The Main Six visit The Cedar Fair Chain of Parks

by mandolin15

Chapter 2: Dorney Park

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After the Mane 6 reached the park entrance, which looked to be attended, they soon were shocked to find out that the gates were closed and locked. In front of the row of gates was a huge crowd of humans waiting to gain entry to the park. One human, who was a Brony, spotted the group and shouted,  squealing in delight.

"OH MY GOD! ITS THE MAIN CAST FROM MLP FIM!!!!"

A large group of Bronies, at least 10 or 15, charged at the Mane 6. After a few moments of what seemed like terror, Twilight finally got the group to control themselves.

"What the heck is going on?" Twilight questioned to the group.

One of the Bronies, presumably the leader, said,"Our group here is visiting the park for the day and we would never have thought that you all would be here in the flesh! Its physically impossible!"

"Okay, and what is the reason why all those humans are waiting to enter?"

He pointed towards a sign posted on one of the gates, it read:

CLOSED

PARK OPENS AT 10:00AM

SORRY FOR ANY INCONVENIENCE

"OH COME ON! DID WE GET HERE TOO EARLY OR TOO LATE!?" Rainbow screamed.

"Rainbow, the sign is true. The park doesn't open until 10:00am."

"Well Twilight. What time is it right now?"

"Um. Its 9:30am. And calm down. Since the park opens in 30 minutes, we can simply wait until the park opens."

"Uh, Twilight. Do we all have tickets?"

"Yes Fluttershy. I got us all tickets to all the parks we're going to visit on this trip."

Soon, a nearby clock struck 10:00am and the gates were opened. The Mane 6 each turned in their tickets and entered the park.

"Twilight!"

Pinkie then inhaled and suddenly spoke faster than a cheetah.

"WhatisthefirstrideweregoingonIhopeitsnottoscarysinceitwillmakeustramatizedAlsocanwetryouttherollercoasterstheygotreallygoodcolorschemes..."

"Mumbler!"

Everypony was shocked at what Twilight had said, and so was the author who surprisingly decided to come back and view the action.

Hello again Mane 6, ready to enjoy the park.

"Mr. Author. What are you doing here?"

And why are you, Ms. Rarity, are breaking the fourth wall. You know this is not the kind of thing you do.

Rarity gasped, fuming with anger.

"I have every right to do so, even though I don't choose to execute it very often. Pinkie mostly is the one who does it."

Well, you all enjoy your day. Me typing it up of course. Bye.

"Ugh, that was rude of him."

Later, after they got a copy of the park map, the Mane six decided on the first ride, Hydra the Revenge.

"Its shown here that it is a Bolliger & Mabillard Floorless coaster model with seven inversions." said Twilight.

"SEVEN INVERSIONS! That is too much for me, Twilight."

"Fluttershy, you'll be fine. Your strapped into a restraint system which is perfectly safe."

The girls entered the queue line. The line was quite short and they got to the coaster train in 10 seconds flat.

"Mr. Author! Stop taking my catchphrases!"

Sorry Rainbow Dash.

When they all exited the ride after experiencing it, the results were very unpleasant, for them at least. Rarity was sobbing over losing her hair braid, Fluttershy was shaking uncontrollably, and both Rainbow Dash and Applejack were both in the restroom, puking loudly since they got sick during the ride. After the ordeal, with Rainbow Dash and Applejack feeling better (What? Their cartoon characters! They get better faster), they tried out the other roller coasters. They first rode Possessed, an Intamin Inverted Launch model which didn't end well since the ride experience left the Mane six with bruised plots and messed-up manes. Thus, they skipped the Steel Force and Stinger Coasters choosing to ride both coasters after they had lunch.

"According to the map, there aren't many places for us to eat."

"What do you mean Twilight? There's plenty for us."

"I don't want to argue Rainbow, but a few of these establishments sell meat in their food, which ponies don't consume."

"Oh! What about this place." Pinkie said.

The place she was pointing to on the map was Patio Pizza, an Italian style eating establishment.

"Great Idea, Pinkie," said Rarity, "But can we eat this "Pizza" as they call it?"

Twilight smiled, "As indeed we can. Since the food is only a mixture of cheese, flour, and tomatoes, its perfectly safe to eat."

With that, they entered, purchased their food (Rarity had some difficulty of choosing the right toppings), ate their food, and soon were on their way to Steel Force and then to Stinger.

"Um, Twilight. Just..um...what did you tell us earlier about not eating before riding a rollercoaster or a thrill ride."

"Fluttershy, calm down. We can get through this together."

"I'm not riding it."

Twilight was about to go into a fit of rage, but backed off. She kindly convinced Fluttershy to ride the kidde rides and wait for the rest of them to finish riding the two big coasters.

"Alright, I'll do it. But don't get sick on the ride."

(Several godforsaken minutes later, this happened.)

"Fluttershy?! Where is that pony? I thought she would be in this area of the park."

Rainbow Dash was hovering in the air, surveying the Planet Snoopy section of the park.  It was the only section with the kiddie rides, intended for children who are not yet tall enough to ride the larger coasters and rides. The Mane six, excluding Fluttershy, had an absolute great time on Steel Force but not on Stinger which, sadly enough, they all threw up their lunch while on the ride. After constant apologies, they went on the parks major thrill rides, which managed to somehow get their energy back, and soon headed to the Planet Snoopy area to look for Fluttershy.

"Rainbow, she might be on one of the rides enjoying herself."

Twilight was wrong though. After turning a corner, they saw Fluttershy crying on a park bench.

"Fluttershy, darling! Thank goodness your alright."

But Fluttershy continued to cry profusely.

"What's wrong, Fluttershy?" Twilight asked.

Fluttershy responded between sobs.

"Well, I...entered...this area of the park and a huge crowd....of children....whom I believed were fans of the show... they noticed me and ran over to me. They...patted my fur and gave me constant hugs"

"Well that's not that bad. Getting a hug isn't painful."

"Your wrong Pinkie. A group dared me if....I could ride the kiddie coaster 10 times before puking. I did so...and when I got off after the tenth time....I accidentally puked onto a young girl's shirt. The girl...she began to cry...very loudly.... i couldn't calm her down....The parents of the child saw what happened. The child's father, apparently I found out he was bad tempered....He hit me...across the face....told me to leave his daughter alone. I fled....from the situation, sobbing in dismay. I then found this park bench, and now I sit here, crying about what had happened to me."

Everypony was saddened by what Fluttershy had said.

"Fluttershy. That man was trying to protect his daughter. He had no idea who you were."

"Your right Twilight. Come on girls, we should leave the park."

"WHAT! We haven't ridden all the rides yet!"

"Rainbow, Fluttershy is right. We did have a long day and we need to get some rest. We are heading to another park tomorrow."

So after trotting towards the exit and leaving the park, they got the shock of their life when they found the Author sitting in what looked like a car.

Hi girls. If you want, I can get you a hotel room for the night so you'll all be rested for tomorrow.

"Thank you, Mr. Author. But why are you doing this, darling?"

Well, since this is almost the end of the second chapter, I should do you all a favor for once. Oh, and Fluttershy. You know that man who hit you. Well, he's in jail for a week for what he did. Don't panic, his daughter is fine.

"Okay Mr. Author. Did you find us a hotel?"

Yes I did. You all are going to love it.

After driving the Mane six to the hotel, they ooohed and aaahed at the place.

"Its perfect, Mr. Author."

Don't mention it Twilight. Your bags are already in the room.

The girls then trotted into the hotel, ready to go to their hotel room and get a good nights rest, but the Author stopped them.

Um. I have one request for you all. Can I please be a part of this trip?

Twilight thought for a moment. "Hmmm. Let me...NO! You can't."

What! Why?

"Since I have read some fanfics which have the Author involved in his story, this one you will never join. Goodnight."

What? How? But? F***! Fine! You all have your "little" trip. But mark my words, Twilight. I WILL JOIN THIS STORY IF ITS THE LAST THING I DO!

The Author stormed off and got back into his car. He thought to himself.

"Oh. They will be in a big surprise tomorrow when they reach the Cedar Fair Park known to us as....CEDAR POINT!!"

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