INfamous Twilight story

I stronglynx do not own mlp all right go to hasobro .

              Place Canterlot  TIME 4:30 DATE 8/31/14

EVERYBODY PLEASE LEAVE THE AREA OR YOU WILL GET HURT.  WE are live here in Canterlot were a suspect Bio-Terrorists Twilight Sparkle has attacked the royal sisters castle. The royal guards have set up a blocked to keep out media. We will keep you up to date on BOOM. IT look like a part of the castle has blown up a figure is emerging out of the rubble. Halt our we will us force. Haha you think you can stop me. Fire starts to come out of no where. Twilight stop this now. Why should I Rainbow the way they treat us. This isn't like you Twilight you have to stop this. I'm sorry  Rainbow but I not going to stop now after what I been thought these past two weeks. If your not going to stop then I'll stop you my shelf. I like to see you try. Pause hi that's me out there. My name is twilight sparkle. Now you may be thinking why am I fighting one of my best friends. It's because they betray me all of them did when I get my powers. I guess it would be better if I showed you how this all started. end of prologue

Hi stronglynx here but just call me lynx I would like to thank you for reading the first chapter of my first story. Please tell me how I did below and give me some tips to help me get better.