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Humanity

by Sapphire Valley
A writer from 17th century England finds himself in Equestria. It's here that he learns the meaning of courage, becomes the hero Equestria needs, and ultimately finds true love.

What if you could go to another world?

I never thought that I would discover the answer to that question, yet here I am. This world seems to be like Earth, only the inhabitants are all multicolored ponies, the largest ones seeming to come up to my shoulders. These ponies are very intelligent, able to speak perfect English, handle businesses, and create entire societies. They're all so friendly, too. The one I'm staying with, Twilight Sparkle I believe her name is, shares many of my interests, and I feel a strong sense of camaraderie from her and her five friends.

One of these friends however, I can't seem to get out of my mind. She's the most lovely pegasus pony. Yellow coat, long pink mane and tail, big cyan colored eyes, and the softest voice... she's by far the most beautiful creature I've ever seen. Anytime I see her it brings light to my day...

Oh dear... have I fallen in love with her? I'm in love... with a talking horse?

I mean, she doesn't act like a horse. None of them do. Beyond the occasional foot stomping, they're all surprisingly human. But...they're not human. She's not human. Yet, whenever she's close to me, I find myself filled with desires... the kind that I had for Olivia at one time. She never let me indulge in these fantasies, but I can tell that Fluttershy has no problem being affectionate with me, and may even be interested in me.

But no matter how human she is... can I with a clear conscious fall in love with a pony?


A deconstruction of the Human in Equestria concept, trying to answer "what would REALLY happen to someone if they landed in Equestria, and how would they really feel if they fell in love with a pony?"

Current cover art by aymint.


This is the first story I ever wrote that hit the popular list! I don't know if that's better that being featured or not, but I still love it! You guys are awesome!

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28103 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

7 Chapters:

  1. Departure 2015-02-01 19:35:59 UTC
    3654
  2. Welcome to Ponyville 2015-02-04 06:33:21 UTC
    2734
  3. A New World 2015-02-09 22:54:34 UTC
    4827
  4. The Most Beautiful Creature 2015-03-11 21:33:42 UTC
    5003
  5. A New Perspective 2015-03-20 20:02:22 UTC
    4453
  6. Consensual Attraction 2015-04-19 22:22:48 UTC
    3762
  7. The Other Side 2015-04-21 18:16:53 UTC
    3670