Ponies and griffons are at war, and the griffons are winning because they have all sorts of guns and technology. So the ponies get a human soldier from Iraq to help them in their war. But he doesn't want to fight because he murdered women and children, so the ponies have to teach him the necessities of war to make him fight for them. In the end, every griffon is sent to special schools to teach them the magic of friendship. The soldier goes back to Iraq and is a hero to protect the people of the United States.

Not an oc self-insert! My First story, please give feedback!!!!!!!! English is not my language, it hard to write.

Thank to shortskirtsandexplosions and regidar for help