Twilight's New World

by Scarlet-Night

First published

Nightmare moon is a being of legend who is now forgotten. She Gets bored of the same old routine of using her Death Note to kill ponies for their life span, and gets the idea to drop her Death Note into the world of Equestria.

There a unicorn with genius intellect called by the name, "Twilight sparkle," picks it up and is curious over its strange name. She opens it up to see a message saying, "The pony whose name is written in this note shall die." She ignores it thinking its just some emo or goth thing, but her curiosity gets the better of her and she brings it home.

She turns on her television to see the latest news. What she see's is a bank robbery at, "The Bank of Canterlot." The idea to test the Death Note comes to mind, and She gets it out of her bag and writes the robbers name. The result shocks her needless to say, and from that day forth she got the idea to change the world to her own personal preference by getting rid of all the all the scum of Equestria.



This story has a mix of Equestrian level of technology, and Human level of technology. For example a television set and computers.

In this story I am going to tweak character personality's, and how Equestria works in aspects of the world being more dark. That's why I have the Alternate Universe tag.

Criticism is appreciated, and feel free to point out any errors in grammar in the story.