
A Bird and Its Prey
[2nd Person] After being morphed into a pony, you begin underestimated by almost everypony. You seek to prove why this stallion, isn't going to take no trash from anybody.
[2nd Person] Re-edited version. The last (and first) update was rubbish, so I took the liberty in tidying it up a bit. I hope this makes up for it, and I'm sorry for waiting your time with the last one. I hope many of you are willing to give this an extra chance.
Anyways,
You were dragged into this world full of colourful ponies. Little did you know, this experience, is slowly altering your mind and driving you insane. The fact that other ponies look down at you, doesn't help the matter. Can you last any longer? Or is this the final stand?
Feedback is appreciated, as well as spelling and grammar suggestions.
Enjoy!
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