In The Dark

by CodeG

Chapter 1 - Introductions (Redone)

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In The Dark
Prologue
Chapter 1 - Prologue

Fiction. Stories that are proven to be unreal. Stories that would contain magical monsters and supernatural demons that would never be true. In the land of Equestria however, these stories are anything but false.

If a pony were to come up to you and ask you, “What is a Vampony?” What would your response be? Some ponies my say things like, “They are a supernatural being that does not exist.” Some may even say, “They are a dangerous race of ponies that should be put down.” And others would brush you off and tell you to leave. But even after this, the question still remains, what is a Vampony?

Now I want you to forget everything that you know about Vamponies or Vampires or werewolves or any other supernatural being. Because none of it is true. We all hear stories every day. We read fiction every day. But is what we read true or not.

Vamponies are real.

And what they are, is simple to answer. But it is also complicated to say. The most simple answer would be, “They are a race of ponies with supernatural powers.”

But is that really what they are? I know that they are a lot more than that. That they are more than just monsters. While some may see them as monsters, and some may see them as a being that needs to be put down. I see them as just a normal pony in life.


When ponies read this story, I know that most of them will probably just put the book down and never pick it back up. Why, I don’t know. Maybe it’s because they don’t want to hear a story about fiction. They don’t believe that I know all of this, or it could be that this story has no ending.

But how does one tell a story that has no ending to it.

All I’m writing is what I was told. I don’t know the ending. It could be any number of things. They could have all gotten killed, and I would never have known. They could have ran away, and I would not have been told.

But most of this story was told to me by somepony else. A Vampony herself. This is her story. The day before she disappeared and was never heard from again. Shee came to me and told me her story.

After it was told, she and her friends were never heard from again. I wish this story had an ending to it. But alas, it doesn’t. But it could still be told. Somepony would just have to make up their own ending.

But when I tell you this story, I want you to listen, and think. Because everything will not be as it seems.

No some of you may be putting the story down at this point. But why? I know that it could be the writing, or it could be the way the story flows. Or it could even be, you just don’t want to read it because of the way the words are put together. But why would you put the story down? Why would you step away from a book that you know, can be good. A book that can live up to what people expect from it. Don’t just stop on the first chapter. Don’t stop reading a book you think is bad.

Don’t judge a book by it’s cover, or the description, or even by the way these words are put together.

Judge it on it’s concept.

For who knows, this story could be the story that changes your thoughts on the world of darkness, despair, and corruption.


Even after all that I have said. There is still much to be said. Still so many words that need to be typed.

I plan to tell it to you all. I plan to tell you how it happened.

I plan to tell you the real story of the Vamponies.

This story, is the story told to me, word for word, about six little ponies who were never heard from again. The story of a wise bookworm, a kind guardian, a beautiful blood-sucker, a gang member, a family mare, and a crazy inventor. The story that was never meant to be told.

The board has been set. The pieces are in play

Let the game begin.


Author's Note

This may not be the best redone chapter. If it doesn't work out, I sill have the original.
Edited by Blue Ice Tales
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