Chaotic Chronicles

Alright this is my first story I have ever wrote, so give me a break if theres any grammar mistakes or anything, just leave a comment if there is any.

Also, whenever i’m thinking to myself, it will look like this. So anything bold is me thinking to myself.

Besides all of that, lets get this story on the go.

Welcome to…

The Amazing World Of Gumball!

Heh, jk.

Welcome to…

The Chaotic Chronicles

Darkness. That’s all I could see when I awoke. I lazily stretch out my arms and look around at my surroundings, but when I looked around though, there was nothing but total darkness. Where am I? I thought. Like as if on cue, a being suddenly popped into existence, but when I tried to get a good look at it, I couldn’t because it was wearing something black, so it was hard to see behind it. I open my mouth to talk, but noticed that no words came out when I tried to talk. “Don’t try and talk young one, only beings like I can talk in this realm of existence, but with my permission, you can”. I wait a couple of seconds and start feeling a tingling sensation in my throat, then I let out a cough to clear my throat.

“Are you god?” I said carefully. “Yes and no, yes I am a god, but no, I am not THE God of everything if thats what your referring to.” Said the being.

“Then who are you?” I calmly said. “I am but one being, Death.” Death? But how could he be here if… Crap, I died didn’t I?

“Yes, don’t you remember how you died?” Death said. Wait, he can read my thoughts? “Yes…” Death said a little annoyed. “Well, this is embarrassing, but how did I die? I can’t remember much of what happened” I said slowly.

Death then sighed and turned around slowly and lifted his hand up. A few seconds later, his hand started glowing, and a couch and t.v appeared in front of him. “Sit down and watch, i’m not in the mood to tell you myself”. Death walked around the couch and sat down himself, looking like he was bored out of his mind. I then walked around the couch and sat down as well. Death then makes a remote appear in his hands and clicks a button. The t.v then flashed and I started to remember everything.

I wake up early in the morning, and looked over at my clock, which was going off loudly. I slam my fist into the clock and it stops. Finally, that always gets on my nerves in the morning. I lazily get out of bed and walk towards my closet. What to wear, what to wear. I look around at my shirts hanging in the closet trying to find something good to wear. I then see one that looks like a good one, I decide to wear it, then I pick out pants to match, and I put them on.

After getting dressed, I walk downstairs, once I walk into the kitchen, I hear a familiar voice. “Luke, come get your breakfast”. I look around the corner and see my mother, who was wearing a light blue shirt with khakis pants on. She looks at my shirt and puts on a deadpan look. “Luke honestly, I will never figure out why you like that show” my mother said and walked away. I look at my shirt and check to see what she was talking about, I was wearing a light blue shirt as well, with the word BRONY on the front, with a picture of a outline of Rainbow Dash on the front.

I then look back up to see my breakfast waiting for me, Bacon, Biscuits, and Orange Juice. I pick them up and take them to the table and start eating them. Once I finished I picked up my plate and placed it over by the sink, which I would wash later. I then head over to the bathroom and start getting ready for school. After a couple of minutes I head back to the kitchen and pick up my backpack and put it on. I was ready for school, and all that was left was to tell my mom i’m leaving. “Mom i’m leaving, see you this afternoon”. I wait a couple of seconds to hear my mother yelling from upstairs saying “Have a great day!”. I walk outside after hearing that and start heading to school.

Once I turn the block I hear a scream from what sounded like a woman. I start running towards the noise and it lead me to a yellow house that had a very overgrown lawn. I walk around the house and see a woman held up against the wall by a very tall man, at least 6 foot 5. The man was holding her in a grip that looked like he was choking her, and he kept yelling at her “Give me all your money lady!”. I look up at the man and stupidly say “Leave the woman alone!”. The man looks over to me and I instantly regret it, cause when he turned to look at me, I saw a M1911 in his right hand. As soon as he realized I saw the pistol, he looks over at it and smiles devilishly. The man then drops the lady and slowly starts walking towards me.

I start walking backwards, quickly picking up speed every second, but fate had another idea. I walk back one more step and trip over a metal object, I land on my face, and felt a ton of pain rushing through my nose. Darn it, I just broke my nose for sure. I roll over and start feeling my nose, which felt deformed and broken with blood dripping down it slowly. The man then laughs and takes a step closer, which made me flinch and fall over. “Hah, you’re going to be worth a lot once I hold you up for hostage”. I then stand up and pick up the nearest object I could find to throw at the man so that I could escape, I look over at both my sides, and see that there was a bucket full of what looked like ice cold water in it. I pick it up and splash the man with the water, then threw the bucket in his face  and start to run away.

I run for what felt like hours and slowly stop my pace. I turn around and look to see if he was following me, and find nothing besides the empty sidewalk and street. I turn back around, my head still looking back, and when I started walking, I bump into something and I fall to the ground. I look up to see what I bumped into, and I instantly knew this was going to end bad. The same man who was robbing the lady a while ago was looking at me in the eyes, with what looked like rage. He looks over at me and slowly brings out the M1911 and aims it at me, smiling devilishly. “Kid, you really shouldn’t have done that, plus your a witness of me robbing somebody, so I’m afraid you can’t leave”. He then pulls the trigger and everything goes black, and I lose consciousness.

I then stop remembering everything, and notice that i’m back on the couch in the dark void I was in before. I instantly start crying over my death, realizing that my parents and nobody else knew about my death. “It’s ok young one, everybody makes mistakes in their lifetime, and thats why I came up to a solution that will do us both good”. I look up at Death with my eyes glittering of hope and ask him “What?”. Death then smiles and says back “I’m going to bring you back to life, but this time, you will be…” Death ends suddenly. I look up at him for a second, with worry in my eyes. “What, I will be what?”. Death laughs and looks at me in the eyes and says “I’m not going to spoil anything for you, so you can find out yourself”. Death then waves his hand and looks past me. I turn around and see a giant whirlpool in the middle of the void, but it was glowing all the colors of the rainbow. “Go on,” Death says “I’m not going to stay here forever you know”.

I look into the whirlpool and think to myself, Eh, what do I got to lose? I jump into the whirlpool and get sucked up in the current, quickly going down into the center. As soon as I fall into the center, I start to lose consciousness again. I have a feeling this is going to happen a lot. I feel my body slowly falling from what felt like a big fall and touched the ground, light enough to not hurt me. I then completely black out from the fall and from the lack of sleep.

So that’s the intro to the Chaotic Chronicles, and i’m looking forward to writing some more chapters. What do you think, is it a pretty good start to a story? Leave a comment!