why don' ya git up there and give us uh hand?"

"Yeah, sure whatever. I'll just go take a look."

With that, Rainbow Dash flew up high into the sky and raised a hoof to shield herself from the evening sunlight.