Careful What You Wish For
A Wish Comes True
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Hello there. I hope you enjoy what you read. This is my first time posting a story online so I hope you like it. And please go easy on me. I know I'm not the best at this.
A Wish Comes True
It was a cold winters nigh in the mountains of Tennessee. I was on my computer playing some games with my friends.
I wasn't a very out going person. And I was only home about 10% of the time any way. Due to working a full time job. Plus it took two hours of my day just driving to work and back.
I had decided to stop playing for the night. It was around 11;30 and I need to sleep if I was to get up in the morning. Usually I don't look out the window at night. But tonight was different. It seemed brighter than normal, through my curtains.
So I decided to check it out. The moon was huge, and very bright. You could easily see with out a flashlight. Then the second unusual thing I did happened. I made a wish. “Me being very skeptical about such things.” I wished I could live in peace and harmony, like they did in MLP.
I laughed at myself. Something like that could never happen. So I shut my curtain and laid down. It seemed like mear seconds before I had fell into a deep sleep. I started to dream. In the dream, I felt warm. Like I was just floating. It was very peaceful. Never before had I felt A feeling like this. Then suddenly I hear a scream and every thing goes dark.
"What in tar-nation is going on." It sounded like Apple Jack. I was then engulfed in a very bright white light. All I heard was a ear piercing whistle. I wanted to cover my ears but could not move. The white light started to fade, and my surroundings became very clear.
I was in a room and Apple Jack, and Granny Smith were starring at me. Like a alien from another world. "Are you ok," asked Apple Jack as she approached. "I'm ok," I responded and noticed that my voice was a higher pitch.
I sat there there confused for a moment as I started to inspect my surroundings. Then I start to look at my self. Immediately I notice I now have hooves, a long tail and a muzzle. Then I proceed to look down between my legs. "I'M A MARE!" I scream, as I pass out from shock.
I come to with Princess Twilight and Princess Celestia standing over me. Inspecting me. "Oh my. Your awake," Said Twilight, looking at me as though I was a science project. Celestia the moved in front of Twilight, and began to speak.
"I know you may be confused about what is going on here. But I assure you, That you are not in any danger. What has happened. Is something that can only happen for just a few seconds every 500 years. The Chances of any thing happening are very slim. But I monitor the skies every time it happens."
"This time however, something happened. I saw a beam of light shoot into ponyville. But was unsure were it landed. Until Twilight reported it to me this morning. I immediately flew over to see what was happening. When I arrived, I saw you. I realize you may not of been a pony in your world. But now you are. And you must learn to live as one with us."
"I'm sorry I do not have the answers you may seek. I only know so much about this event. Now do you have any questions you wish to ask."
"Well princess. I only have one," I said. "In my other world. I was a male. Then I wake up here as a mare. I'm not sure I understand why that happened." Twilight then speaks up.
"I have a theory behind that. Upon crossing between intergalactic dimension's, a reverse in your reality happened. There for causing your chromosomes to switch. In turn making you female," she said with a smile.
I just sat there puzzled.
Then Celestia spoke again. "Apple Jack. Since she landed here. I think it would be a good idea for her to stay with you. Considering you have a spare room. And its quite here. So she can get used to everything. Instead of being forced to cope with living in a place like Canterlot. Were it can be a bit confusing at times."
"Princess. If that is your wish. Then I must respect that," said Apple Jack.
"The its settled. You will live here. In Ponyville with Apple Jack and her family," Said the Princess.
With that she was gone in a flash of her horn.
"Now I must get back to my castle," said Twilight. "I have some studies I need to get back to."
I was left there with Granny Smith and Apple Jack. Both just staring at me.
"Ok then, Apple Jack. Show Streusel here around the farm," said Granny Smith. We both looked at Granny in a puzzled look.
"Streusel?" I asked.
"Why of course," said Granny." Your mane just reminds me of an Apple Streusel. So I'm gonna call you Streusel from now on. We can't have somepony running around with out a name now can we." Said Granny as she turned to walk out the door.
I was a bit bewildered at this. Then Apple Jack let out a chuckle. "In that ponies old age, nothing can phase her. Not even a pony appearing out of no where. Well Granny gave you a name, and she is going to stick to it. So welcome to the family Streusel." She said with a smile.
I look at here and smile in return. "Apple Jack could I get just a few minutes alone. I just need time to wrap my head around this whole matter. Its not every day you wake up a pony. A female one at that." I asked.
"Sure thing Sugar Cube. I will be in the barn once your ready to come out." Said Apple Jack.
"Ok I said, as I lay down on my side." I heard Apple Jack trot down stairs and leave the house. "This has got to be a dream," I said to my self. "There is no way that wish came true. I'll just roll out of bed." I thought to my self. "The thump should wake me up."
“Thump”
"Ouch. That was a terrible Idea. Ok that hurt. And dreams don't hurt. Well now this is just interesting. I better get out of the floor." I try to stand. Only to fall back onto the floor. "Oh crap. I'm like a baby. I can't even walk." I spent the next 30 minutes learning how to walk with my new legs. After I got the hang of it. I thought I might just be able to do this after all.
I then proceeded to walk out of the room, only to be met with another challenge. Stairs. "Oh great I thought. Just learned how to walk and now I have to deal with this."
I leaned up against the wall and slowly start to descend the steps. It was scary at first. Then I started getting the feel for going down. My hoof slips, and I tumble the rest of the way down. “Ouch” "I am going to be sore in the morning I thought." I got back onto my hooves, and walked outside.
The air was fresh. It was so peaceful out. It was warm and welcoming. This was a new feeling for me. I was used to the sound of cars, and doors slamming, music playing, and the occasional police siren. This was different. I heard the birds chirping, felt the warm sun, and wind blowing. No motors, no siren's. Just peace.
I slowly trotted down the stairs, and looked around. To my left I saw the barn Apple Jack was talking about. I walked to the barn to find Apple Jack raking hay around the floor.
"Well I see you made it," said Apple Jack. "Your in luck. I'm not going to put you to work today." She laughed as she said that. "You know Streusel. I have been thinking. It may not be good to tell everypony that you just appeared in my house. That may cause a ruckus. Think that is then last thing you need."
"I agree Apple Jack," I said. "Until I get used to this body of mine. I need to take it slow." Apple Jack shook her head in agreement. I then hear a squeak come from the barn door. I turn to see a big red colt just stairing at me. Apple Jack turns to see what I am looking at.
"Oh howdy Big Mac. I see your back from the Everfree Forest. Did you bring the herbs back from Zecora's hut?" Big Mac just continued staring at me. "Big Mac, What is tar-nation is wrong with you," said Apple Jack as she kicked Big Mac in the leg.
He shook his head and looked at Apple Jack. "Did you bring my herbs back or not?." "Eeeyup," Said Big Mac.
"Good now take them to the kitchen so Granny can whip up some tonic's." Big Mac Nodded as he started walking away. But not with out giving me another look.
Apple Jack walked back over to me. "I don't know what the hay is wrong with that colt. He has never acted like that before." She got a serious look on her face. Then said, "Sugar Cube turn around for a sec." I turn around and feel her place her hoof on my nether's. I just and turn around.
"What the hay Apple Jack." "Sorry Streusel I just head to check something." Said Apple Jack. "But I got same news for ya." I looked at her in concern. She placed a hoof on my shoulder. "Your in heat Sugar Cube."
I step back. Tears start to form in my eyes. "NO NO NO," I said. "I just got here and I am already in heat." Tears start pouring from my eyes.
Apple Jack came up to me and pulled me into a hug. "I'm sorry Hun. But you are a mare. And this is what happens," said Apple Jack. "You just need to avoid other colts for awhile. And if they try any thing. Just buck them in the head.' Apple Jack held me for awhile, until I quit crying.
Once I calmed down. I hear another squeak coming from the door. And see Big Mac once again peeking around the corner. I started walking towards the door were Big Mac is hiding. I wink a Apple Jack as I turn around. She watches as I rear my hind legs in the air and kick the door as hard as I can. Apple Jack hears a thud on the other side of the door. She runs over to see what it hit. She see's Big Mac out cold on the ground. And his erection slowly creeping back.
She lets out a chuckle, and says. "Serves ya right ya big oath. Well it don't look like I'm going to heave to look after you after all." Apple just said with a smile.
"I don't plan on getting pregnant any time soon," I said with a grin.
"Well we better get going then," said Apple Jack. "There are a few ponies I want you to meet."
"None of them are Colts I hope," I said. Apple Jack laughed.
"No they are all mares, so you shouldn't have to worry to much." I raised my eyebrow, and said. "To much?" "Well I'm pretty sure Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash go for mares. I could not see them with a colt."
I smiled. "Well what about you?" I asked. "L.L.Lets move on." Said Apple Jack with a st-udder. "Got you," I thought. I think she noticed a slight grin on my face. I saw her blush. I shoved the thought aside, as we started walking towards town.
Ponyville was a lot bigger than I thought. I thought it was just a small town nestled in the hills. It was actually kind of big. As we walked through town. I couldn't help but notice all the different types of ponies trotting around. Even some donkeys, and griffon's.
"DUCK!!!"
Apple Jack yelled as she tackled me, as a orange filly with a pink mane jumped over us on a scooter. With two other fillies running up from behind.
"Woe!!! Sorry about that Apple Jack," said the pony on the scooter. "Watch were you are going Scootaloo," said Apple Jack. "Apple Bloom, I need you to go to the farm and check on you brother." Apple Bloom looked puzzled. "What wrong with Big Mac." She asked. "He has a bad headache," said Apple Jack. "Ok" said Apple Bloom.
She then looked at me. "Who is this sis?" "This is your cousin Streusel from Baltimare. She is going to be staying with us for a while." "Oh ok." Apple Bloom said. "Come on girls. Big Mac needs us."
"CUTIE MARK CRUSADER DOCTORS" they all screamed in sync and ran off.
"Sorry bout that." Said Apple Jack. "Its ok I said." "Cute Kids." "Yeah they are cute. But try watching the three of them. They come over once a month to have a sleep over. They are a handful." Apple Jack said.
We continued our walk and was soon greeted by a rainbow colored Pegasus. "Whats up AJ." She said. "Oh just showing my cousin Streusel around" said Apple Jack.
"Oh my gosh. Your Aj's cousin. That's awesome. We totally got to hang out sometime." Said Rainbow Dash.
"Hey did you guys see that crazy light show last night?" She asked.
"No we didn't, said Apple Jack."
"I was in the bed early last night."
" Well the whole town is talking about it." Said Rainbow Dash. "But it seems odd you did not see it. It was the brightest over your way."
" Nope didn't see a thing." Apple Jack said.
"Oh ok. Well I'm going to the pond to take a nap. I'll catch you later Aj. Nice meeting you Streusel." She gave me a wind and flew off.
"She has a thing for ya Streusel," Said Apple Jack.
I looked at her. She started laughing. "You should see you face. You redder than my barn." I shot her a glare. She saw I was unhappy with her.
"I'm sorry Sugar Cube. Come on and lets go meet the others."
We went around meeting the rest of the ponies. And by the end of the day. I was just barely moving as we walked back in the barn. I plopped down on a bail of hay.
"My Hoofs hurt." I complained. "Sorry about that Sugar Cube. I didn't think it would take that long." Said Apple Jack. She then nudged me to get on my hooves. Reluctantly I did.
"Come on Sugar Cube. Lets go and eat dinner. I know you are hungry. You have not had a bite. Well except for that cupcake Pinkie Pie shoved down your throat." She turned and started walking towards the house. I followed close behind. I was hungry. And was looking forward to seeing how the pony folk ate.
Upon entering the dinning room. I noticed everypony was there except Big Mac. "Were is Big Mac, "asked Apple Jack. "He is upstairs with ice on his head. He said he was gonna skip dinner tonight," said Apple Bloom.
Apple Jack looked at me and laughed. "That pony has never once missed dinner for any thing. Oh well. Lets eat everypony." I sat down and Apple Bloom quickly sat down beside me.
"I didn't know I had any family in Baltimare," she said.I looked at her and my heart melted. The innocent look on her face. With out even thinking. I wrapped my legs around her and hugged her.
"Well you did. Now I am living here with you." I said.
"Ok you two. Its time eat." Granny said as she placed a bowl of cooked apples and salad on the table.
I watched while everypony grabbed the food out of the bowls before attempting it. I couldn't understand how their hoof was grabbing the fork and spoon. When the bowl came to me. It was my turn to try. And sure enough. I grabbed it like it was second nature. I didn't understand how it working. But I was not going to question it. I just sat there as Apple Bloom told about her Crusading and her adventures at school. I just munched away.
Then Apple Bloom looked at me kind of puzzled. Then got up and went to the other room and came back in with a picture.
"I thought you looked familiar." I was puzzled. "What do you mean." I asked. She showed me the picture. "You look just like mom." I was in shock. Then Apple Jack looked at the picture. Tears came to her face. She got up from the table and trotted up to her room.
I couldn't speak. Then Granny spoke up. "Apple Bloom is to young to remember. But when Apple Bloom was just a baby. And Apple Jack was still in school. Their parents went out to the edge of our south orchard were it borders the Everfree Forest."
"They were planting same new trees. When a Timber Wolf attacked. They were both killed. Big Mac is the one that found them. Thats when he stopped talking a lot. And Apple Jack changed. She used to be very girlie. After that she locked her self away and became more of a tomboy. She took it upon her self to fill her mothers shoes."
Tears started to form in my eyes. These ponies have had a rough life. But somehow manage to put on a smile every day before going out.
I turned away from the table. And made my way up to Apple Jacks room. Before knocking I put my ear to the door. I could hear her crying.
"I know you are out the Streusel," she said. "Come on in." I came into her room with her curled up on the bed looking out the window. "I guess Granny told you what happened."
"Y-y-yeah I stuttered." I walked slowly over to the side of the bad and laid my hoof on her side. She turned to look at me. She saw the tears in my face, and pulled me into a embrace. We both just st there and cried until we could not cry no longer. This is the closest I have been to Apple Jack since I arrived this morning. Already I kinda felt like I Belonged. I felt like I was part of the family.
As we laid there together. I could sense she was still hurting. So I leaned over and gave her a kiss on the cheek, She looked at me with her tear shot eyes, for what seemed like forever. I watched as she closed her eyes and moved her muzzle towards mine.
I was not sure if I should pull back, or just go for it. Then it clicked in my head. This pony is hurting and she needs somepony in her life. So I decided to meet her halfway with the kiss. We locked lips and I felt butterflies in my tummy.
I felt her lips part as if inviting my tongue into her mouth. So with out any hesitation I began to massage her tongue with mine. I could tast the apples we had just ate. My mind was racing 1,000 mile a minute.
I felt as she wrapped her hind leg around me, and our lower lips started to rub together. I couldn't help but let out a moan. I have never felt pleasure like this before. I felt it becoming very wet. And she just kept grinding away at me.
I then started to feeling another feeling build up inside of me. With each movement it became more intense. This continued for a while. It got to were I could not take anymore and I hit my climax. We were both soaked from my juices. And she continued grinding for just a few more seconds and let out a moan.
I felt the flood gates open. I felt as her body relaxed. She looked at me and gave me one last kiss. "Thank you Sugar Cube. I think that is just what I needed," said Apple Jack still panting. "That was amazing," I said. "I have never felt something like that before."
"Sorry I didn't let you get used to your body first. But when you kissed me. I could not help my self said," Apple Jack. "Its ok" I said. "I was unsure about being a mare. But after that. I would have it no other way." I kissed her again and we just laid there for a while.
I watched her fall asleep. I smiled as I retreated back to my room for the night. It was only minutes before I had drifted off to sleep.
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