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The Kingpin

by ocalhoun
Private Investigator Twilight Sparkle takes on the toughest case of her career.

Twilight was slowly coming to grips with the fact that her side-job of 'Ponyville Private Investigator' was never going to pan out. Now, though, the biggest whodunit of her unimpressive career falls into her lap. With the dubious 'help' of her assistant, Pinkie Pie, she sets out to solve one last mystery.

Contest: The first person to correctly guess the identity of the Kingpin in the comments wins a one-shot fanfic commission by me! (Won by jeray2000, See the completed story.)

A comedy-mystery full of suspense and fun Twilight vs. Pinkie bickering! Minds will be blown. Chapter lengths may be erratic and sometimes very short, but I will be adding two chapters every day. (24 chapters and 14,800 words total.)

Proofreading by RaylanKrios.

Everyone
Complete
Comedy
Adventure
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Mystery
 
CPTM

14676 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read
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24 Chapters:

  1. A New Case 2014-07-14 08:07:51 UTC
    561
  2. A New Partner 2014-07-14 08:09:13 UTC
    791
  3. The Dark Underbelly 2014-09-01 15:06:40 UTC
    1541
  4. Tension Runs Thick 2014-09-01 15:06:44 UTC
    370
  5. Close Threat 2014-09-02 17:26:23 UTC
    382
  6. Regroup 2014-09-02 17:26:28 UTC
    466
  7. The Recruiting of a Spy 2014-09-03 16:19:36 UTC
    546
  8. A New Direction 2014-09-03 16:19:39 UTC
    337
  9. Unwelcome 2014-09-04 16:42:40 UTC
    799
  10. A Search Party 2014-09-04 16:42:44 UTC
    516
  11. A Rug is a Rug 2014-09-05 16:36:40 UTC
    245
  12. Accusations 2014-09-05 16:36:52 UTC
    950
  13. Baiting the Trap 2014-09-06 16:11:45 UTC
    490
  14. Springing the Trap 2014-09-06 16:12:53 UTC
    248
  15. Springing the Trap Again 2014-09-08 17:22:29 UTC
    307
  16. Asking Nicely 2014-09-08 17:22:32 UTC
    875
  17. A Re-do 2014-09-10 16:46:40 UTC
    1794
  18. A Naked Pony 2014-09-10 16:46:43 UTC
    552
  19. Mud Pie 2014-09-12 17:50:32 UTC
    215
  20. Baby Blues 2014-09-12 17:50:40 UTC
    518
  21. The Shooting 2014-09-14 06:17:58 UTC
    763
  22. Backup 2014-09-14 06:18:09 UTC
    292
  23. A Useless Needle 2014-09-14 16:49:48 UTC
    195
  24. Combat in the Round 2014-09-14 16:49:59 UTC
    923