PrologueView OnlineHoney and ApplesPrologueHoney and Apples Author’s note: This Prologue, though it isn't completely important to the rest of the story, is a way for me to practice my storytelling skills and makes the ending make more sense. This takes place after Season 1. 11/11/11 - Made revisions and added a transition into Chapter 1. Also, Comments are appreciated; I just got started. If you have any recommendations, just say so. Prologue Ponyville was as lively as ever. Birds were singing, Derpy was derp-eyed; everything was normal. Twilight and Pinkie Pie were in Twilight’s Tree; her Tree was also Her and Spike's house and a library. Twilight has wanted to talk to Pinkie about something for a while and today was the day. “Pinkie,” Twilight said nervously. She was shaking with nervousness as if a rattlesnake was in the room. “Yes?” Pinkie responded curiously. Pinkie had no idea what she was in for but she had something close to it on her mind. “…I’ve been meaning to tell you something I think you should hear.” Twilight said. “Ok” Pinkie replied. “I…I love you, Pinkie” Twilight said while shaking like a leaf. Pinkie was silent; usually that never happens without a reason. “Why were you so nervous, Twilight? I love you too, silly.” Pinkie happily replied. “You do?” Twilight asked, tears in her eyes. “Of course I do, Twilight. But...I was just...way too nervous to admit it.” Pinkie said blushing profusely. Twilight then went over and hugged Pinkie, tears in her eyes the whole time; these were tears of joy. Pinkie just comforted her for a minute. After calming down, Twilight knew what to do next. She leaned in and kissed her. They kissed with as much passion as they ever could. It felt like fireworks went off in there mouths. They both felt better than ever had before. After they finished, they hugged and cried tears of joy, comforting each other. Just then, “Ouch!” shouted a familiar purple and green Dragon Assistant. Spike was spying on them the whole time. The two blushed furiously and sat upright in attention as soon as the sound shook their nerves. Twilight wasn't happy. “SPIKE! Snooping as usual I see?” Twilight said sarcastically, whipping away her tears. “But regardless, why were you spying on us?” Twilight asked, anger in her eyes. “I…I knew the whole time and I was making sure it…uh…went well. That’s all.” Spike replied. Twilight cooled down. “Okeydokey-Lokey,” Pinkie said happily. “Just don’t tell anybody yet, ok; we'll tell them when were ready,” Pinkie said. “Oh alright," said Spike. "Pinkie..."Pinkie was starting to ask him to Pinkie Pie swear but Spike was already ahead of her. "Cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye.” Spike Pinkie Pie Swore bluntly. “Now what do we do?” Pinkie asked. They didn't have any ideas of doing anything until.. “How about you two take a (romantic) walk while I take care of some things here?” Spike suggested. "Sure you don't need any help?" Twilight asked. "#1 Assistant, Remember?" said Spike. “All right; let’s go!” said Twilight. The two ponies said as they began their walk. What they didn't know was that a voice was going to speak with their friend, Rainbow Dash, soon enough.
Help from NowhereView OnlineHoney and ApplesHelp from NowhereAuthor's Note: this chapter will be longer than Prologue 11/12/11 - another edit with more exposition and grammar corrections. Because of the backlash from people, I will make another chapter to explain everything but it will be small in comparison and get a point across. 11/15/11 - Changed beginning to my new ideas and vision, hope you like it. Also got ideas from comments. For the record, make the comments and ideas simple please. Chapter 1 - Help from Nowhere Picture this: Ponies roaming free in a town all their own. They live as they do and do as they please. They frolick in the meadows and walk around the town of...Ponyville. Our favorite cyan pony, Rainbow Dash was relaxing under a tree with her trademark sunglasses on when suddenly she hears something. She lifts the glasses, shrugs it off and proceeds to relax. "Rainbow....!" said a voice. "Who's there?" asked Rainbow, rising to a fighting position. "I am not an enemy. I want to help you." said the voice. Rainbow loosened up and sat down. "What are you?" asked Rainbow. "Oh yes. I almost forgot." started Green as an aura glowed in front of Rainbow in many green tints. As the glow died down, Rainbow noticed there was an Alicorn colt with a pale green coat and bright green mane with green lightning for a cutie mark, standing before her, but there was a white glow about him, almost as if she were in the presence of a god. "I forgot to turn visible." said Green. "What else can you do?" asked Rainbow, dumbstruck by the event. "That's not important. I'm here to help you loving Applejack..!!!!" started Green before almost getting hit by Rainbow. "HOW THE HELL DO YOU KNOW THAT?" shouted Rainbow, getting ready to clobber Green. "I JUST DO...OK!" shouted Green. Rainbow backed off and sat back down. "SERIOUSLY, HOW in all of EQUESTRIA do you know about that?" shouted Rainbow Dash. "That doesn't matter. What does is that you've been having trouble getting ideas. I'm hear to give you good ideas," he said. Rainbow was silent for a minute, considering the opportunity. "What do you have in mind?" Rainbow asked. "I promise, If my first plan won't get you two together, you can be narrator" he said with a Grin. "Your on. Your gonna regret this." Rainbow Dash said, suddenly pumped. "Do you honestly have to make a competition out of everything?" Green said with a look of sarcasm on his face. "Oh! You were kidding?" Rainbow asked as Green did a hoof palm. "Yes! Now I've got a great scenario for you to play out and see what you think." said Green. "A scenario? What am I, a Puppet?" Rainbow sarcastically remarked. "Trust me. Now, you two will sit in the barn at sunset and watch the sunset together. If that wasn't romantic enough, I'll give you something to go with the apples you'll ask Applejack to pick for the Scene: Honey...and..." "Honey?" asked Rainbow. "Believe me, this," started Green, now showing Rainbow the Honey Pot,"will work," said Green. "Hmm....Oh! Alright. BUT, This better work." said Rainbow. "Trust me, If you follow my plan, she'll be begging for your heart. HA! HA! HA!" shouted Green while Thunder roared in the background due to the laugh. "Your weird," said Rainbow, having a serious look for a second. "JUST FOLLOW ME!" shouted Green as Rainbow joined by his side. Then, she woke up!
A Honey Happy EndingView OnlineHoney and ApplesA Honey Happy EndingAuthor's Note: This Is IT! New versions of all chapters might be written, but doubtful. Honey and Apples Finale - A Honey Happy Ending Rainbow Dash was on her way to Sweet Apple Acres to watch the sunset with the mare of her dreams, Applejack. Rainbow had with her a bucket of fresh apples and a Pot of honey. When she arrived, she saw her friend finishing work for the day. "Howdy, Rainbow. I'm almost done for today." said Applejack as she finished getting the last of a tree's apples. Rainbow was in a sort of trance as they walked toward the barn. Rainbow couldn't keep her eyes off of Applejack. She snapped back into reality when they were laying down on hay, next to each other, watching the sunset. "Hey, Applejack. I thought while watching the sunset," Rainbow started, reaching out with the apples and honey,"we could have some honey and apples." "Sure, Rainbow. That's sweet of ya, going outta your way to get some honey for this," said Applejack, reaching for the first apple. Rainbow blushed and grabbed an apple, too. They ate their apples, dunked in honey with a sweet taste in their mouths. After a few minutes of sunset watching and eating apples and honey, Rainbow knew if any time was better to admit her feelings, she would miss it. "Applejack?" said Rainbow, shaking like a leaf with nervousness. "Yeah, sugarcube?" replied Applejack, puzzled by Rainbow's unusual nervousness; the only other time Rainbow got nervous was at the Best Young Flyer's Competition. "There's...something I've been meaning to tell you." said Rainbow, her wings standing on end and shaking, too. "What's that?" asked Applejack, trying to turn the wheels in her head to make sense of the situation. "I.....I....I Love you!" Rainbow spewed out and covering herself with her wings, hoping for the best. At first, Applejack was silent and thought about what had happened. "Actually, I love you too," said Applejack, tears forming in both ponies eyes. "Really?" asked Rainbow, tears bigger than before. Applejack simply nodded. Applejack then leaned in and kissed Rainbow on the lips. They never backed away, never wanting it to end, tears and hugs forever. It was the best thing that ever happened to both of them. It was jut the two of them. (Author - I'm crying too while typing this. SO BEAUTIFUL!...sniffle) A few hours later, Twilight and Pinkie Pie walked into Sweet Apple Acres to ask to RSVP to the party they planned. They froze in place while passing the barn. They looked again, wide-eyed then teary eyed at the site of Applejack and Rainbow Dash sleeping, cuddling under the barn. They then left Sweet Apple Acres, deciding to come back tomorrow instead. Though walking home raised many thoughts among the couple, they knew that their friends were happy, no matter what. END
Dreaming up an idea with Pinkie PieView OnlineHoney and ApplesDreaming up an idea with Pinkie PieAuthor's Note - This is a short chapter, BUT CAN'T be skipped! It explains chapter 1's weird Ideas and oddities with a simple concept of it being a DREAM! Chapter 2 Rainbow Dash awoke in the middle of the night in her home in the clouds. She breathed heavily for a moment, then got up and slowly flew over to a desk and began writing. She got a great idea from her dream and wanted to write it down. She was having writers block on ideas to tell Applejack her feelings about her. She hadn't come up with any good ideas in weeks and was about ready to give up until the idea in her dream gave her inspiration. She had it all planned out: Step 1 - Her and Applejack watch the Sunset. Step 2 - Get a bucket of apples, then give Applejack a Pot of Honey to share Apples and Honey. Step 3 - Admit Feelings. Step 4 - Hopefully, Applejack accepts this. Step 5 - They kiss. It was not a perfect plan, but it was worth a try. She had to at least try. She was determined to finally admit her feelings for Applejack. She flew to the kitchen to get a warm glass of milk. After she finished it, she flew back to bed and cuddled into the sheets and blankets. She felt tomorrow would be the day she would tell Applejack her feelings. Pinkie Pie was bouncing along the path to Sweet Apple Acres when Rainbow Dash flew by. Instantly, Pinkie ran toward her. "Hey! Rainbow Dash! Wait up." shouted Pinkie. Rainbow, learning her lesson from "Griffon the Brush Off," she slowly descended. "Hi, Pinkie Pie. Where ya'h headed?" asked Rainbow. "I'm on my way to invite Applejack to a special event and...oh, that reminds me." Pinkie reached into her basket and pulled out an invitation."Since you're here, here's your invite." said Pinkie, excited as always. "Thanks," said Rainbow, grabbing the letter, "Oh! and while you're at Sweet Apple Acres, could you take this to Applejack?" asked Rainbow, giving a letter to Pinkie. "Of course I will. But, what's the occasion?" asked Pinkie, receiving the letter. "It's...a secret, but I'll tell you this, If all goes according to plan, you'll be able to throw a big party at Sugarcube..." answered Rainbow before being interrupted. "Goody, I love love love throwing parties. Well, Good Luck to you, Rainbow," said Pinkie. "You too, Pinkie" replied Rainbow before they went their separate ways. So, Pinkie delivered both letters and Rainbow got ready for a night she won't forget.
