Brink
Life Sentence Shortend
Load Full StoryNext ChapterThe Second and Final Installment of Dorchester's Requiem by Mr. Dorchester
Inspired by Living The Dream by kickass222urmom
Bold: Xax or Luce Danneggiato (depending who is talking)
Underlined: Xas
Bold Underlined: Xaxas
Italic: Dorchester when responding to Xax and Xas
Introducing: Longer chapters! Two chapters every day!
Short Summary of Past Stories:
My Favorite: A young man named Ryan was kidnapped by Princess Luna who played a nasty trick on him making him think she was pregnant with his child. Ryan thought the reason he was there was because of a spell incident. After a few months, Princess Luna admitted to stalking Ryan, and then turning him into a pony and getting rid of all of Ryan's memories about his life as a human and filling his mind with fake memories of him and Luna.
The Return: After becoming angry for no reason, which later turns out to be Ryan's past self trying to get his revenge on Luna, he nearly kills Luna and flee's into the Ever Free Forest, where he consults Zecora and is given a memory restoration potion and remembers his past life. He has Luna sent back to the moon, and is returned to his home on Earth.
The Banishment: Luna has stored power and uses it to create a connection between her and the human world. She enters the human world, attempting to get Ryan back. He takes and destroys Luna's half moon necklace, the source of her connection. Permanently destroying her final connection, Celestia finds out and takes away Luna's powers that allow her to have a connection to a different world.
Corruption: The rapture has taken place and Ryan, now known as Dorchester comes for his revenge on Luna. He learns about her marriage, making things worse for him. He later finds out she is pregnant with her husband, Frederic's, twin children. He vows to destroy all that stand in his path. He finds out about The Darkness and how they are trying to awaken a great demonic being known as Luce Danneggiato. He stops them, and absorbs one of The Darkness's powers and becomes an alicorn. Dorchester becomes good and forgives Luna and goes to stop The Darkness after finding out a few of them still remain. Luce is summoned and uses Dorchester's negative emotions and rises from The Great Whirlpool. Dorchester destroys Luce and redeeming himself, sending Luce back into his prison. Dorchester dies shortly after.
Bliss: An alternate story if Dorchester survived. He discovers The Rainbow Factory, and destroys it with the help of King Horus, king of Equestria. Rainbow Dash, the leader of the Rainbow Factory, is sent to a life sentence in prison. Dorchester gets married to a mare named Silvermoon, who is confirmed to have his child. Dorchester learns that he was supposed to die after his encounter with Luce Danneggiato after talking to King Horus, meaning that Luce is not dead. Before the ending, a massive monster from the Godzilla franchise shows up named Biollante and takes away Vinetion's powers for Luce to absorb and hasten his return. Biollante is defeated along but Vinetion's powers are mixed with Luce's. At the ending, Luce takes control of Dorchester and tells him he must choose between Good and Evil. Join Luce, and recreate the universe, or join his friends and suffer a terrible fate. Dorchester flee's and hides in his bedroom for several months, only getting out to eat and go to the bathroom.
Now, I present to you, Brink. The final installment.
CHAPTER ONE: Life Sentence Shortened
“Never again... never again.” I hissed under my breath. I slammed the door shut behind me and sat on the bed, looking out the window.
I kicked the pillow away from me. “I never asked for this.”
Realize it wasn't your fault! Please...
Fuck it... I'm done. I'm done with all of this bullshit! I've made my decision. I'm not turning back now, nothing will stop me. I'm not coming out of here until Luce Danneggiato rises again.
…
Yeah, that's what I thought.
I turned my head back to see the door slightly opening. Silvermoon approached me cautiously.
“What?”
“I just wanted to see how you are doing.”
I turned my head to avoid her gaze. “I'm fine.”
Silvermoon sighed. “Enough pretending, I know you're mad.”
I continued to stare at the window.
“Dorchester, look at me.”
…
“Look at me.”
…
“Look at me!” Silvermoon barked. She grabbed my head, and turned it towards her own face. She stared at me with pleading eyes.
“I'm worried...”
I felt my heart ache inside my chest. I dismissed the feeling.
“Worried about what?”
Silvermoon wrapped her forelegs around me. “About you! It wasn't your fault he got to you.”
I sniffed once.
“You're right about that. But I'm taking myself away until he returns... only then will I come out of this room. I don't want to hurt anyone anymore.”
“You've hurt no one.”
My eye twitched. I opened my mouth to speak, but I quickly closed it.
“When you've finished,” Silvermoon released herself from me.
“You can come back out.”
I sniffed again. I wasn't crying, mind you.
“How long?”
Silvermoon whipped around.
“Until... the foal is born.” I muttered softly.
I looked up to see Silvermoon smiling.
“Just a couple more months.”
I smirked weakly. “You could just say two, you know.”
Silvermoon smiled. “Yeah, I guess so.”
Silvermoon closed the door behind me.
Meanwhile...
Luna stepped forward. “He's not going to come out of that bedroom.”
Discord cracked his knuckles. “I realize that now. Yet the thing I want to know is, why is he blaming himself?”
“I think it's because he feels weak.” Celestia sighed.
Lance shuffled his hooves, Twilight standing next to him. “I guess you're right. I mean, he never wanted this.”
“He think it's all my fault, or his. When it's neither, it's Luce's, of course.” Luna said, no emotion sprung from her voice.
“He just doesn't want to face facts. The poor boy.” King Horus sighed.
Twilight removed her gaze from Lance to look up at everyone. “I can't say much. I just wish there is something I could do.”
Lance put his hoof on his chin. “I think I know what we could do...”
Back in Dorchester's bedroom...
Just... open the door and come out.
...
Please?
Fine.
I jumped off the bed and headed towards the door. I slowly opened it, placing one hoof out. I made my way silently down the hallway into the living room. Silvermoon sat there, listening to music on the radio.
“Hey,” I said waving my hoof.
Silvermoon smiled. “I'm glad you finally came out of there.”
I smiled back. “I think I should go back... send a letter to all our friends letting them know I'm back.”
Silvermoon ran up and hugged me. I felt tears fall on my neck.
“I love you Dorchester.”
“I love you too Silvermoon.”
Silvermoon released herself from me and began to write the letters. I made my way outside, opening the door behind me. I took a deep breath of fresh air. I stretched my wings, making a few popping sounds as I did. I blasted off into the air, feeling the wind going through my wings made me feel alive.
I stopped and landed up on a cloud. I saw Cloudsdale... I remembered The Rainbow Factory. I had told David about how I found The Rainbow Factory and had David sent to jail, who then became devastated. I wanted to give someone some hope. I sped towards the large jail, and entered. The jail warden instantly recognized me.
“It's good to see you D! Need somethin'?”
I smiled. “Yeah, I need to see somepony.”
The warden pony led me through several corridors before I stopped him. We stopped in front of a large cell.
“This one, I want to talk to Rainbow Dash.”
The warden pony looked surprised.
“Well... okay.”
The warden pony left me in front of Rainbow Dash's cell. I banged on the bars to wake her up.
“HEY! GET UP! THIS IS THE WARDEN!” I barked.
I heard rustling, and a loud bump.
“Wha...?” The rainbow haired pony approached the cell bars, rubbing her eyes.
“Hey,” I said, waving my hoof.
Rainbow Dash looked disguisted. “Oh, you.” She spat.
“Look, I'm getting you out of here.” I whispered.
“How do you plan to get me out? Bailing me out of this dog house? No way, I've got the biggest bail right now. Yet I will say, I'd much rather take the death sentence then stay in here any longer."
I smirked. “Oh well, seeing as thought I'm one of the most famous ponies out here, I guess it wouldn't make any difference.”
I turned around, seconds later I heard RD banging on the cell bars.
“Forget it! Just forget it! Get me out of here! Please!”
I turned around, transforming into Xaxas.
“Then promise on your life, that you will not cause any harm.”
Rainbow Dash nodded. “I swear on my life! Cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye!”
I nodded and went over to the desk, changing back into my regular form.
“Hey, I'd like to bail out Rainbow Dash.”
The mare looked at me, and nodded her head. She pressed a button on a nearby mic.
“Please allow Rainbow Dash out of her cell, she has been bailed out for 200,000 bits.”
I waved my hoof. “Thanks.”
I turned around to see Rainbow Dash being led out by a few guards. She ran up to me and hugged me.
“Thank you so much Dorchester! I promise I won't do anything terrible again!”
I smirked. “You better." I joked
“No problem!” Rainbow Dash said, she flew out of the jail and blasted straight towards Cloudsdale, leaving a large trail of rainbow behind her.
I smiled as I watched Rainbow Dash fly away. It made me feel... good.
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