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Homebound

by Retsamoreh
A space military captain, who believes that Equestria resides on the legendary, long-lost planet of Earth, attempts to save Twilight and her friends from an incoming invasion that threatens both Equestria and the galaxy while keeping them all sane.

A suicide-mission turns first contact when a skeleton crew and their eager captain land smack dab in the middle of Canterlot. To Princess Celestia, it's an opportunity to make a valuable ally and a new friend, just as long as she can trust them. Enter seven Equestrian ambassadors: the six ponies and one baby dragon hoof-picked by Celestia herself to observe and report their findings on what really is beyond Equestria's skies. After all, Celestia can't be everywhere.

Unfortunately for them, Equestria just so happens to be a bright red target on every star-map in the galaxy, and a peaceful tour led by a veteran of a pseudo-mercenary military known as the Wing quickly becomes a race against time to save Equestria, the worlds beyond, and possibly the entire galaxy.

That's only if they can save themselves first, of course.

~~~~~~~~~~~=V=~~~~~~~~~~~

Though this is technically a crossover with an existing universe, you won't find it anywhere, so there's no crossover tag for it anymore. It is primarily written for myself and a few friends of mine. Also as a note, it is largely first person and told from the perspective of one of the "human" characters - though technically he's an alien. There are a few exception chapters, but if you don't like that idea, then this was your warning. [EDIT]: There will be more third-person scenes following rewrites to the earlier chapters.

If you have critiques, comments, theories, or anything, please comment, favorite, and like. Etcetera. Note: Homebound takes place between seasons two and three of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, which is owned by Hasbro, and anything pony belongs to them.

HIATUS EDIT: No, it's not dead. It's just hard to write with what I've had going on, though I am still working on both the next chapter and the quality-control rewrites for the earlier chapters. I /will/ provide links to the earlier chapters, but I've gotten a lot of negative and non-constructive comments because of them, and I feel like I should rewrite them anyway. On the bright side, the official Wingverse tabletop is in full swing with my lovely players, Plebeian, Laichonious, SilentBelle, and some other fourth guy.

tl;dr: it is on.

Cancel edit: Unfortunately, real life took over six years ago as I got ready to graduate highschool and go to college. That, and I and my friends drifted away from the fandom at large. While I don't follow MLP anymore, I look on it fondly. I however managed to eek out one extra chapter and a large rebooted chapter with the purpose of making it more Equestria centered. And also better. This story helped me practice and while I certainly wouldn't cite it to my professors, the skills I learned from making what I did helped prepare me for my English degree and current career.

Teen
Cancelled
Adventure
Violence
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Human
Sad
 
PTMPS

220290 words: Estimated about 18 hours to read

28 Chapters:

  1. (1) It's a Suicide Mission 2012-08-12 19:11:04 UTC
    3289
  2. (2) No Sol-iciting Allowed 2012-08-12 19:34:29 UTC
    3533
  3. (3) Land of the Horse Things 2012-08-12 19:48:22 UTC
    5056
  4. (4) Sound Negotiations 2012-08-14 02:53:15 UTC
    4368
  5. (5) Theatrics 2012-05-28 01:22:24 UTC
    2722
  6. (6) Turnout Ponies 2012-05-28 01:22:40 UTC
    4043
  7. (7) Safe Fates 2012-05-28 18:45:46 UTC
    3794
  8. (8) Welcome Aboard 2012-06-05 19:20:19 UTC
    5386
  9. (9) Leaving the Anomaly 2012-07-23 19:44:06 UTC
    5178
  10. (10) Old Friends 2012-06-16 16:48:53 UTC
    7332
  11. (11) Ellipses 2012-06-26 15:43:26 UTC
    6888
  12. (I) Jonesy 2012-07-08 01:54:26 UTC
    5535
  13. (12) One Foot Forward 2012-07-29 21:55:25 UTC
    6280
  14. (13) Two Leaps Back 2012-09-27 17:32:41 UTC
    4851
  15. (14) Man On the Ceiling, Pony On the Bed 2012-09-01 16:47:16 UTC
    4328
  16. (15) Ties 2012-09-27 02:57:58 UTC
    4319
  17. (16) Generosity and Compassion 2012-10-11 12:09:37 UTC
    4382
  18. (17) Kind 2012-11-12 04:45:36 UTC
    3738
  19. (18) Like a Dull Sword and a Thousand Catapults 2012-11-17 01:41:43 UTC
    12178
  20. (19) Operation Cheer-up the Captain 2012-11-24 00:23:01 UTC
    7628
  21. (20) Dutybound 2012-12-24 16:59:18 UTC
    8674
  22. (21) Our Sole Burden 2013-01-25 20:44:40 UTC
    20670
  23. (22) Bullets and Blades - Part One 2013-03-10 03:32:36 UTC
    6815
  24. (23) Bullets and Blades - Part Two 2013-07-21 23:47:42 UTC
    24324
  25. (24) Mission Man 2013-09-28 18:55:26 UTC
    9510
  26. (25) Promises Break You First 2018-06-07 04:42:30 UTC
    14662
  27. (1) Homebound Rebooted: The Captain 2018-06-07 04:42:39 UTC
    14383
  28. (2) Homebound Rebooted: No Sol-iciting Allowed 2018-06-07 04:42:46 UTC
    16424