Payment on Assertiveness
By Jonathan Chung Nguyen
Disclaimer: This is horrible written in 2 hours and should not be taken seriously
After series of chaotic events caused by new Fluttershy, Fluttershy has locked herself inside her home. Hoping that she will never harm someone close to her again. Pinkie and Rarity, standing outside her door, attempts to cheer Fluttershy up. As the iron hurricane walks towards them.
"Iron Will's my name. Training ponies is my game!", as Iron Will breaks the the fourth wall by smiling towards you. Rarity responds saying, "What a darling little catch phrase." As Iron Will exclaims,
"Your friend Flutteshy loved Iron Will's catch phrases. Word on the street is that she doesn't take no guff from no pony!"
As Iron will advances forwards saying, "So Iron Will is here to collect Iron Will's Fee." In that instant, Pinkie Pie goes straight to Fluttershy's door, and blocks Iron will saying, "Wa-wa-wait! We don't know where Fluttershy is so give us some time to search for her." As Pinkiepie stares into Iron Will's cold look.
In that moment, a small girlish squeak came from the door. Iron will walking back towards the door saying, "Huh, sounds like the search won't be necessary. Iron Will collects...Now!" As Iron Will begins breaking down the door saying, "Your payment is over due Fluttershy!" Making a fist, Iron Will... knocks on the door gently.
As the door opens to reveal Fluttershy. Iron Will, toughening up his posture, glares towards Fluttershy with a piercing stare. Then Iron Will says, "You were nothing but a doormat and Iron Will turned you into a lean, mean, assertive machine!" As Iron Will imitates piston movements. Iron will then looks deeply into Fluttershy demanding, "Now pay Iron Will what you owe to Iron Will!" As Iron Will flexes his arms, threatening.
Fluttershy, calm, answers, "No."
As Iron Will looks deeply into Fluttershy, steam streaming out of his ears. As Iron Will exclaims, "I hate to be you because if Iron Will doesn't get Iron Will's payment right now your going to be in a world of HURT!"
As Fluttershy, standling firmly on her door step, explains, "As i recall. During your workshop you, promised one hundred percent satisfaction guaranteed or you pay nothing, well I'm not satisfied" As Fluttershy stands firmly in her doorway.
As Iron Will, in disbelief, asks, "What do you mean your not satisfied! Every pony has always been satisfied!" As Iron Will marches straight towards Fluttershy. Fluttershy, standing strong, retorts, "Well I guess I'm the first then."
Iron Will, assertive, stares blankly into Fluttershy, to say, "Well since you aren't one hundred percent satisfied, let me fix that for you."
As Fluttershy questions, "Wha....?" confused and frightening from the approaching minotaur.
"Iron Will will give one hundred percent satisfaction." As Iron Will pushes Fluttershy inside, locking the door behind him. Terrified, Fluttershy shyly whispers, "Bu-But wait...I don't need to be satisfied..." But was cut off as Iron Will pushes Fluttershy towards her bed.
"Bu-bu-but wait, No...., you can't do this..." as Fluttershy loses her voice to the strong will opposing her. "Rule number one: don't be shy look them in the eyes!" As Iron Will bends over to push Fluttershy down on the bed.
As Fluttershy exclaims," NOOOo.... please... you can't.....", but then Iron Will states, "Rule number two: When someone tries to block, show them that you ROCK!"
As his dick penetrates Fluttershy deeply. His thick hot cock, throbbing inside of Fluttershy. Tunneling deeply into her vagina. As Fluttershy howls loudly, moaning deeply. Her insides, twisted, intertwined with his thick dick inside.
"AWWWhnn.... No... stop please...", moans Fluttershy as Iron Will thrusts into Fluttershy. The bed trembling from each thrust, penetrating her. Angel, outside, looks away from the horrible sight. As PinkiePie and Rarity attempt to break in.
"Don't worry darling we are going to save you!" exclaims Rarity outside.
Iron Will, crouched over, grabs on to Fluttershy's chin. He forcefully kisses her. Fluttershy, in tears a bit, is mindless from the constant thrusting from Iron Will's body. Iron Will still caressing Fluttershy, playfully intertwining tongues with her.
As Iron Will continues to plunge her insides. Thrusting his dick in and out. Back and forth, as Fluttershy trembles from every impact. Her body frail and weak. Her mind constantly blank and delusional. Iron Will hunching over, starting to putt his hoof into her ass.
As the solid thick hoof burrows into the inside of her ass. Fluttershy, losing her mind, moans loudly from the extent of pleasure. Her mind filled with constant images and fear, from the sensation shes experiencing. As her body heats up, and Iron Will's hot dick, burning deep inside.
With every thrust causing an explosion of pleasure, Fluttershy, twitches. Every thrust and grind being impaled into her. He voice shrilled and lisped. As she moans shyly, "Awhnnn Awhnnn.... your too big...." Iron Will, silent and cold, begins to thrust deeper and harder into her. Twisting and corkscrewing her insides. Churning the insides of her slippy wet vagina.
His hoof, balling up and squeezed tight from the insides of Fluttershy's ass. Iron Wills face twisted now, with pleasure. As Fluttershy now succumbs to the pleasure. Tightens her face holding close to Iron Will. Iron Will now penetrating Fluttershy, thrusts deeply into Fluttershy. Hitting the end of her womb as he ejaculates inside.
With Fluttershy screaming a moan loudly, "AWWWNNNNNnnnnn....." As the steamy liquid engulfs her insides, heating her body and making her tremble. Iron Will, satisfied...
As Fluttershy falls back, lifeless and unconscious. With Iron Will crouching over her, giving her a passionate kiss.
A few minutes later
Fluttershy and Iron Will are sitting on the bed. As Iron Will explains, "Rule number three: Never apologize, when you can't criticize..." As Iron Will, awkward, still tries to be assertive.
As Fluttershy lays on his shoulder...giving him a light kiss...
Dear Princess Celestia,
Today, I tried to be assertive. My trainer, the famous Iron Will, help me with some lessons. But those lessons brought grief to my closest friends... Iron Will also wanted me to pay a fee for my lessons. I tried to be assertive, the end result... i gained something special.
An assertive pony,
Fluttershy
I'm a dick, sorry if i'm too THICK
[inside Joke if you know what I mean]
Author's Notes/Morale
Well for one, there is no morale. Unless really you want to be creative with this. When I was writing this story, I think I was tripping balls. Kind of a weird and comedic tone to it. I hatched this idea from what other people might of thought. I know for sure someone was thinking this before me. I kind of speed wrote this so I could be the first one to do it. Also I wanted to see the reaction on people's faces.
Hands down, yes when I sped through it my grammar is horrible. Yeah the pacing may be strange and chaotic, but no one else wrote a story like this. For those people who think they can write a better story, they could always enlighten me on their own, but I can still say, "I did it first." And to those people who are generally offended by rape, I reject your reality and substitute my own.
Rape, almost everyone in the world doesn't want to get rape. Most people also don't want their friends or love ones to get raped. I wrote a story about a shy pony getting "raped", but scientifically it's not rape if she likes it. Now your probably thinking, "Man this guy is a sick bastard", but I can prove that there are worst stories then this out there.
But for those people who believe rape is a horrible thing, your pretty much ignoring the fact that 250,000 cases of male-female rape or attempted rape happen in America alone. Are you doing anything to stop it? Do stories like these effect people who actually get raped? Let me tell you something, I had a friend who actually got raped. I was in Vietnam and Father's family's neighbor was missing. The missing person was a 15 year old child, the next day she was found laying near a stream, pregnant. Did anyone stop her from being rape? Instead of a volitional argument on here, I think you should be focusing on your reality.
And for those who actually took that seriously that was 1 minute spent worth of fluff! It's just like the derpy incident. The comedic tone for these stories is ment for a good ol dark humor. You may dislike this, but that 9/11 pony seems to be better off than me -.-
