Love at First Sight

by jesusfreak112
It's not very good--I wrote it for a 30-minute challenge when I first started getting into the fandom. I hope it's alright; it's my first MLP fic. I'm listing this as finished but if you have any feedback or ideas I could make it

Well, again, I'm open to suggestions if you'd like me to make the story longer or change it a bit, and constructive criticism is always appreciated. I don't feel very confident in the story, but I don't know if I can trust my opinion on something I've written. This was posted to a blog a while ago as well.

The idea is basically an AU where Fluttershy is only really friends with Twilight and maybe Applejack (though not mentioned here), of the mane six. (*Cough* I haven't seen very many episodes yet. I've seen maybe ten, but my mom got rid of Netflix. I think I can watch on Hulu, though.)

This is based off a song I have stuck in my head—bonus points if you can figure out what song!

Warnings: (Unrequited?) Flutterpie, insinuation of a transgender pony. Don’t want to offend or trigger anyone :)

Everyone
Complete
Slice of Life
Alternate Universe
Romance
 

471 words: Estimated 2 minutes to read

1 Chapter:

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