STOP!! THIS STORY IS A GONER, SO I'M REWRITING IT!

all these hero have been coming from stables across the equestrian wasteland. however, has anypony ever wondered if any heros came from above, and not below? Lightning is just an orphan mare in the city of Lightning Hoof, erm, the ENCLAVE city of Lightning Hoof, when she discovers a secret plot that could possibly mean the true end of the world. does she have what it takes to stand against the darkness? or will she fall and never get up again. Every hero falls. but will this one be able to survive it? Lets hope so, because if not, there wont be a world to save. i have somber to thank for this, without his help it couldn't have been nowheres near as good as it is now.