CYOC: Miss Nightmare Bikini Contest

by Twifan

Climb the stairs to see if it is true.

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Holy crap, you are on the moon!

Well, not the same moon that rotates around the Earth. But it is a moon!

You scan your surroundings, unable to focus on one direction. This was fantastic! There was a colorful planet hovering among the stars above you. How breathtaking! The surrounding landscape looked much like what you would expect a moon surface to look like, and yet also felt like looking at an alien barren world. Exciting! You never felt so alive in-

Your excited thoughts were interrupted as Nightmare Moon called for you in the distance to hurry up and get moving. You run towards the temperamental mare. Out here in the open with the light of the sky, you finally can get a good look at her.

Nightmare Moon was about the same height as you.  She was wearing a bright blue helmet on her head that matched in color with with her dress. A strange aura floated around her head, matching that of her ‘tail’. You had to assume it was her mane.

Not wanting the entire trip to be completely in silence, you asked Nightmare Moon how far her castle was. “You should be able to see it soon, human. I made sure the ritual would take place in a location quite close.”

Your head buzzed with questions as your eyes took notice of the fine blue dress Nightmare Moon was wearing in greater detail. Before, you had glanced over the dress, believing it to be a typical dress worn by someone attempting to look like ‘royalty’. A fitting image for what little you knew of Nightmare Moon. But now you notice there was something more to it. The V neck style, the open back, the elegant design, these spoke to you as if Nightmare Moon was trying to make a different impression on her summoned guest.

You asked why she needed to be away from the castle to cast her ritual.  “So I could be left in silence, of course. My loyal subjects mean well, but at times they can be quite a nuisance. That’s why I needed someone to-“Nightmare Moon stopped in her tracks, as if to contemplate continuing the sentence. You stopped behind her and waited to see what her next action would be. She gave a depressed sigh and turned to face you. “Someone to help me keep them all in line. I can’t deal with their childish bumbling and prepare for a war at the same time.”

Wait, a war?

Nightmare Moon rolled her eyes at the sight of your reaction. “Oh, there is nothing for you to be worried about human. There’s no fighting yet.”

You asked her who she is planning on fighting then. Nightmare Moon narrows her eyes, though she does not glare directly at you this time. She seems to be staring off into the distance behind you.

“She’s someone similar to me, and she is my completely opposite. She has power over the sun and the rules over the daytime. She thinks she’s so perfect! And worst of all is the fact that everyone seems to agree with her!” Nightmare Moon clenched her fists as she began to rant about this ‘sun ruler’. With her attention distracted off of you, you felt more confident about looking at her in more detail.

And after taking a good look at her, you had reached a conclusion: Nightmare Moon was quite the alien knockout! Her curvy humanoid form, her long toned legs, her gorgeous eyes. Heck, even some of her ‘horse like’ appearance wasn’t all that off putting either. Her small muzzle, her scratch-able ears, her magical mane and tail, all were quite appealing to you. Even her wings, which before had a frightening look to them back in the place you were summoned from, looked like they’ve be quite comfortable in a hug. And her horn… well actually, that part of her still filled you with a bit of worry, but the rest of her was amazing!

Deep down you felt a small part of yourself die at the thought of finding something not human so attractive. Truly, you have betrayed humanity with such thought. However, another part of you felt quite strongly that it would be an even bigger betrayal of humanity to pass up a chance to get it on with a hot alien woman like this (if such a chance was offered in the first place, of course).

Nightmare Moons voice, as she continued her rant, returned your thoughts to your current situation. “…And it’s not like there’s anything a pony can’t do during the night time that can be done in the day! In fact, everything is better done at nighttime! My stars are far prettier than any sun rise! In fact, we don’t even really need the sun! It hasn’t done anything good for us at all!”

“What about growing plants?” you asked. Deep down, you knew this was going to be a bad idea, but you just had to ask.

“What about them?” Nightmare Moon asked, glaring at you.

“You have those, right? Farmers would need the sun to grow food. Trees need the sun to live. Taking the sun away would hurt them.”

“Fool. We would just use our magic to make them feed on moonlight instead of sunlight. It would be better for them in the long run. Moonlight would make the food taste far better than sunlight.”

“You know, moonlight is really-“you managed to shut yourself up before adding the ‘made up of mostly sunlight part’. You really need to think before you spoke!

“Is really, what?” Nightmare Moon asked in an annoyed tone.

“Is really…”you desperately try and think of a way out of your predicament. “Really…. Romantic? Moonlight is far too romantic for any farmers to get any work done. Why, one gaze up at the beautiful moon and they’ll stop working to write poetry about it and gaze up with their love ones.” You could feel yourself begin to sweat under Nightmare Moon’s disapproving stare. Even without her ‘god like’ power, the mare gave a look that told you she could break every bone in your body if she saw a reason to. You continued your attempt to talk your way out of this. “Meanwhile, the sun itself is an eyesore! No one goes sun gazing, after all. That’s why they spend all their time work on things facing away from the sun, like farms.”

You stood there as Nightmare Moon began to consider the answer you gave her. Slowly her emotions changed on her face from a scowl to a slight smile. “The moon is a thing of beauty. One that could make my subject’s forget their job while staring up in awe at its splendour. And you are right, human. The sun is quite the ‘eyesore’.”

You tell Nightmare Moon your name, in hopes of keeping her from calling you ‘human’ for however long you’ll be here.

“If you insist. Personally, I don’t think it’s a very good name. Heck, ‘human’ sounds better than that.”

You were about to say something back to her about insulting your name, but Nightmare Moon began to walk away and continue her rant about how great the moon is and how terrible the sun is. She wasn’t paying much attention to you anymore, and interrupting her would most likely make you to end up in the same dangerous place you were before. So you decided to let it drop, follow Nightmare Moon in silence, and admire her from behind.

Or rather, admire her behind! Her dress certainly complimented her curves just right. You couldn’t pry your eyes away from those swaying hips. With every step she took, her flanks seemed to beckon you. You felt a great desire to reach out your hand and caress every inch of her round rump. But you knew how angry she would react to that. So instead you simply watched it. You continued to watch, mesmerize by it with each step that she-

“And just what are you staring at now?”

Nightmare Moon’s voice caused you to look up into her perplexed stare. Quickly, your mind raced to find an answer to give. “I was just taking in the scenery of…”

“-My beautiful moon?” Nightmare moon finished off your sentence as she looked around the landscape.

“Um, yeah,” was all you were able to say as you cached your breath again. You were making way too many close calls today. It was almost like you had a death wish or something.

“It is quite lovely to take in, isn’t it?” Nightmare Moon asked, turning to face you again.

“It… it sure is,” you carefully answered back.

“But tell me,” Nightmare Moon took a step closer towards you and said your name in a rising angered tone that make her seem to tower over you. “Just which of my ‘lovely moon’s’ were you ‘taking in’? Is it my kingdom you find impressive? Or have you been ogling my chest and backside?”

Your words were failing you under Nightmare Moon’s unhappy gaze. Nightmare Moon continued without waiting for you to find your voice again. “I’m not even the same species as you, you know? Are all humans such perverts, or did I simply have the misfortune of being stuck with the only exception?” Just as you were finding your voice again, Nightmare Moon let out a laugh that caused you to lose it once more. She looked back down upon you with a wicked grin. “And just what went through your perverted little mind, human? That I would allow you touch me? That your unworthy greasy peasant hands could caress the prefect hide of royalty? That your brutish strength could somehow overpower me? Force me to the ground like some helpless filly and have your way with me?”

Your mind once again raced for an answer out of this situation, but this time nothing was coming up. Nightmare Moon stared down in annoyance of your silence. “Well, don’t you have anything to say for yourself?”

Almost by instinct, your voice found its way out in the words of “I’m sorry.”

Nightmare Moon closed her eyes and sighed. “You’re sick and pathetic.” She then took a step to the side motioned to the path behind her. Off in the distance you could make out the structure of a castle. “You’re walking in front of me the rest of the way now.”


The castle looked like it was carved from giant crystal, rather than built. The ceiling was built high, allowing your footsteps to echo in the halls. The floors were polished enough to show your reflection on. The walls were adorned with banners filled with pictures of crystals and gems that seem glow with magic, lighting the room up. The entire place was breathtaking.

“What is all this junk?” came the voice of Nightmare Moon.

You looked back to see Nightmare Moon stare at room with a disgust. “Who dares to ruin my home while I was away?”

The sound of a metal bucket dropping causes the two of your to turn your attention to a small creature shrouded in some kind of obscuring dark mist. You couldn’t make out much of the creatures figure other than the glowing eyes that stared at the two of you, the shape of its terrified mouth, and a small yellow sponge it held.

The creature attempted to flee from the sight of the two of you, but Nightmare Moon turned out to be quite faster than it. In a blind of an eye, her magical aura that was her tail and mane enveloped her body and slithered like a snake with amazing speed, seemingly teleporting Nightmare Moon before the creature, trapping its escape. She then swiftly grabbed the creature and held it in the air before you. “What is the meaning of this?” she demanded.

The creature shook in fear as it stared at Nightmare Moon “The new mistress of the moon wanted the castle cleaned up, and for all the junk of the old ruler to be removed.”

“The new mistress of the moon? THE NEW MISTRESS OF THE MOON? Someone dares to take my rightful place from me? Why didn’t you fools tell me? Why didn’t you do anything to stop her?

“Um, because we invited her here?” the creature answered.

Damn, looks like someone is challenging you for ‘dumbest things to say’ today.

With a scream of anger, Nightmare Moon tossed the little creature down a hallway.

“’Beloved by all your nighttime subjects’ huh?” You know that was a dumb thing to say, but you couldn’t help yourself.

Quiet!” Nightmare Moon screamed at you with such a force that it made you fall backwards on your ass.  Apparently, she was hold back before when she was yelling at you. “I don’t have time for your foolishness! I need to find the soon-to-be-dead mare who dares to take my kingdom from me!”

Nightmare Moon began to storm down one of the hallways, which you assumed leads to her throne room. You followed behind, because what else were you going to do? One right turn later and you see a large double door at the end of the hall. Nightmare Moon opened the doors with enough force, one could mistake it being forced opened by an angry rushing bull. You peeked around Nightmare Moon to get a glance of the mare trying to overthrow Nightmare Moon. Your jaw need hit the floor at the sight of her.

This dark blue violet unicorn mare laid across the throne chair, her legs across one arm and her back on the other. He head lay upside down against the side of the throne chair, allowing her multi-mulberry colored mane to flow down to the floor like a magical mist. She stared at the two of you with her pale cold blue eyes in what looked like boredom. She wore a black open chest dress with multiple necklaces filled with precious gems across it. From you could tell at a distance, she was every bit as beautifully shaped as Nightmare Moon.

“Oh, it’s you, Moony.” The mare asked in a bored tone. “I thought you had died or something.”

“Get off my throne!” Nightmare Moon demanded.

The mare began to check her nails, barely paying any attention to Nightmare Moon. “It’s not your throne anymore. I’m your new replacement.”

“Like tartarus you are! I don’t need a replacement!”

“Oh, but you did! You were doing such a poor job that someone had to cleanup your mess.”

Continuing on your path of ‘not knowing when to shut up’, you snickered at the comment. “Guess you’re as good at ruling as you are at magic. No wonder you wanted to find some help.”

Nightmare Moon gave you a quick death stare glace but didn’t have the chance to say anything. The mare on the throne sat straight up at the sound of your voice. “Now, who have you brought?” she asked.

“No one of importance,” Nightmare Moon replied, returning her gaze back at the mare. “Now, leave my kingdom or-“

The mare leaped out from her chair and made her way towards you at surprising speed. “No, no, no, no, no! You do not bring a guest to my castle and not properly introduce them! Where are your manners, Moony?”

“Introduce him? I don’t even know who the hay you are! And this is my castle!”

The mare stopped between you and Nightmare Moon and gave a short mocking laughed as she looked her in the eyes. “Right, I forget how out of touch you are with the times.”

You thought to yourself how that line didn’t make a lick of sense but were interrupted when the mare turned and leaned towards you, getting quite close to your face with a smile. “Hi, I’m Nightmare Rarity. Although some of my faithful subjects call me ‘Queen’, or ‘Mistress’. You can feel free to call me that if you so desire. And what is your name?”

You attempted to say your name, but ended up trailing off as you got a closer look at Nightmare Rarity. Being this close to her made you start to believe she might be even more beautiful than Nightmare Moon. While Nightmare Moon had more of the build of a slim athlete, Nightmare Rarity looked more like a super model. Her blue eyes seemed much more inviting than the piercing gaze of Nightmare Moon’s. Her smile seemed to warm your very soul. And even her breasts were larger! While Nightmare Moon’s chest size was impressive, being in the heavy end of the C cup barely making it to D cup size, Nightmare Rarity’s were definitely D sized breasts. Possibility even reaching DD cup size status!

“Like what you see?” Nightmare Rarity asked as she noticed you staring at her chest. You jumped at the sound of her voice and began to think of your best excuse to get you out of the coming situation. Noticing your reaction, Nightmare Rarity continued before you got a word out. “Oh, there is no problem with that. Beauty is nothing if no one is around to appreciate it. And my beauty surpasses all, so it would be an utter crime to make you avert your eyes. So please, stare as long as you like.” Nightmare Rarity said that last line in a sultry tone that made your mouth dry up like a desert and your face beam like a sun. You gulped to try and get some moisture and attempted to put on your best smile.

“You both sicken me,” said Nightmare Moon.

“So, cutie, why are you traveling with Moony here?” Nightmare Rarity asked while fluttering her eyelashes at you.

Nightmare Moon gave you an angry stare from behind Nightmare Rarity. “Answer her and I will leave you to rot in the dungeons.” It was quite clear she was not only upset with Nightmare Rarity, but upset with how you were acting around here.

You felt Nightmare Rarity place on one of her fingers on your chest and circled it around as she stared deeply into your eyes. “I’m the one who is in charge of this castle, not her. Her threats are meaningless to you. So you can tell what you are doing with her…”

Tell Nightmare Rarity about the summoning.

Keep your mouth shut for Nightmare Moon.

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