Cancelled because it's an old fic I was trying to bring up and failing. In the distant future I might revisit this but I doubt it

My character Duncan, an immortal human ends up in Equestria. This is set after Duncan has been thru a few of my other personal stories first, as such his powers should be more developed than normal. However I want to focus more on character evolution and my writing with this, as this is my first story I am posting for others to read (other than my personal thought on the creation of Equestria story) my other goal is to learn to write better.