image: a cloud city with a tower upon a high spur of the clouds
text: high above the Everfree forest
the images zoom in upon the high tower panel by panel
when at the highest zoom, there is a single "beat panel" pause, and then an explosion erupts from one of the windows
image: a pegasus stallion falls, trailing smoke behind him. he falls into a vortex of clouds and into the Everfree forest
he falls down down down, and then lands with an enormous thud and explosion of dust and smoke on the forest floor. the contrail slowly dissipates in the wind, and blows away, along with the explosion of particulates, leaving a silent scene
text: thank you for reading dear viewers
image: a crater with steam and dust rising out of it
text: a few hours later
image: a pegasus with a desaturated deep purple coat (Furyheart), and a deep red mane pulls himself weakly out of the crater. he collapses on the ground
image: pure black with a tumblr message
text: what is your earliest memory
image: forest undergrowth, blurry, and through part opened eyes
text: what is your earliest memory
the eyes blink, the image of undergrowth becomes clearer.
text:what is your earliest memory
image: panned out view of the pegasus in the forest. a robot floats in front of him
robot: what is your earliest memory
pegasus: shhhh shhhh sh sh, hold on... shut the hell up
beat panel
pegasus: ahh, that's better
the pegasus rights himself and questions the robot, who explains that he is tumblrtron X-thousand and is here to assist him with all his tumblr needs (did i mention this was the script for my ask-furyheart.tumblr.com? cause it is)
the pegasus answers a few asks in a pithy and sardonic manner (also establishes that he has no memory of the pre explosion times)
image: nighttime; several changeling drones strafe the canopy of the everfree forest, looking angry as hell
image: a changeling new queen (like a young chrysalis) stumbles through the brush and into a clearing. she spends a panel sitting on her rump and looking forlorn when she notices someone talking in the clearing.
text (from between trees): robotron, i demand that you begin making sense at once
image: the changeling new queen looks through a bush and some vines at Furyheart berating tumblrtron. she grins.
text: changeling (laughing to self): heh huh hoooo- easy prey
image: her horn glows, the pegasus has a brief glimmer in his eyes, and she is surrounded by a shimmering green light as her body shreds into a new form
image: Furyheart is arguing with the tumblrtronxthousand
text: changeling off screen: my love! thank goodness i've found you!
image: Furyheart and tumblrtronxthousand look at the 'camera' with blank expressions.
text: Furyheart: uh... what?
changeling: my love, it's me, i've been lost, i'm so glad i found you.
Furyheart: do i know you?
changeling: don't you remember me?
Furyheart: should i?
changeling: well of course (thinking: my magic should make you recognize me as whoever you love most... unless)
image: panned out view of the changeling, completely unchanged from her original appearance
text: changeling: oh balls
Furyheart: hold on! do you know who i am?
possibly a beat panel, image: the changeling gets the ol' lightbulb look on her face
text: changeling: yes of course my darling. what happened to you?
Furyheart: i don't remember. i just woke up to this tronbot harassing me
tumblrtronxthousand: danger danger
changeling: oh just ignore that.. thing. we have each other, that's all we need. nopony else.
images: they draw close, Furyheart is enthralled. they loom over the inevitable kiss for a panel too long. both equines recoil as a crossbow bolt whizzes between them and lodges with a shudder in a tree.
text: shove off you parasite!
image: the changeling hisses and runs, as three ponies (two earth ponies and a unicorn) enter the clearing.
text: furyheart: no wait
image: the changeling vanishes leaving a hopeless looking furyheart
image: the three ponies rush around furyheart and form a wall
text: pony: and stay gone!
image: the ponies turn to furyheart
text: unicorn: good thing we saved you when we did, eh mac?
image: furyheart is speechless for a panel
text: honestly i'm not too sure
furyheart concept outline
for starters, this is an outline, and details the extended plot of the comic, even if you intend to read only the script of furyheart and not wait for me to get off my ass and draw the comic, this is heavily spoiler oriented.
if you're willing to get things completely out of context then go ahead and continue
furyheart is thrown from the tower
meets tumblrtron
meets changeling, who is being chased by her own kind
changeling's powers don't work, but she finds a compromise
a group of ponies rescue furyheart
after some talking one of them notices a thing on his forehead
brushes at it, and it falls off, a transparent tube
everypony looks up at the horn now visible on furyheart's forehead, he screams
after some study, the unicorn speculates that it is in fact a pocket universe
the unicorn reaches in. after a moment he starts struggling to take off the tube of reality, but cannot, and begins screaming
he pulls out the bloody stump where his hoof used to be, and collapses from the pain
what happened? expansion of the miniverse pulled his hoof apart
that's all the short term stuff i have so far
in the long run, eventually everypony will discover that fury heart is from a long line of alicorns. he would have been in line as leader of his clan, had his cousin Little Boot (aka Caligula for those who don't know latin [no for real, Google Caligula if you don't understand]) not totally destroyed his face up in the tower on the clouds.
Furyheart's other cousin Frozenheart is hunting for him. this is a pseudo penance for her being related to Furyheart, to prove that she is more loyal to the clan's leadership than her close relative, and the way things "ought to be"
meanwhile Little Boot is absolutely tormenting the rest of his clan, and that's about all i've got at the moment