The fallView OnlineFall to EquestriaThe fallI was doing my ordinary 2:00 spiritual walk to forget the chaos of the world. I was so concentrated on my music of my ipod that I forgot to look where I was going. I felt my right foot step into nothing. By the instability I fell and by reflex I tried to transfer the impact of the fall on my hands but I was unable to do so. I saw that I was falling in a deep black hole surrounded by a pink glow. Falling in that dark hole felt more like floating I didn’t felt the impact of the air hitting my face. I suddenly saw a light under me and seeing it coming closer made me realise that I was falling very fast. Wen I past the light I was blind by the sudden change of luminosity that I didn’t see the ground and by the impact knock me out cold. Wen I woke up my head felt like a watermelon about to explode so I assumed that I took the fall head first. Slightly in daze I analysed my surrounding. It seems that I was in the middle of a forest and it was night time. I search around me trying to find out where I was. I saw a piece of paper on the ground. I grab and look at it, there were a blue pony on it and above her writing (The great and powerful Trixie). I put the piece of paper in my pocket and started walking in the forest. I walked for a couple hours and i didn’t find anything. Suddenly I heard a roar behind me. I turned around and saw a big lion with bat wing and a scorpion tail. Freaking out, I told myself that this was just a dream but my headache told me otherwise. I manage to dodge his first attack picking up dirt as his paw hit the ground. The dirt filled air blinded me while the creature strikes again. Striking me in the back leaving three big diagonal wounds. I fell, chest first, on the ground faking my death hopping that the lion (thing) would go away. The creature should above me for a while thump me some times. After a couple minutes the (lion bat thing) lost the interest in me and walk away. Happy that I was alive, I managed to get up (painfully) with the help of a stick that was close to my face. I walk a couple minutes hoping to find civilisation, thinking what that creature that attack me was. Still hoping that this was all a very realistic dream even if my back (gorging with blood) was telling me otherwise. I suddenly realised that I lost my headache was gone; maybe it disappeared with all the blood that I lost. All of a sudden the stick that was holding my wounded body snapped and with me missing of stability, I fell face first. With me losing all my blood and energy, I closed my eyes saying that this has my last moments. Then I herd a voice (This isn’t fare). Still feeling the pain in my back I knew that I was still alive. I slightly open my eyes and a saw four yellow hooves. I moved my arms and moaned to tell them that I was still alive. (Oh my...) I heard before the animal before me ran in the opposed direction of me. I closed my eyes once more still thinking that this was my last hour, I fell in a deep sleep Has I woke up; I rubbed my head still with an annoying headache. Has my senses came back I look around me and I saw that I was in a little bed about the size of a 13 year old kid. There where also birds nest everywhere. I realized that my shirt was gone but i still had my pant. I got out of the little bed rubbed my back. Feeling something strange I walk towards a mirror to see my back. I saw three large diagonal scars on it “how long was I out” I told myself. I slowly walk to the nearest window. I saw a basic land with a small river going thru it and there were a lot of little creatures. I really mean a lot! I suddenly felt a cold breeze on my back. I turned around and I saw a little yellow pony with long light pink mane. “Am so happy that your alright!” it exclaimed. By the simple fact that the pony talks, I fell on my butt and pointed at her with surprise. “You... you talk” I finally said. “S...So do you?” she responded. This was very weird “where am I” I ask to the pony while getting up “you mean you... don’t know?” she question back. I sight “Look I just woke up after being attack by a monster, my head feels like it’s going to blow up and my what the fuck-o meter went of the charts. So please tell me any information that could be useful.” “I...I think twilight would be best to answer your question.” She responded. “Fine, lest go see twilight.”I said annoyed. “Can you just answer me one question? How long was I asleep?” I ask while turning back to the mirror the see once again my scares. “A full day” she answered. “IMPOSIBLE” I yelled. I turned around and look at her straight in her eyes. “Don’t lie to me I am not in the mood for jokes” I angrily said to the yellow pony. “I...its...I don’t understands?” she said while falling on her back by my sudden bust of anger. Has I look at her eyes I say fear. I suddenly closed my own eyes and took deep breaths. Knowing that if I act like this I will not get my answers. When I open my eyes the pink haired pony was sitting on her rump looking at me with worried eyes. ”Are... are you ok?” she ask. I sight and sat down on the ground to be at her eye level. “I’m...I’m so sorry that I yelled at you. It’s just... I’m so confused right now and...Can we just start this all over again?” she nodded. “I am Louis-R Martin. What your name? I said with a friendly smile. “I’m fluttershy.” She whispered. As I got up “Maybe we should go see twilight maybe she help me with my confusion?” she nodded. This is my first fimfictional story please tell me if you like it and yes I know that there are errors in the text becomes I’m French Canadian not English Canadian
Introductions View OnlineFall to EquestriaIntroductions Introductions Wow this is quite unexpected. In a two day this story has obtained more than 150 views I am so happy that I am getting so much support and honest critics. As we walk outside of fluttershy’s cottage she explained me that I was in Equestria in a small town called Ponyville and that there are three types of pony Pegasus that can fly, unicorn that can use magic and earth pony’s they were simply much stronger than the other types of pony. She also told me that the wounds on my back where caused by a wild manticor and that twilight used a time alteration spell to help me heal faster. While we were walking, I realised that my pockets where empty. “Oh twilight has your stuff. If...If you don’t mind, what...what are you exactly?” she ask shyly. “I will tell what I am with twilight. I think she would like to know that as well” I replied with a warm smile. She looks at me with glistering aqua eyes, and it was at that point that I realized how adorable she was. Suddenly I heard yelling behind me. “LET GO OF HER” I turned around and saw a cyan Pegasus with rainbow colored mane flying towards me in a dangerously aggressive position (classic karate air kick position). I manage to dodge her attack and instantly grabbed the side of her chest with both hands, her back facing me, stopping her in her tracks. “LET ME GO YOU MONSTER” she yelled while fighting furiously for freedom. “Look I don’t want to hurt you or anypony in this world. I will let you got if you calm down.”I calmly said in her ears. “NEVER.” She yelled while still fighting my grasp. “Rainbow dash calm down please. He’s a friend. Twilight and rarity help me save him at the border of the everfree forest.” Fluttershy said to the struggling pony in my hand. She fought for a couple seconds and soon realised that it was useless she calmed down and went slack in my hands “OK. You win.” I gently put her down. When she was free, she turned around and stared at me. “What are you?” she asks. “I will tell you when we arrive at twilight house. Ok?” she nodded. “Oh! Almost forgot. I’m Louis-R Martin. What your name?” “I’m Rainbow dash, fastest flyer in equestria. And (she look down at her hoofs shyly) I...I’m sorry for attacking you. I thought that you where hurting my friend.” I grabbed her chin and lifted her head so that I can see her magenta eyes. They where glistering. “Already forgiven” I said with a warm smile. She smiles back. All three of us where walking toward twilight house. Avery other pony seemed to ignoring me. Maybe they were thinking that I has fluttershy’s new pet. As we continued walking in ponyville, I realise that rainbow dash started blushing. “Your... your” she was looking at my hands. “Hands” as I told her what they are. “Yea. Well... there really warm.” She was still blushing. I slightly grin at her blushing. “HEY SHY SHY WHOS THE NEW PET” a pink earth pony said loudly enough to startle all three of us. Fluttershy was about to fall on her back but I caught her with only my reflexes (I wasn’t the strongest of the butch but I was fast).she started blushing. I think she was also feeling the warm heat of my hands. I helped fluttershy up and sat on my knees to be at the pink pony eye level. “Greetings, I’m Louis-R Martin. What’s your name?” I said with a friendly smile. She jumped in the air gasping loudly and stood there, in the air, defiling the lays of physics and logic. I taught back seeing the floating earth pony before me. Suddenly she stopped gasping and ran at the opposite direction with incredible speeds, leaving a small cloud of dust behind her. “Is...Is that normal?” I asked to the other pony. “With pinky pie, always” Rainbow dash answered. We finally arrived at twilight’s house. It looks like a normal tree with doors, windows and a balcony and a sign in front said ponyville library. Just before entering the library, Pinkie pie appeared in front of me with a strange looking wagon behind her. She pushed me closer to the wagon and pressed a button situated at the side of it. The wagon open itself and flags, trumpets and a small oven poof out of it. Music stated to play and pinkie started to sing. Welcome welcome welcome A fine welcome to you Welcome welcome welcome I say how do you do? With all of her dancing and fast movements I had a hard time trying to follow her with my eyes alone. Welcome welcome welcome to ponyville todaaaaaaaay She looks back at me. “Wait for it” she said. Suddenly a cake jumped out of the small oven and landed on my face. I licked my lips to have a good taste o the cake.”Mmmmh! Not bad! Add a bit of vanilla in your next batch and it will be even better.” I said wile petting her on the head. “Let me taste” she said as she jumped up and licked my face from my cheek to my right eye. I blush at her sudden reaction and of the smooth texture of her tongue against my skin. “Your right, it doas need a bit of vanilla. Oh! I’m pinkie pie. What’s your name? Shed ask jumping up and down. “Hum...I...I’m Louis-R Martin. Happy to meet you pinkie pie.” ”We are going to have so much fun together new non-pony super tall best fri...” Pinkie was interrupted by a purple unicorn. She was standing in the entrance of the library. “WHAT’S WITH ALL THE NOI...” she stopped yelling as soon that she say me “Oh! You...your alive” she walk closer to me “I’m twilight sparkle. Can you speak our language? Before that I was able to respond to her question. A white unicorn with a purple mane exited the library. “Well of course he doas darling. The information tag on is clothing is written in equestrian.” She said as she joined the group outside. The tone of her voice told me that she was the fancy type. So I decided to play along “Greetings m’lady, my name is Louis-R Martin. May I have the honor of knowing yours” I said with a smile. “Well Well Well, he has more manners then I thought. My name is Rarity, darling.” She said blushing. “ WAT’S KEEPING Y’ALL OUTS...” an orange earth pony halted in the entrance as she saw me. “Louis-R Martin at your service.” I said still with my fancy acting. “ Yea, I’m applejack and what are ya?” “I will all tell you what I am in the library.” I hope you all enjoy part two of this story because I’m happy when I make other people happy.
story time part 1View OnlineFall to Equestriastory time part 1As we entered twilight house, all of the ponies looked at me with glistering eyes; exited to hear my answers to all of their questions. We all sat down on twilight’s rug. I was waiting for the first question. “soooo.” Dash started. ”what are you?” “I am a human from an ether another planet or universe.” “Please tell us more about your race?” specified twilight. I sight. I told them from our history (that I know) to our anatomy. They looked at me with amazement. I also told them that I was 23 years old male. And that my speciality was psychologies and philosophy. (I was in college to become a psychologist). “Do...do you have any family?” asked fluttershy. I looked down; my face engorged by a wave of sadness. Fluttershy saw that the question opened up a wound inside my heart. “If...If you don’t want to talk about It, it’s ok with me.” She said. “its ok fluttershy” I replied.”It all started at the age of 15; my family and me gat a car crash that killed all my family except me. I still have the scar to prove it” I showed them the scar on my chest. “After that I en-“ “What’s a car?” dash interrupted me.” DASH!” said twi, Aj and Rarity wile staring down at her. I silently laugh at their reaction. “A car is a large object that permits us humans to do long distances in little time.” “Like trains?” asked Applejack. “Yes! like trains but much smaller. Oh! Twilight to you still have my stuff?” I asked as I turned towards Twi. “Why yes I do.” Horn stated to glow. Four objects started floating behind me. They moved slowly to me and landed in front of me on the rug. The object in front of me were my IPod nano(with earphone), a Iphone, my wallet and the picture of Trixie that I pick up when I first landed in equestria. “I wasn’t able to make any of your stuff work and.” She blushed. ”Why did you have a poster of Trixie on you?” I looked at her lightly blushing for reason unknown. “Well.” I started. “It was the first thing that I found when I first fell in equestria. And the fact that there is some printed paper told me that there are sivilised creatures in the surrounding.” I explained. “That actually make sense and logic” said Twilight. “Please tell us what are your other things.” Said twilight with excitement. So I did. I first showed them my Iphone and all their functions at the same time I looked if I could get a signal whatsoever but that was lost hope. I had no signal. After I showed them my IPod nano. “Impossible!” exclaimed Rainbowdash. “It you’d even surprise me that it can contain a single song.” Dash said loudly. “In that case be ready to be surprised.” My IPod was the latest generation and it has a built-in speaker. I selected scary monster and nice sprite from Skrillex thinking that dash would like dubstep. I was right, she look at the IPod with amazement while dancing with the rhythm of the song. She wasn’t alone pinkie pie and surprisingly twilight sparkle joined her with the dancing. “That will be enough for now girls.” I said after letting them dance for about 15 minutes with dubstep music. “Aaawwww! Just a bit more? Please!” they beg. “Do you want to hear the rest of my story?” I said tauntingly. “Has I was saying my family died in a car crash at the age of 15 years old. I inherited everything that they owned and my parents had life insurance; so I was very rich. Since I was minor I had to have a tutor to keep guard of me; my tutor was my aunt and she is a horrible person” I sight from the painful memories coming back in my head. ”she used me for her greedy needs and tried to use all my money for her. That lasted for three long years at the age of 18; I kick her out of my house not caring what will happen to her. After all that I...” I was suddenly interrupted by a little purple dragon (witch reminded me of Spyro the purple dragon) opened the main door with a basket. “Twilight, I’m back with your quills and scro...” he dropped his basket when he got a good look at me. “Who are you? What are you?” I facepalmed while releasing an annoyed sight. “I’m tired of always introducing myself.” Pinkie pie jumped of the rug. “I can take care of that” she looked back at me "Come to the bakery later. Ok. See you there!” she hopped out of the front door jumping over the little dragon.” “Spike” started twilight. “This is Louis and he’s a human from another planet or dimension.” “OK” responded spike. He grabbed he’s basket and closed the door behind him. “Just asking” I looked at Twi. “Do you have my shirt?” “Actually I had your shirt but it was such in a horrible condition that I threw it out” answered Rarity. “It was like my only shirt!” I whined. “Don’t worry darling I made you others using the original as a model.” She magically lifted three t-shirts out her sattle-bag and opened them wide. One of them was completely black another has entirely white. The last one was really the one that caught my interest. It resembled my first shirt (two feminine silhouette holding a sword twice there size in a symmetric way on a white shirt) the shirt was white but it was two mares holding a staff witch tip has in a heart shape. I grabbed that one out of the air and stared at the details. “This is beautiful Rarity. I will find a way to repay you. I promise.” I said to her while putting the decorated shirt on. She blushed at my compliments. “No darling, you don’t have to give me something in return” she said still blushing I walk to her and kneeled down in front of her to be at eye level and I started pet her on the head. “Rarity” I said with a calm voice. “I insist and a promise is a promise.” “Don’t stop” she murmured with a light pant. “Do...Do you like when I scratch you head?” I ask. “It feels (she sighted) divine.” She panted “The massage tips from my friend really do work.” I thought out loud. I wasn’t really the type of loving sex but man-o-man do I love teasing my campaigning. “What tips” ask spike witch joined us on the rug. “For that. I must continue my story.” I sat down comfortably in a way that I can see them all while massaging Rarity’s head. Sorry is it took so long got stuff to do. But I see that you guys like my story so far and that make me want to smile smile smile. Remember it is normal that there are grammar errors my native language is French not English
story time part 2View OnlineFall to Equestriastory time part 2I realized that Spike was especially interested of the way that I massaging Rarity. “Maybe he has a crush on her.” I thought to myself. “If it’s the case; I will help him with my own massage tips.” I knew that here I had to make as much friends as possible. “Now where was I?” I ask myself. “Oh yes! I just kick out my ant.” I cleared my throat before continuing. “After that; I was living alone in my house for about four months just to clear the mayhem that my aunt caused. When I was finish I invited my two best friends to stay with me. The first one is Kevin and he is a DJ. He is the one that introduced me to dubstep. He even showed me a thing or two on a turn-table. The second one is Joseph. He’s a massage therapist. He thought me how to do wonderful massages he even gave me a job.” I looked at Rarity. She had her eyes closed and she was panting. I slowly removed my hand from her head but she didn’t react at the lack of pressure on her head. She was still hypnotized by the scalp scratching. I put my hand close to her face and snap my fingers to wake her up. “What...What happen? Rarity asked wile shaking her head. “You got hypnotized by the head mass-GROAAW.” I was rudely interrupted by my empty stomach complaining. I blushed and brought my hand to my stomach.”Sorry! Its bin more than 24 hours that I haven’t eaten something except for the pinkie’s welcoming cake.” “I...I could make you something. What does a human eat?” she asked. I was a bit nervous of telling them human food but I am not the type of people of finishing things half-way. I sight. “Us human’s are omnivores.” I said flatly. Fluttershy and Twilight looked at me and their jaws made a O of surprise. “S...S...So you eat...” Fluttershy was unable to finish her sentence so I decided to finish it for her. “Yes, I do eat meat.” I said whit a touch of sadness. They all looked at me now understanding what omnivore’s means. I sight and I turned to fluttershy. “I shall take a very large salad. Can you make that for me Fluttershy?” I asked. She nodded and went to the kitchen. I looked up and the other ponies were staring at me with a slight touch of fear. “What?” I ask. “YOU EAT LIVING ANIMALS!” Rainbow dash exclaimed. “Yes I do! So what.” I said slightly irritated. “So...so what will stop you from eating us?” Dash said. Her last phrase created fear in the other ponies heart. I laughed at incomprehension. My laugh confused all the ponies in the room. “I am an intelligent being and I do not kill. I never killed anything and I will never kill an intelligent creature that I am able to communicate with.” I sight and closed my eyes trying to find the right words to make them trust me while being true. “Look! I am not perfect we all have our flaws. This body is agile and very useful but to keep it in good shape I need to consume meat once per month to obtain the proteins that this body need.” I said with an innocent tone.” That’s when fluttershy entered the room with bid bowl full of green leafs. As she put the bowl in front of me she looked at me with glistering eyes. “Do...Do you eat fish?” she ask. I nodded. “In that case I will give you a big fish she said happily. “My bears are carnivores and I have a big supply of fish.” Suddenly her face change from happy to shy as her head pointed downward and her mane covered one of her eyes while the other eye stared at me. “If...If that’s alright with you?” she ask. I looked at her and her adorable pose. I threw my arms around her to hugging her. “Of cores it’s alright with me.” I said while hugging her tight. I stopped hugging her and putted her down in front of me. I realized that she was blushing and that amused me. “Now I believe that I owe you something for all the kindness that you have done.” I said with a warm smile. “You...I...I haven’t done anything yet.” She said blushing hot. I laugh. “Au contraire ma chère. You saved my life.” I said. I turned my head toward twilight.” And I owe you to for healing my back wound.” They both blushed. I know that they want a massage but with me they have to ask before. I started to eat my salad hungrily. “You never told me that you spoke fancy.” Rarity said. I finished my mouth full before responding. “You never ask.” I said tauntingly. “What time is it?” I ask to all. Twilight was the first to respond. “Its noon.” “What noon already!” Applejack exclaimed. “Sorry everypony but trees to buck.” She looked at me and tilted her hat politely before exiting the house. “And I haven’t finish clearing to sky’s. “ Dash said while flying out the door. “I have my animals to feed.” Fluttershy said as she aswell exited the house. “And I dresses to make for a very important client.” Said Rarity but she didn’t exited the house insted she looked at me with glistering eyes. “You...You have very special hands.” She said as she looked down at them. She looked back up at me but her eyes where different; she looked exited with a devilish smile on her face. “Maybe I can get you a job at ponyville’s hooficure. Would you like that?” she asked. “I would love that.” I said with a charming smile. She smiled at my answer and started trotting happily toward the exit. ”We shall go there first thing in the morning, darling.” We where now three on the rug: me, Twilight and Spike. “Sooo!” Twi stated. “I think I will send a letter to the princess about you.” Twilight and Spike got up to go upstairs but before that they manage to disappear of my sight; I ask Twi if I could have a private talk with Spike which she gladly accepted . Me and Spike where on the rug staring at each other. “Do you have a crush on Rarity?” I asked simply. He blushed. “How...how did you know that?” he asked nervously. “I saw that you where getting jealous of the fact that I was massaging her.” I said calmly. “Look! I am not here to make enemies. How about I show you a couple massaging tricks that only one with fingers can use?” I ask with a friendly smile. He smiled. “That would be awesome of you.” With the wave of a hand, I send him back to Twilight to right her letter leving me alone on the rug. I was eating my salad while prosessing all the information that I have received. “This is going to be fun” I tought to myself. When I was finish with my salad Twilight and spike reapeard in my vision. “So, what did the princess said?” I asked. “she is a bit occupied for the moment but she will send her little sister to take a look at you.” Twi said with a smile. I got up and stretch myself. “How about you show me ponyville?” I suggested. “That’s a great idea.”Twi said I looked at spike if he wanted to join us. “Sorry I would have to pass on this one. Il go take a nap” He said with a yawn. Twilight and I looked at each other while we were walking out the door to go explore ponyville. A this story is going I still have a long road ahead but for you guys it’s all worth it and thank you so much for your support. Reading your comments brings me the extra imagination I need to continue this FIMFICTION
the party part 1View OnlineFall to Equestriathe party part 1Twilight showed me around to sweet apple acres to sugar cube corner. She showed me where the bridle gossip (spa) was and the hospital (in case I injure myself). I realized that there where nopony in the streets. I fell in my deep thought to figure out why. “Are...Are you alright?” Twi ask beside me “Yeah. I’m just trying to figure out why aren’t anypony out in the streets.” And that’s when it hit me. My eyes shot open surprising Twi beside me. “What...What happen?” she ask panicking. “Nothing!” I said to her while patting her on the head to calm her down. “I just figured out why nopony is here.” “And why is that?” she ask. “Well do you remember when I wined of being tired of always introducing myself?” she nodded. ”Pinkie pie said that she will take care of that and her being the party animal; she must have invited everypony in ponyville for a surprise party in the bakery A.K.A sugar cube corner.”I said with logic Twilight looked at me with amaze. Suddenly Pinkie appeared in front of us scaring Twilight off the ground and in my arms. “What are you guys doing we are waiting for you in the bakery. Come-on lets go.” Pinkie started to push me without giving me time to put Twi down. She stops pushing us when we were in front of the bakery’s door. As we stopped I instantly put Twi down. Pinkie grabed Twilights hoof and ran in the bakery closing the door in my face. A bit insulted not knowing what to do I desided to wait and admirer the clear blue skies. A couple minutes has past not knowing what was going in there. I heard the creaking of the door and I turned my head to nervous fluttershy in the door. “You...You don’t want to come in?” she ask shyly. I smiled at here to comfort her. “Nopony said that I could.” I explained “Well in that cases do...do you want to come in?” “I would love to.” We both entered to bakery at the same time. It was completely dark, I wasn’t able to see anything. The lights suddenly lidded the room forcing me to cover my eyes from the sudden change of luminosity. At the same time I heard a big ‘WELCOME’ witch echoed in my ears. I felt something grabbing my left leg. As my eyes slowly got used to the light, I looked down and saw fluttershy holding my leg; her forelegs around my waist and hind legs around the bottom of my leg while using my foot for a seat. She must been startle by pinkie’s surprise party. I looked up and saw about fifty ponies staring at me with surprise and amaze. I saw a microphone held by a light blue glow floating in front of me waiting for me to present myself. I grabbed the mic while making it spin between my fingers just to impress my public and it seemed too worked. “Good afternoon everypony, I am a human from another world or planet and my name is Louis. I would probably be here for a bit of time. I hope we could become very good friends.” I said joyfully. The mic glowed back blue and floated to a white unicorn with a blue mane in front of a turntable. “Now let’s bass this party up” the unicorn yelled before putting on a rave beat. I looked down at fluttershy who was now cuddling my leg. I patted her on the head and asked her if she was comfortable. Her cheeks flushed and she got of my leg apologizing. I giggled a bit and told her that I accepted her apology with a big smile. She smiled back at me trotted in a random direction. As inspected pinkie pie appeared in front of me asking me if I was surprised. “Nope!” I said tauntingly “What! That can’t be!” Pinkie exclaimed “It is very hard to surprise a psychologies and I am not the nervous type.” MY eyes lit up as an Idea pop in my head.” Pinkie! Do you like challenges?” Her face was filled with joy. “Do I ever!” “If you are able to surprise me before the party ends I will give you a tummy rub. Deal!” “DEAL!” she hopped away. I sight knowing what I have done. I sat down to the nearest chair that I could find; their chairs are deferent of ours first they have no back support second they are uncomfortably low but I didn’t care I still sat down on it. I looked around seeing what was everypony doing some where dancing others where talking many where just staring at me. A mint green unicorn with a similar colored mane with a white strip approached me with two cups of punch floating in front of her. “Do...Do you want something to drink?” she nervously ask. I grabbed one of the cups and stated to dink it. I was surprised the punch was spiked. I thanked her and ask her name. She blushed. ”Lyra, my name is Lyra” She puts her forelegs on my lap to get a better look at me. Her blush deepens. “Could you do me a favor?” I nodded. “Could you use your gorgeous hand and...” she squeaked and her face was now crimson. ‘...rub my horn?” I raised an eye brow at her request. I brought a tentative hand to her horn who was now glowing. As I touched the base of the horn she yelped at the warm softness of my hand. “P...Please touch it more.” She panted And so I did. As I slowly brought my fingers up to the tip of the horn and then back to the bass. She was panting heavily and drooling all over my lap. After just a couple of strokes, she lets go a scream at the same time that her horn shot a sticky goo on my face forcing me to close one of my eyes. She fell on the ground twitching. “What happen?” screamed Twi. I looked around and saw all the ponies looking at me blushing hot. I grabbed some of the goo that was on my face. It was a light blue and it glowed a little. I looked back at a blushing twilight. “Please, tell me what just happened?” “Did you rub her horn?” I nodded. “Well, a unicorn’s horn is very sensitive and if well massaged it can give the host an orgasm.” “And this goo?” “It’s a magical residue that as the same effect that a powerful aphrodisiac.” “In that case can somepony give something to wipe my face?” Suddenly pinkie jumped on to my lap. “Let me take care of that.”She said joyfully. “PINKIE! NO!” Twi shouted but it was too late. Pinkie took all of the goo in her mouth with one lick. As I looked at her swallowing the goo, I was afraid that she would become an uncontrollable sex beast.She looks back at me with a very hungry eyes. Sorry for the lack of update I’ve been so occupied the last days that I barely got have any time for myself. Hope you like this next chapter. 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the party part 2View OnlineFall to Equestriathe party part 2My heart was beating at a alarming rate. I knew that pinkie was a party animal imagine that with a powerful aphrodisiac. She was still looking at me while standing on my laps. “Did I win the deal?” she asked with a tauntingly. I nodded. “So do you want your tummy rub?” “Nope! I want something else.” She said as she brought her face against mine. She locked lips with me. I throwed my arms in the air showing everypony that I am doing nothing and giving pinkie pie total control. She brought her for hooves around my head and deepened the kiss. She forced my lips open and started explore the inside of my mouth to get a good taste. I just let her kiss me for a couple of while the other ponies just watch us. She broke the kiss leaving us breathless with a web of saliva between us. “Are you ready for more fun?” she asked teasingly. Just before she went back for another kiss, her body got completely covered in a smooth pink aura and started to levitate in the air in front of me. She slowly moved towards Twilight who had an annoyed look on her face. “Pinkie! Please stop embarrassing our special guest.” Twi calmly said “But we had a deal” Pinkie wined Twi tilted her head and look at me if that was true. “We had a deal.”I approved. “But your reward was a tummy rub not a sloppy kiss.” I précised. “Aaaawww! But you taste soooo good. Just a bit more, please.” Pinkie begged while doing puppy dog eyes. I shrugged at her cuteness. I always had a hard time saying no to a woman. But this was somehow awkward for me; we just met. “Pinkie! No! Leave him be.” Twi ordered “Aaaawww! But Twi he-!” “Pinkie, I said no.” “Ok” Twi slowly puts Pinkie down. Pinkie looked at me with disappointment which broke my heart. This is supposed to be a happy party but she only had a frown on her cute little face. I kneel down to and opened my arms wide. “How about a hug instead?” I offered. She looked at me with surprise. Her frown rapidly turned into a very large smile as she jumped in my arms. Her forelegs where around my chest and hind legs around my waist. “She’s stronger than I thought.” I remarked as she tighten the hug. I hugged her back. I got up, pinkie still attached to me, and walked to a table where I saw some punch. I was getting thirsty. As I arrived near the table I felt a sudden tug on my pants. I looked down and saw a plum colored pony pulling my pants to get my attention. “C...Can I also have a hug?”She asked shyly. “Can I have a hug to?” said another pony. “Me too!” said three more simultaneously. Alost all the ponies in the party wanted a hug from me. I looked Pinkie, who was cuddling my shirt, to get off me for just a few minutes. I didn’t know what to do. So I did what all good men would have done in this situation. I grabbed a cup of punch and swallowed it in one gulp. I did the same thing with two other cups. When I was finish with my drink, I just stared at the bowl of punch just waiting for the alcohol to do its effect. I was sober enough to know what I was doing, but I was drunk enough to not care what would happen after. I lifted my hand and pointed at the DJ, who stop the music when Lyra had her ‘horngasm’. “Drop the bass at my signal.” I ordered. I took of my shirt and turned around while throwing my shirt at a nearby chair. I opened my arms wide and braced myself for impact. “Now who’s up for a hug?” I asked teasingly as I pointed the DJ again to give her the signal. I was attacked by a tilde wave of happy ponies throwing me onto the grown. For the rest of the party I wearing a vest made by living ponies that cuddled my skin with excitement. When I finally managed to get out off the bakery with the shirt Rarity gave it was already night time. Back home, my called me the ‘Nightwalker’ because I walked three hours per day, each day, only at night time. I looked in front of me and saw the six first ponies that I met. As I looked at them I realized something. Where am I going to sleep? “Girls, where am I going to sleep tonight?” I asked I looked at fluttershy, since I first woke up at her place, but she shakes her head in disapproval; her bed couldn’t withstand more than one living being. I looked at the others who one at a time said no and gave me a reason why. I lastly looked Twi. “You...You can sleep at my place. My bed is big enough to take both of us.” She gladly said with a blush. I smiled back at her. I looked up at the skies and couldn’t believe what I saw. Perfectly clear black sky, thousands of shining stars and a gigantic moon floating above my head. For somebody who lives in the deeps. Of a metropolis, this sky was gorgeous; it hypnotized me so much that I couldn’t hear the voices around me. “Luna, there you are!” exclaimed Twi. “Yes! We’ve been sent here to inspect a new intelligent life form.” “Of course! He’s right here.” Twi pointed at me with her hoof. Luna approtch me. “Greeting, pleased to meet you.” She said “I...I have to walk.” I whispered “What?” Luna took a better look at me and saw that I was staring directly at the night sky. She poked me which broth me back the real world. “Sorry! I kind of got hypnotized by the beauty of the night sky.” I apologized. “Twi I am going for a walk. I will be back in about two to three hours.” I said to Twi. “Can...Can we join you?” ask a dark blue alicorn in front of me. “We?” “Oh...Hum...can I join you?” “Of course! What is your name?” “Luna” Me and Lune walked onto the deeps of the night. Together. Thank you so much for all your support! It really helps me staying motivated to continue this story.
The midnight walkView OnlineFall to EquestriaThe midnight walkAs me and Luna walked in the night I told her who I was, what I was and what did I like. “Why do you like the night so much?” she asked. She looked to have a hard time believing me that I prefer the night over the day. “The tranquillity of the surrounding, the purity of the air, the beauty of the sky; these are just a few of the many reason that I prefer the night over day.” I looked up to admire the moon. “I always believe that it was easier to look at the moon then the sun. Don’t you think so?” I asked while turning my head to her. She giggled at my question. Her smile shined with the moon light making her look as beautiful as the night. I blushed at her gorgeous smile. “Please, tell me more about you know.” She talked about herself. How she is the princess of the night and how she didn’t want me to call her princess. As we walked I saw a small green hill with just one tree on it. I happily walk up the hill and lied down on my back under the tree looking up at the sky. Luna did the same and lied down beside me. “You haven’t finished telling me about you. You are missing a thousand year!” “We...I do not want to tell you.” She said sadly. “Why?” “I do not want for you to judge me for what I have done.” She said tears starting to form in her eyes. “I do not judge somepony for what they have done but they will do. We all have done bad things in our past.” I said to her with a calm smile. Luna was now sitting on her rump looking in my eyes. I did the same but I grabbed one of her fore hooves with both of my hand as I looked back in her beautiful Sapphire eyes. “You shouldn’t fear your past but cherish it, learn from it. You cannot change the past but you can use it to do a better future.” I said calmly. She looked at me with teary eyes not knowing what to say. So I decided to do something quite risky. I pulled her hoof bringing her close to me to hug her transferring as much love that I can. After about thirty seconds, she decided to hug me back. “Thank you!” she whispered in my ear. “For what?” “For helping me more in two hour than anypony else in a thousand years.” She broke the hug and kissed me on the cheek. “I am sorry but I have to go, do you walk like this every night?” I nodded. “I hope you don’t mind that I join you in your walks.” “Nope.” She smiled. “I will find a way to repay you. I promise.” And then she teleported away; leaving me alone under the tree on the hill. I was retracing my memories of today then suddenly a thought pop in my head. ‘Could the ponies thing of me of being good looking?’. I am just an over intelligent bald ape surrounded by magical ponies. I thought of all the most arousing moment of the day. First Lyra’s handjob; she was more into my hands then me. Pinkie’s kiss; she must of been pushed by the aphrodisiac. The industrial amount of hugs that I gave to all the ponies; I do have a very warm skin especially when I drink. And Luna’s kiss; she must be thanking me for the psychological help. I decided to get up and go to Twi’s house for a good night’s sleep. I knocked at the door. Twi opened it with her magic. The first thing that I realized is that she was wearing sock. They were the same colore as the band on her hair. It gave her a little naughty look. “Twi, I have a question for you and please be honest.” I asked “Go ahead!” “Am I good looking for your race?” She blushed at my question.”Well at my eyes, you are quite attractive.” “And for the others?” “Pinkie and fluttershy do share my opinion. For the others I do not know.” I stretch my arms and yawned. “Can we go to sleep? This was one exhausting day.” “Of course follow me.” She said as she trotted up stairs. We were on both side of the bed preparing for a good night’s sleep. I was removing my clothes to be in my boxers. I saw Twi blush as she watch me striping. “Twi! Just a simple warning. My body release a very large amount of heat while I sleep. I hope that do not disturb you?” “No! Why should it disturb me?” “Don’t know.” I said while climbing in the bed. Twi did the same. “I wonder what you taste like.” Twi whispered to herself. I looked back at her with a devilish smile. “Are you jealous of pinkie kissing me?” Her blush deepened.”Well I never actually kissed a colt before, but I wouldn’t mind to...” I interrupted her as I brought my face against hers. I licked her lips asking passage which she gladly opened. As I licked and explored her mouth she moaned in mine. We stood like this for about one minute before breaking the kiss, leaving her breathless. “So what do I taste like?” “Good!” Twi panted. “Now I need some rest. I got a big day tomorrow.” I had a hard time falling asleep with everything that happened that day. ’So I’m physically attractive to the eyes of some ponies.’ I thought to myself.’ This will be fun’. Suddenly I felt something fall on my chest and my waist. It was a sleeping Twilight cuddling me; searching for heat. I wasn’t the type to refuse some affection, so I let her hug me as much as she wanted. Then I felt something warm and gooey on the side of my waist. I looked at Twi in disbelieve; she was drooling. She was having a dirty dream and she is using me to rub herself. I rubbed my eyes not believing what was happening. I didn’t stop her because the way that she rubbed herself on me felt good. The thoughts of her little slit rubbing against my wait made me drool a bit. I shook my head removing the sexy ideas in my head but the inevitable was already happened. I was hard. I closed my eyes trying to fall asleep before I lose control of my body. And surprisingly it worked. I manage to get some sleep beside a horny pony. I found myself in a dark room with another pony in front of me. She was tall as a small horse and she was pearl white alicorn. Her mane and tail had bands of rose, purple, green and blue. “Hum... Hello?”I said. “And who are you?” I continued. I saw her horn lid up in a bright yellow. My entire body was soon covered in the same aura, forcing me to kneel. I fought back with all my force; refusing to dominate against my will. I manage to break free from her spell. I got up exhausted from fighting back. Then something most unexpected happened. The pearl white alicorn jumped in my arms hugging me. I was thrown back from the sudden bust of affection. I thought that I would land on my back, but I didn’t I was now free falling with her hugging me with love. Then I woke up. I am so sorry for the lack of updates. I’ve been so busy lately that I hardly have any time for myself. 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the new jobView OnlineFall to Equestriathe new jobI rubbed my eyes from being waked up so brutally. ‘What could that dream means’ I thought to myself. As my senses began to reappear; I felt some pressure on my chest. It was Twi who was now me as a pillow as she continued to cuddle me. She had the most adorable face and I couldn’t resist petting her mane. My action slowly woke her up as I saw her eyes opening. “Morning sleepy head!” I calmly whispered in her ear “Morning” she said half asleep. Her eyes shot open when she realized that she was hugging me. She moved away sitting on her rump on her bed with a red face looking at me. “I am so sorry!” she apologised. “For what?” “For using you.” My left eye brow lifted at her answer.” What do you mean?” “Well... our specie is always searching for heat and the fact that your body realise a gargantuan amount of heat I...I couldn’t resist but to feel your heat all over me.” Her face was now crimson. I looked at her blushing face, tears started to roll down her cheeks. “Please don’t hate me for this.” She cried Looking at her like this broke my heart. I did the first thing that came in my head; I trough my arms around her and hugged her tightly. “I don’t mind it Twi. I like any kind of affection that I can get. That meaning that I like to cuddle during the night.” She hugged me back. “ I feels good to hear that.” We embraced each other for a few minutes before getting of the bed. I Twi saw a large wet spot on the right side of my waist. “What is that?” She asked. “Let’s just say that your movement depends of your dream.” I said teasingly. Her covered her mouth as she realized what was the wet spot was made of.” I am so sorry.” She said. Her whole body seemed to be blushing. “It’s not your fault Twi. You told me that ponies are always searching for heat and the heat of my body must have provoked a dirty dream. Now, where is the bathroom; I need a shower.” She pointed where the bathroom is. I went en took a shower with Twi’s shampoo and shower gel. When I got out I felt my skin unusually softer. I got dress (this time with the black t-shirt). As I when down stairs I saw Twi and Rarity holding magically a muffin and a glass of milk. “Hurry up and eat this we have to go to the hoofacure early in the morning.” Rarity said while she moved the floating food towards me. I ate the muffin and drank the milk as fast as I can too not make Rarity wait too much. Me and Rarity walk out of Twi’s house waving goodbye. As we walked towards the bridle gossip I realized that Rarity was slightly blushing. “Why are you blushing, Rarity?” “Oh! Nothing, darling! I just got a few thought. Look we are here” We both entered the hoofacure and ended up in the waiting room. Rarity went to the small coffee table and taped on a small bell. A blue earth pony with pink mane entered the room. “Welcome to the bridle gossip how can I help y...” she was mesmerized from the simple fact that I was in there spa. “Do...Do you want something, Louis, anything?” it seems that she was at the party last night. “Actually. Yes. I would like a job.” I calmly said Her eyes shot open. She couldn’t believe what was happening. “ALOE!” she yelled while staring at me. “WE HAVE A SPECIAL VISITOR.” Another earth pony entered the room. She looked exactly like the first one but the colors of her mane and body where inverted (pink body, blue mane). “It’s the first time that you have difficulty with a new custum...” she stopped as she saw me. “He is here for a job, aloe.” The two spa pony stared at me. I blushed not knowing what to do. “Lotus, Aloe, is it so hard to believe that Louis, here, desire a job here at the spa?” Rarity said to break the awkward silence. They both nodded I finally got tire of waiting and decided to prove my worth. “How about I prove my talent by making one of you two a very special ‘hand’ massages.” I said while raising a hand. They nodded at my offering as they turned around. “P...Please follow us.” Me and Rarity followed the earth ponies into a very large room. There were a large wooden tub in the middle of the room and massage tables surrounding it. We all stopped at the first massage table. “Now who will be first?” I asked while rubbing my hands together. Lotus and aloe looked at each other then looked back at me. “Your choice.” They both said at the same time. I know about these types of questions. My EX use to give me them all the time. “I choose to go head or tails.” I said happily as I grabbed a nickel in my pocket. I pointed the blue pony and said “heads”. Then I pointed the pink pony and said “tails”. I flipped the coin in the air and it landed heads. “Now, Lotus is that right?” the blue pony nodded. “It seems that luck is with you. Please get on the massage table so that we can get started. And Aloe can you bring me a bowl of very hot water please?” Lotus climed the massage table as Aloe ran of the go get what I demanded. When she came back I have already taken of my shirt to be more confortable. “Now where I come from this is a special technick that I like to call ‘smoking grip’.” I said as Aloe putted the bowl of hot water close to me. With no warning I plugered my hands in the very hot water for as long as I can removing them to let them cool the pain. I did this about seven times, letting my hands in the hot water longer each time that I did. When I remouved my hands from the water for the last time, my hands where now smoking. The mouth of the three ponies in the room dropped in amaze. I even saw Lotus drool a bit. I smiled at the pony on the massage table.” Are you ready for the massage designed for gods?” I said tauntingly. As usual, I thank you all for your support. Please leave a comment I adore reading them
Celestia who?View OnlineFall to EquestriaCelestia who?As I brought my hands down I saw her shivering with anticipation. I decided to taunt her before starting the real massage. I brought a single finger just above the base of her tail. I heard her yelp at my touch. I slowly slided my finger up her spine giving her jolts of pleasure and anticipation. When my finger was at her neck I decided to start the real massage. I used my thumps to rub on each side of her spine while my other fingers on the muscles on her back while very slowly going down her back. “Oh Celestia! This is soooo good!” she moaned. “Who is this Celestia?” I asked innocently. “You mean you don’t know who princess Celestia is?” Aloe asked me in disbelieve. “Nope, but I would like to know more about her?” “Princess is the goddess of the sun and the ruler of all Equestria.” Rarity said “Could you please give me any physical description?” I asked thinking once again about my dream. “Of course, darling! Princess Celestia is a pearl white alicorn with a majestic flowing mane. The pony of last night dream reappeared in my mind. I had to have more information. “Is she the sister of Luna?” “Elder sister, to be more precise.” “I remember that Twilight sent a letter to Luna’s sister; is she the one that she sends her letters? Because she looked to be accustomed to send her letters.” “Yes! Each time that we discover a lesson about friendship we send her a letter to inform her of that lesson.” That is when I figured out. My dream was a premonition of what I need to do too get her love. I continued the massage; making Lotus moan in every touch. After 30 minutes of massage I stopped. “Did you like your massage?” I asked to Lotus “It’s divine!” she moaned “It seems that you get the job, Louis.” Aloe said to me. “When do you want to start?” “I would like to work three days a week, if possible?” I asked. “Of course! Could you just help me do a menu for your hand massaged please?” I grabbed a peace of paper, a quill and started righting a menu with original names. Main Limb tenderizer: leg massage Back liberator: back massage Doorway to heaven: full body Bonus Smoking grip Mind relaxer “What’s a ‘Mind relaxer?’” asked Aloe “It’s exactly what it says; it relaxes the mind of the client.” “Show me!” commanded Aloe “It’s only faire. Lotus got the massage. Come over here, Aloe!” Aloe walks towards me and sat on the massage table that Lotus was on not long ago. “What happens now?” she asked “This” I grabbed her chin to keep it steady as I locked lips with her. Her eyes shot open from the sudden kiss but didn’t move away. I decided to deepen the kiss poking my tongue between her teeth. I saw her eyes slowly closing to taste me better. She tasted sweet. She moaned in my mouth breathlessly. After two minutes of kissing I decided to break it. As I moved my face away from hers, I looked at the two other ponies; they where blushing furiously. I wiped the residue of saliva from my mouth. “So! Is your mind relaxed?” “Yeessss” she moaned her eyes still closed; savouring my saliva. “Good. I shall come back in two days for my first day of work. I shall leave you girls to put a prise on my menu.” I turned to Rarity. ”Rarity, you have no need to reserve; I have a better plan for you. Spike told me that he wanted to learn how to do my special massages. Do you mind that I take you for his massage lesson?” “No! Not at all darling!” I took my shirt and walk toward the exit but a pony that was in the waiting room took my attention. It was Lyra. “Good morning Lyra!” I happily said. She looked up. As soon that she saw my face, her face turned crimson and she had a surprised look on her face. “You...You’re not mad at me?” she asked “Why should I?” I laugh “I...I did cum on your face.” “Those are just details. Just next time tell me when you cum. OK?” I said seductively. Her eyes shot open at my last words. “Ne...Next time?” I laugh loudly as I walk toward the door but before exiting I had to say one last thing to Lyra. “We never know what the future awaits for us”. I said teasingly. I exited the spa with Rarity. She said that she had some dresses to make and ran off. I walk in that street saluting everypony that I see. With no warning, Pinkie jumped out of nowhere and hugged my chest. “I am not foalsiting the baby cakes tonight. You can sleep at my place now.” She said happily. “Great! But first we must warn Twilight about this. Ok?” “Okie dokie lokie” I told her to descend me to start our walk towards Twi’s house but something caught my interest. In the shy, there was a carriage pulled by two Pegasus. It was moving too quickly to see who was behind. I managed to take a good look when they landed in front of me and pinkie. It was Celestia. Time to put my dream to reality. Sorry for the short chapter it’s just that I am suffering of writers block and it sucks big time, diablo3 isn’t helping either. Still here is the next chapter hope you like it
A new friendView OnlineFall to EquestriaA new friendI realized that when the sun goddess descended her carriage, all the ponies around her bowed down to her royalty. I just stood there looking at her with no shame. Suddenly a spear pointed directly toward my neck, almost touching it. I just looked at the guard who was holding the weapon with his magic without showing any trace of fear in my face. ″May I please have the reason of this aggression?″ I asked with a calm voice. ″You dare not bow to the ruler of Equestria.″ I just smiled at him. ″That would be giving her what she wants and not what she need. ″ I said calmly. The guard instantly brought the sharp edge of his spear closer to my neck with an irritated look on he’s face. ″How dare you question the princess desire? ″ He screamed at me ″And how dare you threaten the only reason that I am here? ″ We both look up at the sun goddess who was giving an irritated look to the guard. ″But princess, he refuses to bow to you. ″ The guard stated in his defence. ″And does that make him a threat? ″ asked Celestia trying to make the guard realize his actions. The guard lowered his weapon and down at his hooves. When I lifted my head I saw Celestia looking directly at me. She even seems to be scanning me with her eyes from toes to head. Once she finishes scanning, she was staring in my eyes as if she was trying to see my soul. ″Louis-R Martin. Right? ″ She finally says to break the ice. ″It seems that my name is getting well known. ″ I remarked ″You have no Idea! Anyway, I heard you say that bowing to me would be giving me what I want and not what I need; so tell me what do I need? ″ She askes I gave her a charming smile. ″A friend. ″ ″What? ″ She say a bit confused. I slightly giggle as I kept my smile. ″You have so many subjects but do you have a friend? I heard that you student sends you letters telling you the advantage of friendship and with your reaction you are not used to have one. ″ I stretch my arm to her and open my hand. ″ Now I ask you, do you accept my friendship? ″ She looked at my hand then my face with a confused look and back to my hand; she repeated her action a couple times. Starting to get impatient, I let my hand fall to my side and sight. ″If that is your chose princess. ″ I said with a sad smile as I bowed respectably in front of her and turned around to join back Pinkie pie. As expected the princess accepted my friendship but not in an expected way. I felt her jump on my back as her fore hooves rolls around my neck and her head on my right shoulder. ″I accept your friendship with opened hooves. ″She whispered in my ear. I looked back at her and saw her tear filled eyes looking back at me. ″Are those tears of happiness there Celestia? ″ I asked with a smooth smile. She nodded as she nuzzled my neck with her nose. I looked back at Pinkie pie as I brought a hand to Celestia’s head to start petting her. ″Pinkie, could you go see Twilight and tell her that I will sleep at your place tonight. Ok! I will be at the Sugarcube corner late tonight. ″ I said to Pinkie. She simply nodded with a large smile and hopped toward the library. I looked again at the sun goddess on my shoulder who was now hugging me tighter as tears of rolled on her cheeks. ″So, do you want to go eat something? ″I asked calmly as I pet the back of her head. Her silky smooth mane felt amazingly good between my fingers. She nodded before slowly getting off me. As we walked in the street, she kept thanking me for being her friend. I soon realized that we were followed by five or six guards in the sky and ground. ″Do you acctualy need all these guards? ″ I asked her. ″Actualy no! there just there to make me feel important. ″ She said with a amused smile. ″You don’t like them? ″ ″No I don’t like them. They give me a feeling that they will arrest me if I do something wrong. ″ She chuckled. ″Don’t be silly they would never do thEEEP″ I surprised her as I touched her back. As I though, three guards ran at me and tackled me on the ground. ″I told ya. ″ I said breathlessly. ″GUARDS! GET OFF HIM RIGHT THIS INSTENCE. ″ Celestia screamed with anger. ″but princess he made you yelp! ″The stallion on top me said in their defence. ″ARE YOU REFUSING A DIRECT ORDER! ″She screamed now steaming with anger. ″But princess…″ This time he didn’t had time to finish his phase; he was thrown off of me by the angry goddess’s powerful magic. I saw him fly in the air and landed on the dirt floor. Celestia’s face was contorted by anger, I had to do something. I quickly got up and hugged Celestia tightly before she does another attack. ″Celestia, calm down! You don’t have to be angry with a misunderstood. They just want your protection, no need to kill one. ″ I said in her ears. ″You’re right I am just getting really hungry. Let’s go eat. ″ She said I lifted an eyebrow at her confusing reason but didn’t protest since I was as well hungry. I looked at the guard who was on the ground to see if he was alright. He was looking back at me and said thank you for saving his life and job. We continued our walk and searched for a suitable restaurant for us. As we walked I saw that there weren’t any more guards following us; they learn from their mistakes. We finally found a good cafe for us to rest and eat, as expected; since I was with the princess all the food was free. We ordered, ate and talked with each other to better know ourselves. Suddenly, a question popped in my head and I had to ask it. ″Celestia, why were you so angry at the guard who charged me? ″ ″Well… it’s the first time in many years that I have a friend and I wanted to make a good impression on you. When Shining Armour attacked you I thought you wouldn’t like me for their action. ″ ″Don‘t be ridiculous. You are not only the goddess of the sun but also the ruler of all this land. You have already impressed me; you just need to be yourself. ″ I laugh with a large smile. She smiled back and slightly blushed. ″Thank you, it feels good to hear you say that. ″ She said with a smoother voice than usual. We finished eating and got out of the cafe with full stomachs. I saw that Celestia looked sadder than before. I lead my hand on her back to get her attention, which work perfectly. ″What’s going on you look sadder than before? ″ I asked her. ″I am sorry but I have to go. I have royal duties to take care of but I really want to stay with you. ″ She said sadly. I was now scratching her back sending shivers in her spine. ″I understand. Go and do your duty; I will be waiting for you here in ponyville for our next encounter. Maybe we can go play some bowling together next time! ″ She looked back at me, now smiling, with her beautiful face of hers. ″I would love to.″ she said before disappearing in front of me with a bright flash. I was now all alone in front of the café, nothing to do now. I just stated to walking for no reason, looking at the surrounding to familiarise with ponyville. As I walked many mares gave me gifts, a flower from Roseluck or Daisy, candy from Bon Bon, etc… I rapidly got bored. I saw that I was back at the Bridle Gossip. ″Meh…Lets go for a massage. ″ I said to myself. As I entered I saw Lotus behind to the desk taking orders. ″Welcome to the Bri…Oh! Louis! What brings you to this pleasant surprise? You said that you won’t work today. ″ As soon that she said that, the clients in the waiting room smile wildly now knowing that I will work here. ″Who said that I was here to work? I just got bored and though that a good massage would be amusing. ″ I said with a charming smile. The eyes of lotus shined with excitement. ″Come right here I will give you the deluxe version with a special ending. ″ She said with a very sensual voice as her face started to blush. I will believe that this will be very relaxing. Boom baby! I am back and kicking with idea to continue this story. I hope you like this chapter and don’t worry next one will get hotter!!! Anyway till next time.
A pleasant massageView OnlineFall to EquestriaA pleasant massageLotus brought me in to a dark circular room only lit with scented candles. The mixture of the scented candles and massaging oils tickling my nose with delight; the smell was almost enchanting. "Make yourself confortable while I go get my sister." She softly said before slowly closing the door. There I was once again alone. I took a better look at the obscure room and saw the slightly lit massage table in the middle of the room. I decided to lie down on it just to relax while I took deep breaths of the hypnotizing scent. The sudden sound of the door opening brought me back to reality. There I saw Lotus and Aloe entering the room blushing hot. "Are you ready for the first step of you special massage?" Aloe asked. I smiled and nodded. They told me to take off my clothing and to lie on my stomach and relax. I was now in my boxers back exposed to them. They rapidly both started on my massage. I don’t know why but their hard hooves were doing amazing effect on my rough back. I made light moans to signal them that they were doing a great job and where their movement were more appreciated. Pleasant After a while of being massaged, I suddenly felt something warm and wet slide on the entire length of my back. I wanted to see what it was but I was stopped by lotus as she grabbed my head and landed her lips on mine. After a couple minutes of kissing, she broke the kiss. "Let us take care of everything. And I hope that you don’t mind having a tongue bath. " "No I don’t mind. " I said now realizing that aloe was now coating my back with her saliva. After a minute of back licking, they asked me to turn around and lie down on my back exposing my bare stomach to them. They quickly stated to lick my chest, arms, stomach…etc. somehow they seemed very aroused when they started licking (and kissing) my hands. The two spa ponies panted and moaned as they worked on my fingers. I suddenly decided to take things in hand, without warning I sat up. The two earth ponies looked at me worried that they have done something wrong. "It’s time for me to take care you girls now. " I said as sensual as possible. Before that they could protest, I grabbed Aloe and laid her on my right legs and did the same with Lotus but I laid her on my left leg. " "You girls looked and sounded quite aroused as you cleaned my hands. " I remarked teasingly. They opened their mouths to say something but the words were replaced by moans as I stated to scratch their necks. I slowly descended on their chest. I tried the best I could to give the same treatment at both of them but I am right handed, so it is natural that Aloe has a better hand then Lotus. I was now rubbing their bellies; it sort of feels like memory foam. As I dissented more to their lower body, I manage to find soft fleshy nubs. They instantly reacted to my touch as they both hugged tightly the arm that was pleasuring them. Their heavy panting and constant moaning told me that they loved my warm touch on their sensitive nipples. After a minute of nipple rubbing, I decided to stop teasing them as my hands slowly got in between their hind legs. At my surprise, they were already extremely wet as my fingers slowly rubbed on their slits. I felt them hugging my arm even harder than before and gasped as I touch their most sensitive place. Making them feel like this was making me harder than steel but I had to contain my desire; they will owe me after this. As I played with them I tried to make a symphony of moans which actually didn’t sound that bad. Without warning Aloe’s lips darted to my face to begin a very lustful kiss while Lotus started to lick my neck. I made the both moan as I entered a fingers inside them; rubbing their moist walls. Aloe was now moaning in my mouth while Lotus was now resting the back of her head on my shoulder; her tongue lolling out of her mouth. Aloe broke the kiss and looked at me with half-opened eyes. "I’m...I’m going to cum. " She weakly said in between pants. It was true for both of them; I was able to feel their walls vibrating on my fingers. Now it’s time to give myself a personal challenge; make them both cum at the same time. I pulled my fingers out of their vagina keeping them on the edge of cumming. Just to keep them on the edge, I moved my fingers on their lips to get closer to their little sensitive nub. I suddenly squeezed that nub in between two fingers. They both froze in place while their minds were analyzing what just happened. A sudden gush of warm love juice sprayed on both of my hands accompanied with louds yells of pure lust. After their orgasm, they the two spa ponies seem to have lost all strength as they started to slide off me. I delicately laid them on the table so that they could rest. It seems that my turn would have to be another time. I will just relax in the big tub I saw this morning. I walked toward the only door in the room until I heard lotus behind me. "Wait its...it’s your turn! " She said with difficulty. I looked at her with a smooth smile. "No, you girls should rest. I will just relax in the bath. " I walked to the door but stop just before exiting the room. "Let’s just say that you girls owe me. "I said teasingly. As I entered the bath room there were a couple ponies already in the bath and others in the steam rooms. All conversation stopped as all ponies looked at me. I went in a changing chamber and came out naked with just a small towel covering my waist. Many ponies looked at me ether with large smiles to be able to see me bare chest or were wildly blushing. I slowly entered the tub just to give the mares around a good show. As soon that I was confortable position, a mare in the tub with me approached me. "I...I have question for you? " The pink mare with a yellow mane asked. "I have an answer for you. Ask away! " I said smoothly. "Well...could you tell us what was that yell we heard in that room. " A seductive smiled appeared on my face. I know that I am a good looking creature to the pony eye, so let’s take my charms to my advantage. I grabbed that mare’s right cheek and slowly rubbed it with my thumb. "Let’s just say that fingers are better than hooves. Anyway what’s your name? " I said teasingly Her cheeks redden beneath my thumb. "Li...Lily. My name is Lily. " I let go of her cheek and grabbed a sponge and some soap and offered it to Lily. "Well Lily...shall we make a deal? You clean me and I clean you. "I asked in a very sensual way. Her entire face turned red as she grabbed the sponge and soap. Man it is fun to have power but I have to be careful to not start something I would regret but for now let’s just enjoy my bath. Well that was hot!!! Anyway hope you like this chapter. The next one will a bit more time because the will soon finish my other story (I’m on the last chapter.)
luna supriseView OnlineFall to Equestrialuna supriseAs I exit the spa, I see that time has passed faster than I was expecting and my stomach was whining for the lack of nutriment. I walk through the streets and I asked myself what could happen next. I suddenly bumped into a male pony. Shining armor! What was he doing here? -ha! Mister Martin! I was looking for you. I have to important massage to tell you, one from the princesses and the other from me. -let’s start with your massage -I would like to thank you and to offer you anything that you want for saving my rump and my job. So he was the one who charged me when I made Tia yelp. -You can buy me something to eat if that is in your budget? I smile appeared on his lips. –Of course it is! Please follow me. I followed him into what seems to be a fancy restaurant. I found it amusing to see the waitresses fight each other to be our table’s waitress. Shining armor wanted to tell me the other message he had for me but I asked him to wait till after our meal. I decided to learn more about him. It seems that the Sombra incident in the crystal palace hasn’t passed yet but they have met the changlings with queen Chrysalis. A waitress arrived to our table. He took a basic tomato salad but I decided to take a more adventurist path. Two simple words slipped thought my lips which caused the mare serving us to blush “Surprise me”. Our meal arrived to our table simultaneously. Shining got the salad that he ordered, he made the remark that what I received was not even in the menu Spaghetti with béchamel sauce with a small bouquet of roses. I took one of the roses out of the bouquet and I took a good whiff of it but it did not smell like roses should smell. It had a sent that aroused my senses. When I turned to the waitresses I say them whisper between themselves with a strong blush on their faces. Those naughty little ponies. When finished eating, shining paid for the meal while I thanked the waitresses for the meals leaving the flowers there. Only a couple feet out of the restaurant, Shining started to talk about the massage once again. -Are you ready for your next massage? -Yea sure. -The princesses have offered you a place to stay at the canterlot castle and you may stay there tonight. The transport will be by carriage and you will be served the most luxurious life that ponies can offer. -and what will happen if I refuse. -Wha… why would you refuse such an offer? -I already have a job here in ponyville and I promised pinky pie I would stay at her place tonight. Many ponies will be sad if I disappeared like that. -So will the princesses if you refuse. He is putting me in a difficult position. I hate this. -Would you allow me to think about it? He smiled and nodded. –Thank you again for saving me. See you some other time. With that he disappeared. Leaving me alone with my thoughts. I walked and walk trying to clear my mind until I realized that I am at the tree in the hill. The night has overpowered the day now, stars glistening in the pitch black sky. I decided to lie down on the ground besides the tree and to watch the relaxing sky as I used my hands like a pillow. After a while, I heard the hoof steps behind me and Luna’s voice. -Are thou awake? She asked, a bit more than a whisper. I closed my eyes and started to breathe louder than usual to try and trick her. I can hear her approaching me. I can feel her hovering above me, watching my every move. A sudden touch of a fabric touches my stomach and tries to lift my shirt. Since when does she wear fabric? My shirt now lifted to my armpits leaving my bare chest exposed to the elements. A new feeling appeared on my chest; the blissful touch of fur on my skin. Was she lying on top of me? Doing my best to not break character is getting harder by the second. -Mmmh! So warm! She moaned She was right. My body temperature is increasing by the second and that’s not the only thing that’s increasing. My mind went blank when I felt Luna’s hot breath on my face, my eyes shot open. Her face was so close to mine, her puckered lips diving in for a kiss, her eyes half open to give more energy to her sense of touch and her cheeks that are covered in a deep red blush. -What are you doing? The sudden sound of my voice caused her to shoot herself away from to land on her rump in front of me still blushing red but this time from embarrassment. Now in front of me, I can see that she is wearing socks, light blue socks that made the blue in her eyes pop out. -We are sorry. -For what? Being curious? I burst into laughter to make her feel more comfortable. -It will take much more than that to make me hate you, luna. -But we tried to… I placed a finger on her lips to make her stop talking. I knew she would just degrade herself if I didn’t stop her. -The past is history, the future is a mystery and the present is a gift that why we call it a present. As I said last night, do not worry about the past, live as you still can. If you wanted to cuddle you could have just ask. Thank you kung Fu Panda. Even though my words were cheesy, it still worked. She looked at me with tear filled eyes; a smile on her blushing face. -thou always know what to say. -I don’t want to brag but yea, I do. I said jokingly. Before a can react, Luna pounced on me to cuddle against my warmth. We stayed there on the ground in each other’s embrace; her trying to get as much warmth as she can and I petting her silky mane and fur. We stayed like that in what feel like a couple seconds but was actually 30 minutes. She told me that she had to continue her nightly duty and hopes to see me tomorrow night. I told myself that it was late enough and went back towards pinky’s place. Shadows passed by me multiple times making me feel a bit nervous. My head got struck by something hard. Holding the painful spot with both of my hands and screamed in pain. I was being attacked! But by what? I turned my head to see who was attacking me but there was nopony there. I hit me again and this time strong enough to knock me out. I woke up with a massif headache. Holding my head with my right hand to help calm down the pain. Little by little my senses came back to me. It seems that I was in some sort of cavern lighted up with torches. It seems that I was lying on a basic white mattress while I was K.O. I got off the mattress and landed on something squishy. I crouched down to see what it was and what I saw brought fear to my heart. Thick green slime.
Understanding the misunderstoodView OnlineFall to EquestriaUnderstanding the misunderstoodThe entire room was covered in slime, slippery slime. From all the fimfictions that I’ve red I somewhat know where I am. I manage to slowly walk to one of the torches so that I can use it to my advantage. I looked around and saw a basic wooden door at the other side of the room. Using the wall to help me walk I made my way to the door. It seems this room is one of the many rooms of this long corridor which was only lit by torches as well. Squinting my eyes to see better in the poorly lit corridor, I scouted to see if there is any changeling patrolling. I did not see any movements in both right and left. I randomly decided to go right hoping that I did not take the wrong way. With only my torch as my weapon, I couldn’t do much damage but it was still better than nothing. I silently walked this long corridor while passing by many other wooden doors nether of them I opened. I did not want to blow my cover by pure curiosity. As I walked I could hear more and more voices, screams, cheers. Eventually I was able to see a new light source, a window. When I walked to the window what I saw has only brought more fear into my heart. In a massif room with what looks like emerald chandeliers lighting up the room. Chrysalis, close to her throne, was preaching to her entire army of changelings of how they have found a creature which has an industrial amount of love and that it can power her army with to take her revenge on princess Cadence. Is the creature she is talking about was me? Do I wave that much love in me? And she was going to use me to bring destruction! I can’t accept that. I have to do something before it’s too late. Good thing that the window does not have glass to stop my plan. I brought all my courage inside me and screamed. -You won’t be able to do anything if I refuse to give you any of my love. Silence filled the room as all the changelings looked at me with surprise. -H-How did you break free? Asked Chrysalis. An elder looking changeling approached her. -I can explain that my queen. I am part of the examination crew and I discovered that that creature can increase its body heat significantly which must of caused the bindings to melt against his warm skin. -And it’s now you tell me! -it was just a theory before my queen. I started to hear hissing behind me. I turned around to see three changelings with their horns lit and ready to strike aimed at me. Cold sweats were almost dripping off me. -Bring him to my room. I need to talk with it. Chrysalis voice echoed in the room which caused the menacing horns of the changelings stopped glowing but they are still aimed at me. The changelings muttered something I couldn’t understand before pushing me towards must be the chrysalis’s room. Her door is larger and darker than the others. The guards opened the door with their magic and pushed me inside the room. The first thing I see was the luxurious bed in the middle of the circular room with Luna on it. Does she think that will actually work? I walked to the bed and sat on it, that’s when I saw a bottle on a coffee table. When I looked closer at the bottle but the dim light gave me a hard time to see the inscriptions. -Its dandelion wine. Want some? She said in Luna’s voice. I sight. –I know it’s you chrysalis under that pony mask. -You are smarter than you look. She said as she burst in a ball of green fire to turn back to her original form. Is she implying that I look stupid? I she is trying to make me like her, she is doing a horrible job. Suddenly, my body was lifted by magic and I was thrown back down on the bed. Next thing I know is that I was lying on my back with chrysalis on top of me. Her eyes were filled with lust and she was licking her lips with appetite. I was able to feel her warmth through my clothing. I have to think of something before I lose myself to this lust. I know that I can’t overpower her; her magic will bring me back to the bed. I was too far from the wine bottle to be able to smash it on her head and she would get angry that may cause a painful experience to me. I had one choice left; it was risky but it was better than nothing. -Is this what you really want! Do you want to be forced to take love for the rest of your life? Do you want to be known as the unloved? I screamed She stopped her advances as tears started to appear in her eyes. She slowly got of me and sat at the edge of the bed. -You..you may leave. She was now crying a river. I knew that my words were brutal and that they were going to hurt her. Time to fix what I have started. I started to rub her back –You still haven’t answered my questions. She turned to stare at me with eyes filled with both anger and sadness. -Of course I don’t want that! She screamed at me. I grabbed her hoof and held it tightly in my hands. She made no movement to pull away; she just stared I my hands warming her hoof. –then what is stopping you to change your ways? -The ponies. They always fight us back and ran away from us like we had some type of disease. I am a queen and I have an entire kingdom to feed. Her tears were now flowing like rivers on her cheeks. She must have been holding her sadness for quite a long time. –I tried so hard to get so far but in the end it doesn’t even matter. Where did I hear that? It seems that she was no evil, just misunderstood. Anyway I think I know how to fix all this. First, let’s try to calm her down. I stretched my arms wide and called her name. When she saw that I was inviting her to a hug, she just threw herself into my arms and cried in my shoulder. We stayed like that for a couple of minutes before she broke the hug. That is when I grabbed her face and looked directly into her eyes. –I think I know how to fix all this. I got off the bed under chrysalis’s confused gaze and opened the door. When the door was opened a massif ray of magic blasted in front of making me freeze in place. Screams of pain and loud explosions was able to be heard from the room. Suddenly Celestia entered the room with her horn lit up and her face corrupted by wrath. -Now you have brought it to far chrysalis. I allowed you to stay alive after the invasion incident but now; taking the first individual to treat me like a friend! This time there is no running away. She blasted the unprepared changeling with a beam of magic. I just had enough time to throw myself in the path of the attack, receiving the massif blow. The attack was so strong that my body flew across the room. I’ve rolled on the floor in pain as chrysalis came up to me to see if I was alright. Celestia was frozen in place with a shocked expression on her face. She did not know what to do. I painfully got myself up with chrysalis’s help as she was thanking me saving her from that blast. My chest hurt so much and I was spitting blood on the floor. I asked chrysalis to help me get near Tia, she protested saying that I need my injuries to be healed before. I calmly looked at her and smiled even my entire was starting to get even more painful by the second. –Please. We both slowly walked to the frozen princess. Once next to her, I brought my hand to her cheek which caused her to look at me. Doing my best to hide the pain in my face I spoke to her with a gentle yet wavy voice. -Do you see wear anger has brought you? Pain will only bring more pain. -I..I am so sorry. Tears were now rolling down her cheeks. That is when I’ve lost all strength in my legs. I have prepared myself for more pain yet it did not come. Both the princess and the queen have caught me before I hit the floor with their magic. Soon after I was on the bed with them at each of my side (Tia was at my right and Chrysalis was at my left). I was still not finished with what I needed to do. I looked at Celestia. -Please give chrysalis another chance. I know what she did in the past was bad but at the time she had no other choice. You above all other ponies know how difficult it is to take care of ones kingdom. So please, help her feed her people. I was not even able to hear her answer. My vision got blurry as my eyes started to get heavy. That was when I saw the massif amount of blood on my chest. It seems that I have received more than just internal injuries. I wasn’t able to hear anything as my vision got darker and darker. What will happen? Will I die there? A smiled appeared unconsciously on my face as I thought of the adventures I had here in this world. Everything happened so fast. -Well. It was fun while it lasted. I said barely conscious. I was able hear the vague screams of the two girls besides me but they sounded to be so far. I finally fell in a deep sleep. What will happen now?
The end.View OnlineFall to EquestriaThe end.I was walking in a long black corridor not knowing where I was going neither why I was going there, it just felt right. It felt like I was walking for like hours none stop but I was not tired or exhausted; I just continued in my way with only the memories of my past. I heard a voice behind me and it seems to be calling my name but when I turned around to see who it was, there were nobody to be found. I went back to my walk to nowhere but the same voice keeps calling for me again and again and every time I turned back to see who it was with never a soul to be found. -Please… stop… I did what the voice told me to do, I don’t know why? I just did. I waited and waited for something; anything to happen. -Please don’t go there. That voice again. I looked behind me but this time there were something in front of me. A floating black silhouette was there; I was not able to say if it was a pony or human. -Why? -Please don’t go there. It repeated itself before vanishing. I looked back at my original direction; it looked so warm pleasant, I could even see a small light at the end of the corridor. The other side seems cold and unpleasant. What should I do, Go to the warmth or follow the voice? Suddenly the memories of ponyville appeared in my head. The ponies that I have met, the party in the town, the walks with Luna, the fun I had with Celestia, the embrace of Chrysalis. For some reason those memories to me to follow the voice’s order which I did. I walked for just a couple of seconds before a bright white light covered my body, it felt warm and pleasant as it gave me energy to run as fast as I can. The more I ran the more intense the light became. It almost felt like I was flying at high speed; it felt good. I saw that I was going towards a wall at full speed but I didn’t stop neither did I slow down. I closed my eyes, ready for the impact. I opened my eyes in a room that I didn’t recognize. The light of the moon was able to shine though the gigantic windows in the room. The room itself was very luxurious; the walls are white with golden markings on them, the bed I was in is enormous and extremely soft. I helped myself up with my elbows; that was when I felt a sharp pain in my chest. My entire torso was covered in bandages (they seem still freshly applied). I scooted myself to the edge of the bed to go for a short walk to see what append. When at the edge I saw nurse ponies and witchdoctor changeling resting on the floor close to the bed on each of their very own pillow. Looking around the room, I saw some clothing on the table next to the bed. At the same time I realized that I was naked for some reason and my original clothing was nowhere to be found. Once I reached the table I saw that it was a snow white bathrobe. Dressed and ready for my new adventure I got of the bed. My legs were not able to support my sudden appearance of my new weight. Have I gotten weaker? How long was I here? Using the table to help me back on my feet, I looked around if I woke anybody in the room. To my sight it seems that there are sleeping too deeply. I waited a couple minute to allow my legs to adapt to my weight. Once ready, I silently made my way to the only door in the room. Just like last time, I made sure that there was nobody before leaving the room. Slowly walking in the large corridors, I made my way to a very large door with light which seems to be escaping underneath the door. I brought an ear on the door by pure curiosity. -What do you mean you can’t reach him anymore? -It means that exactly! -Girls! Please, let’s not get angry. That is not what he would want. Three girls seem to be in that room and they sound familiar. Looking thought the key hold; I saw both princess of Equestria and the queen of changelings sitting close to a lit chimney. I smiled thinking that my words actually help an entire kingdom. I slowly and quietly opened the door to their room to surprise them and sneakily approached them. -Chrysalis, you know that it takes a lot of energy to go in dreams even more when it’s a death dream. The changeling sight in defeat. –Yeah I know, it’s just.. I don’t want to lose him. -None of us want that to happen. Responded Luna while patting her on back. –And what I meant that I can’t reach him is that I no longer see his dream in the nocturnal haven. -That’s because I am no longer there! I say teasingly. All three of the girls turn around to stare at me in disbelief and shock. All three of them were so chocked that they couldn’t even move. -Is..Is that you Louis? Asked Chrysalis. -The one and only. Before I knew it, Luna threw herself in my arms which cause the pain in my chest to reveal itself to me once again. All three of them were shedding tears if happiness, to see my well-being. All of us sat close of the fire in the chimney to keep us warm as I asked a couple of questions. It seems that I was in a coma for 4 months and during that time the Changeling Empire has joined with the pony kingdom under the rule that one must not manipulate the other in any way. I smiled as listened to what happened during my nap. They also told me that Luna often tried to speak with me in my dream while I was in my coma to help me wake up. I do not have all the memories of that dream but I do certainly remember that silhouette. Could that be her? I invited Luna to rest her head on my lap which she happily accepted. The two other didn’t protest out of jealousy to her better treatment. She fell asleep as I petted her head; if she didn’t talk to me, I would maybe be dead. The two other girls continued to tell me what happened while resting their head on my shoulders. Eventually, Celestia had to leave to raise the sun and warn the maids (and doctors) that I was awake. After waking Luna, we (me, Luna and chrysalis) decided to go in the dining room to get something in our stomach. Waffles with maple syrup! Delicious. We all ate the same thing except for the changelings; they had some sort of pink heart on their plates. I have to ask Chrysalis how she collects love. Once our meal finished, maids came up to me and asked me to follow them. I looked back at the princesses who had a large smile on their lips. The maids brought to the room that I first arrived. This time I went to the large windows to look outside. The massif kingdom of canterlot, was at full view. I was in the canterlot castle. –I sorry pinky, I was not able to arrive. I murmured to the window. The maids gave me new close that looked quite fancy; a three piece suit with a sheathed sword tied to my belt. I felt really badass in this outfit. I went back to the girls who were waiting for me to show up with impatience. When I showed up I saw Chrysalis biting her inferior lip, Celestia was blushing slightly and Luna just couldn’t look away. -So, how do I look? I teased. -Thy looks better than we tough. Luna’s answer made me giggle a bit. I approached the girls asking what we should do now. All three of them smile and walked to a balcony outside. I followed them to then be surprised by a sea of individual in front of me; a mixture of both changelings and ponies. Cheers were able to be heard as I entered their field of view. Two questions popped in my head; what are the girls doing and how did she manage to get all these individuals here so quickly. (I just woke up last night.) Celestia calmed the sea of subject and started to speak. -Thank you all for coming here. We are all here to pay our respect to the one who has united our society together with his words of wisdom. The first individual who offered their friendship to me, the person who help Luna to live without the fear of her past, the one who sacrifice his soul to save Chrysalis. The one who brought us together. I walked forward and waved at the massif bundle of ponies and changeling. Without warning, something cold was put on my head; some sort of hat. -And the new king of Equestria. Celestia finished. -KING? I said while turning toward the girls who all three of them had a sly smile. And our story end here with a sweet ending but under this will be explicit content that only optional to read at your will. You have been warned. After a week of royal initiation, I was exhausted of righting files and reading the giant rule books. I went to my room to change into something more comfortable and relax but when I entered my room there were three goddesses on my bed. -You know that being king means more than just royal duties. Said Celestia with her bedroom eyes staring at me. -I am sorry girls but I am a bit too tired to do anything. I said teasingly. I was grabbed by magic (I don’t know who’s) and was thrown on the bed with them. Celestia and Luna were already undoing my three piece suit as Chrysalis was on top of me with a bottle floating besides her. -Once I give you this potion, you won’t fell your sleepiness anymore. I was expected her to pour the mixture in my mouth but with my surprise, she brought the bottle to her own lips. Then brought her lips against mine, forcing a torrent of sweetness into my mouth. Barely time to drink the mixture, I was fighting her long tongue in my mouth. Without even realizing, the two princesses got me completely naked while I was making out with the queen. I broke the kiss; I was out of breath from the voracity of chrysalis’s kiss. Deep blue hooves grabbed my head and forced me into another kiss. Luna was significantly less experienced than Chrysalis from how sloppy it was.my chin now was being covered in her saliva while she explored my mouth with her tough. A mischievous idea popped in my head that made me deepen the kiss. We fought back her tough assault as I brought my hand to her horn. She moaned breathlessly in my mouth while was jerking her horn off (thank you for that knowledge Lyra). She broke the kiss and panted hard while I made her feel good. This time it was Celestia turn to exchange saliva with me as she brought my face close to hers. To my surprise, she was more the one wanted to be dominated over to dominate. I gladly obliged her request as I intruded her mouth with my tongue. This time it was my turn to moan in her mouth as I felt something warm and wet covering the tip of my dick. I this point, Luna grabbed my hand and started to sloppily suck on my fingers. At this point I was wondering if I had the energy to satisfy all three of them. Celestia broke the kiss when she felt my finger scratch the back of one of her ears. I took the occasion to look at myself; I was shocked to see that my rod was significantly longer and larger than usual. Could it be because of the potion? Chrysalis made eye contact with me while she made my length slowly disappear in her mouth. Waves of pleasure bolted the entire length of my spine as she played with me with her tongue. When I turned my head toward Luna, my mouth dropped. The very erotic scene of the masturbating herself with my numb hand made my dick twitch I chrysalis mouth. Before I knew it, my head was forced down as darkness covered my eyes. A strong feminine scent invaded my senses as salty yet addictive juices entered my mouth. Was Celestia sitting on my face? I started to eat her out as the other girls were having their on fun. I was barely able to breath under Tia’s weight yet I wanted to warn that I was about to blow from Chrysalis fine work. The queen seemed to have realized that I was at my limit as she called the princesses name. Both ponies stopped what they were doing as they brought their lust filled face close to my manhood. All three of them made one last lick to the entire length of it; with that my body went stiff with pleasure as my load shot through the air. To my surprise they collected my semen in some sort of vial with the help of their magic to keep later for reason I did not know. -We don’t know if ponies/changelings can procreate with humans. We are just collecting this for… hum… research. Said Chrysalis. Without warning, Chrysalis lifted her body above me then her wet marehood on top of my dick. -Time for the real fun to begin. She said as she probed herself with my tip. She moaned loudly as I penetrated her most sensitive parts. Her tongue lolling out and panting she bounced herself on me; with each bounce I felt her warm and moist walls milking me furiously. While she had her own fun the other girls decided the switch with each other with their original place. Luna tasted a bit sweeter than her sister yet just as addictive. Eventually, Chrysalis came with a loud moan as she fell sideways. Now lying on her back panting of exhaustion gave place to the other girls. Luna was the first to react. Placing herself on top of me and probing her lips she took deep breaths to prepared herself. It was obvious that this was her fist time and she was nervous. I placed my hand on her cheek which seems to have calmed her down. With a single and swift motion, she forced herself balls deep. Her scream was filled with lust and pain as her eyes started to fill with tears. -You don’t need to continue if it hurts too much. I offered her -NO! We want this. We want to continue. With those words she started pumping me slowly. I felt like my dick would be squished by the pressure of her tightness. Her moans filled the room as she was gasping for air. To my surprise, Celestia came silently in my hand. She was biting her bottom to keep her from moaning. I only realized it by the explosion of juices on my hand. Soon after, it was Luna’s turn to cum; landing beside the changeling with a wide smile on her cute face. How am I resisting so much? This time it was Tia’s turn to have a ride on me. -Could you hold me as we do it? She asked as she forced herself on me. With the remaining strength that I had I moved up in a sitting position as I hugged her tightly. The feeling of her fluffy chest on my face was blissful. As I rubbed her back my fingers, I accentually touched the base of her wings which made her yelp. -Are your wings sensitive? -That is up to you to discover. Challenge accepted! As she lightly bonce on me, I started to give her wings a massage. By her reactions, it seems that she really liked what I was doing. This time I was starting to feel my limit again. -Tia! I’m ganna… -so will I. We both came at the same time was we both filled the air with our moans. We both fell on the soft bed side by side. The two other scooted close to me to cuddle. Yep. This was my new life now and it is good. -It is good to be king. The girls giggled from my words. They all fell asleep while using my chest/stomach as a pillow. I can get used to this.
Resurrection of a fallen bronyView OnlineFall to EquestriaResurrection of a fallen bronyThank you all so much for all your support and care it was all really appreciated. Sorry if I all scared you with the cancellation of the story, I was acting with a broken heart. Now I am feeling much better. My EX soon realized that she lost more than expected and I manage to find myself a job that makes me happy. Why am I telling you all that? Because I accidently brought you all in this mayhem and made you all sad by my sudden reaction. I just wanted to say that thanks to the warm hearts of the Brony community. I am now working on my other story for the moment but when I wil be finish with that story. I will come back to this one. BROHOOF YOU ALL!!!!
