Ray's Letters

by YourDailyWhiteMage

Ray's Commentary: Episode 1

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This episode was kinda interesting. I now know that this could be fun. Also, I don't need an intro, dangit! My thoughts on the one on the other end so far: you get some development, but not much. No one really got any development other than being introduced. Am I a bit of a hypocrite for saying that? Maybe. I understand it all, I just don't get some parts. In the next episode, I realize that the redneck stereotype is somehow smarter than the nerd. The next scene makes me feel as if I was high while watching, because faces in my world can't just disappear. The next scene also feels like a trip. I won't even try to explain. The next scene shows us that the 63rd one thinks that immense pain is well exchanged for facial hair. Then I proceed to see the blue one being incredibly stupid. You may not have seen it because of the fog, and trust me, you don't want to have seen what happened. However, this makes me assume that you went deaf for plot convenience. Confronting the cliché beyond belief villain has you teleport just to make it look less contrived. However, it looks more contrived when you get found in one minute flat. And the ending that breaks from all sorts of cliché makes this all worthwhile. Thanks for reading, and good night.

-Ray Lastnameless