No Need For Ponies

by GreatDragon AD

Chapter 4: No Need for Returning Inventions and New Magical Items, part 4

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It’s night time in Ponyville. The inhabitants of the town seem to be in their homes fast asleep. However, only a few were out and awake as they were the ones invited for Twilight Sparkle’s event of revealing her latest magical project. We see Rainbow Dash trotting with Fluttershy, who is also carrying a squirrel on her back, just as Pinkie Pie requested to bring for the event.

“Oh yeah! Can’t wait to see what new egghead stuff Twilight made this time.” Exclaimed Rainbow Dash.

“Oh my, I’m surprised to see you so excited about Twilight’s work, Rainbow Dash. Normally, you don’t seem to care as much as you are right now.” Said Fluttershy.

The rainbow Pegasus smiled nervously. “Well, ever since the ability-enhancing potion incident, it definitely made me respect her work even more now. And yes, I promise I won’t cause any more trouble like that time. Seriously, I don’t want to end up at that world with those super-powered creatures again. Wouldn’t you believe they were trying to take me as their pet and calling me ‘Antoinette’? Ugh…”

Fluttershy chuckled at that. “I say it was kind of cute that they did. “Antoinette” seems like a nice name too. At least you learned your lesson on using other people’s things without permission…I mean, if you don’t mind reminding you about it.”

“It’s okay. Believe me, I never gonna do that again. Even if I did, remind me to splash myself with a bucket of icy cold water, would you?”

“Okay.”

They soon met up with Rarity and Applejack. Their other two companions seem to be as eager for the event as they are.

“Howdy, y’all! How’re you girls doing?” greeted Applejack.

“Seems you two are read for the party too, huh?” asked Rainbow.

“I wouldn’t miss it for the world, darling.” Said Rarity. “You know I never miss a social event no matter how small it is.”

“I know Twilight means well, but I just can’t shake the feeling whatever new contraption she comes up it always lead into trouble. Progress is important, but you simply can’t rush these things.” Said Applejack.

“Now, now, Applejack. You should give Twilight a chance. Besides, I heard from Pinkie Pie on what’s she is working on, and in my opinion I think it’s completely safe.”

“Well, don’t count your chickens until they’re all hatched, sugarcube. We’ll see once Twilight test that new fangled whatever-it-is.”

Rarity turned her head away from Applejack in disgust. “My word, Applejack, why do you have to be so old-fashioned. Just like keeping up with the latest fad, you should keep up with the times.”

“Well, at least being old-fashioned still gets the job done.” The farm pony snorted back.

“For crying out loud, are we gonna talk politics or are we gonna head to the party? Stop wasting time and let’s get going, you two!” Said Rainbow Dash.

“If you don’t mind, that is.” Added Fluttershy.

They all finally continued their way and reached Golden Oaks Library. As soon as they got to the door, it opened and confetti shot out from the inside. The others were startled from the sudden surprise as Pinkie Pie popped out from the door.

“Glad you guys made it. Me and Twilight were waiting for you all so come right in. Just enjoy and relax for now until we’re ready to reveal her super-duper special project.” Exclaimed Pinkie.

Rainbow Dash chuckles. “Thanks for sudden welcome, Pinkie Pie.”

Rainbow Dash entered first as the rest followed. Suddenly, Pinkie Pie got in front of Fluttershy. “Ooh, I see you managed to bring our perfect guinea pig for our test. Well, it’s actually a squirrel but I wonder why they call test subjects ‘guinea pigs’.” Said Pinkie Pie with a squee.

Fluttershy smiles nervously. “I don’t know either, eh heh heh…But you promised that this little critter here will be fine with whatever Twilight will using him on, right?”

“Don’t you worry your frail yellow wings, Fluttershy. Auntie Pinkie Pie promise your squirrel friend will be safe and sound. Cross my heart, hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye.”

Fluttershy gave she a stern look. “Again, I’m one year older than you.”

The group was now inside the library as they enjoyed the festivities. Applejack was enjoying the provided commodities like baked goods from Sugarcube Corner, bowl of punch, and such produce like apples and carrots. Fluttershy joins in and gives some food to her little squirrel friend as Pinkie Pie stares eagerly at the squirrel, showing how anxious she is to use Twilight’s magical item on him. Rarity mingles with Rainbow Dash.

“You know, Rainbow Dash, do you ever get tired of having that wild yet unruly mane and tail of yours? It doesn’t hurt to brush them thoroughly every now and then.” Rarity said.

Rainbow Dash raised eyebrow. “Excuse me?”

“In fact, maybe you should visit the Carousel Boutique tomorrow. I’ll personally have your mane and tail look very spiffy. Who knows? Maybe you might attract a fine young stallion for you to meet.”

Rainbow Dash turns her head away in disgust. “First of, my mane and tail look fine, thank you very much. Besides, what’s the point of brushing them if they’ll get messed up from my fast flying? And second, I do not, REPEAT, do not need a coltfriend. Having one would just get in the way of my training at the Wonderbolts Academy and my job.”

“Well now, I was only trying to help, darling. You don’t need to be in such a huff to me like that.”

“Well, maybe you should chill out for once.” Rainbow then smirked. “In fact, all that stress from designing and taking care of your good looks is NOT doing good for your complexion. I think you’re getting wrinkles right now, heh-heh.”

Rarity gasps. “Really?” Then uses a levitation spell to hold up a mirror towards her face. “Where WHERE!?”

Rainbow Dash fell on her back in laughter. “Bwa ha ha ha! Can’t believe you fell for that! You really are worry art when it comes to your looks.”

“ Grr! Not funny, you careless brute!”

Rainbow Dash rushes to Rarity and stares her down. “Hey! Who are you calling a brute?”

They both started to argue as they cause trouble for the party. Applejack rushed in and stopped them before they go any further, being the peacekeeper that she is. Fluttershy sighs in disappointment from the scene she just seen since she usually avoids getting involved in such quarrels. A set of curtains were placed in front of everyone. Behind them, Twilight Sparkle prepares her presentation of revealing the finished prototypes of her project. She paces back and forth with anticipation while Spike sits on top of crate while snacking on a few gems.

“Okay, okay, settle down. Everything will be fine. Just need to check to see if all is ready.” Twilight started while Spike munched on some snacks. “Spiiiike!”

Her dragon assistant gulps, then smiles nervously. “Sorry about that. Okay, list is ready.”

“Prototypes?”

Spike pulls out sheet revealing the finished magic containers. “Check.”

“Audience ready for Presentation?”

Pinkie Pie enters the curtain and smiles showing she did her job. “Crowd is warmed up and wearing to go, Twilight.”

“Check.” Said Spike.

“Subject brought for first testing?” asked Twilight.

Pinkie Pie pulls a curtain to Twilight, showing Fluttershy’s squirrel on the table. “Squirrel is on site, nuts and all.”

“Double check.” Added Spike.

Twilight smiled. “Great! Pinkie Pie begin introduction!”

“Yes, ma’m!” The party pony saluted.

Pinkie Pie got out and begins her introduction for everyone. “Thank you, everypony, for joining in on this special night. Twilight have an special funarooni project that I know all of you will love and she worked really, really hard on it. So without further ado, heeeeeeeeeeeereeee’s------“

“Just get it over with!” shouted Rainbow Dash.

Pinkie Pie speaks quickly. “Here’s Twilight Sparkle!”

Everypony stomped their hooves as Twilight Sparkle made her appearance after Spike opened the curtains for her. Behind her, there was the stand that holds the prototype stones she worked on all day, being covered by a sheet.

“Thank you all for coming here, everypony. Right now, allow me to explain what have I been working on for quite some time. –Ahem- First of, we’re all familiar in Fluttershy’s amazing special talent of communicating with animals that we admire, correct?” Twilight started.

Everyone looked at Fluttershy. All the attention made Fluttershy blush and smiled nervously while making a cute sound.

“Yeah, what about it?” came Rainbow’s reply.

Twilight continued. “Have you guys ever thought just once that you wish you be able to communicate with animals too?”

Everypony took a moment on that thought and agreed with one another, except Rainbow Dash who shrugged it off. “What’s the point? We have Fluttershy for that. And if you make everypony able to talk with animals, then that makes her special talent less special.” She exclaimed.

“Actually, I don’t mind at all. If everypony able to understand animals like I do, then they be able to know more about them and be closer with each other.” Said Fluttershy.

“Fluttershy, seeing you being easy-going still surprise me.”

“And that is what I’m trying to point out.” Twilight continued. “But communication with animals won’t stop there. I also want improve our relationships with international friends outside of Equestria and with other creatures by breaking the language barrier. That is why I’ve been working on a Translation Spell that will let us not only translate to us on what other foreign languages other beings speak, but also make us speak in their language as well.”

“Simply marvelous! I always wanted to meet ponies from Prance. Well, my Prench isn’t half bad but I do want to speak with them to the fullest. So how does this spell works?” asked Rarity.

Spike brought a blackboard to Twilight Sparkle that shows a chart of how the Translation spell works. Twilight spoke again. “As you can see in this chart, the magic of the spell is sent straight to the brain of the user. Once the user is interacting with a fellow foreign speaker, the spell does its work. As soon as the spell recognizes the being’s language you’re not familiar with, its magic re-arranges the brainwaves and you completely hear him/her fully translated in their own words and accent. And as you speak with them, the spell re-arranges the brainwaves once more. You may sound like that you’re speaking your main language, but the spell is making you think that you are and that you’re actually speaking in your foreign friend’s language. Thus the spell gives 100% clear communication between both parties. In simple terms, you can talk to them and they can talk to you with no problems.”

Everypony understood Twilight’s explanation and show the excitement on their faces. Twilight settles everyone down as she is not finished. “However, there are some flaws on the spell. First, it takes a lot of magic to perform this spell. And second, it only lasts for a little bit, not even enough for a small conversation. Luckily, I found some very special stones thanks to today’s gem hunt with Rarity that will solve this problem. She managed to discover the very same stones used by many of Starswirl the Bearded’s researches, Magic Containers. They are transparent stones that are able to store any type of magic and amplify, and they were especially made to give non-magic beings the ability to use magic. Today, I finished the first prototypes of my newest project in which I now reveal to you all…”

Twilight pulled away the sheet and revealed the newly worked Magic Containers, each one made into pendants with the stones carved into everyone’s cutie marks. Everypony gasped and gazed at once as the transparent stones now filled with bright colored magic with colors that matches the cutie mark’s bearers.

“I call them Translation Stones. These once empty Magic Containers now carry my Translation spell. Anypony that wears these stones around their necks will instantly go through the effects of the spell with no problems or bad side effects. Thanks to the amplification properties of the stones, not only do they multiply the power of the spell by several times but also its duration. Just being prototypes and knowing how much magic it takes to perform the spell, I only used a little bit of magic for them and my guess is that they only last for a few days, but still work effectively. You’ll know that the stones lose its effect once its stored magic is gone, when its unique shine and color fades away until its completely transparent. With that said and done, I completely show my newest project.”

Pinkie Pie poses and presents the stones. “Ta-da!”

Applejack fixes her hat. “Hoo doggy! For once, I’m actually impressed with one of your magical inventions. Only on question remains to be answered: do they actually work?”

“I’m glad that you asked, Applejack. You are all lucky that you will witness the stones’ first testing phase. Pinkie Pie here happily volunteered in testing one of the stones so we will start right away.” Twilight explained.

Twilight Sparkle presents Pinkie Pie with her matching Translation Stone pendant. She tied it around Pinkie Pie’s next very carefully. Pinkie happily giggles as she takes a closer look at her stone. It shines so brightly and ominous that Pinkie couldn’t help but stare at it even more as she was charmed by it.

Twilight Sparkle clears throat. “Um, Pinkie?”

“Oops, sorry Twilight. Can’t help but stare it. It just looks so pretty.” Said Pinkie.

“Okay, then. Fluttershy, will you bring your squirrel friend, please?”

Fluttershy nervously, yet slowly, trotted her way up to Pinkie Pie and Twilight Sparkle. She couldn’t help but worry about the squirrel friend, even though they made sure nothing bad will happen to him. Spike prepared a stool for the squirrel to stand on so he and Pinkie Pie can meet eye to eye. Fluttershy took squirrel and safely placed him on the stool.

“Again, are you positively sure he’ll be alright?” The timid pegasus asked.

“Don’t worry, Fluttershy. He’ll be just fine.” Twilight replied.

“If you say so.” Fluttershy then focuses on the squirrel. “You just stand there and be a good little trooper, okay?”

The squirrel squeaked and nodded to what Fluttershy then she trotted back to her original spot. It seems her nervousness faded away a little knowing that she can trust her friends. Pinkie Pie and the squirrel focused at Twilight Sparkle.

“Go ahead, Pinkie Pie. Try talking to him.” Said Twilight.

Pinkie Pie squeed with delight. “Finally! Been meaning to ask this for so long.” She then clears her throat. “So, little squirrel, what do you think your cousins, the flying squirrels?”

The squirrel made a chatter of squeaks to answer Pinkie Pie’s question. Pinkie Pie looked dumbfounded, not knowing what he was trying to say. She cleans one of her ears with her hoof thinking she might not be hearing well.

“Could you repeat that?” she asked.

The squirrel repeats himself for Pinkie Pie but still she didn’t understood anything.

“Well, Pinkie Pie?” Twilight asked.

Pinkie Pie looked disappointed. “Sorry, Twilight. I got nothing.”

Twilight taps under her muzzle with her hoof. “Hmm, I know Pinkie Pie was speaking normally just now, so I thought the stones would work at least by translating the squirrel.” Twilight used her Levitation spell on the remaining stone pendants and brought them to the others and tied them around their necks. She also hers around her neck as well. “I might have you all test the others to see if they work. Let’s try again.”

The squirrel squeaks once more. Everyone look confused except for Fluttershy since she understood without needing her stone.

“Mines is not working.” Said Twilight. “Anything for you guys?”

“Nothing.” Said Rarity.

“Nope.” Replied Applejack.

“Nada.” Added Rainbow Dash.

“Mine didn’t work either. But I can still tell what he just said if you like.” Said Fluttershy.

Pinkie Pie got a stern look.“No! I want to hear it straight from squirrel’s mouth!”

Twilight Sparkle groans. “Why now? And I put so much effort on my presentation. Maybe they’re not carrying enough magic. Wait up.”

Twilight used her Levitation spell and took Pinkie Pie’s pendant. Pinkie Pie’s ears dropped, sat on her flank, and pouted knowing she had to wait. Twilight inspected Pinkie’s stone carefully. She then focuses her magic from her horn as she readies to cast it on the stone. The stone started charging the magic it’s receiving from Twilight as it continues to glow brightly. Pinkie Pie looked impatient as she looks back and forth anxiously, but finally she snapped.

“AAUUGH!! I CAN’T TAKE THIS ANYMORE!!!” yelled Pinkie.

With her patience broken, Pinkie Pie rushed to Twilight and took her stone away from her.

“Hey! I’m not done with it!” said Twilight.

Pinkie Pie wore it back around her neck then went for the squirrel once more. She then shakes the squirrel repeatedly and yells impatiently, “WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT FLYING SQUIRRELS!? TELL ME NOOOOOOOW!!!”

She left the poor squirrel dazed after all that shaking and yelling. The others were about to say something to Pinkie on her recklessness, but then Pinkie’s started glow very strongly.

Rainbow Dash points at Pinkie’s stone with her hoof. “What is up with your stone?”

Twilight Sparkle looked sternly. “Pinkie Pie! What have you done now?”

Pinkie Pie shook her head. “I didn’t do anything! I didn’t do anything!”

The squirrel scuttered behind Spike as they stared at what’s going on. Suddenly, a beam of pink light shot from Pinkie’s stone and hits Twilight’s horn. She flinches after the hit and collapses.

“Twilight!” Shouted her friends.

Twilight Sparkle groaned in pain. “Ugh! Oh no! Pinkie’s stone is draining my magic. Why is this happening?”

“Didn’t I told ya’ somethin’ bad was gonna happen when you mess with progress? Now look what’s happening to Twilight!” said Applejack.

Fluttershy curled up and made scared noises.

“Applejack, this is not the time to be right! We need to do something before things get any worse!” said Rarity.

Rainbow Dash readies herself to step in. “I’m on it!”

The rainbow-haired pegasus quickly flew towards Pinkie Pie and was about to kick away her stone, but the built-up magic from it worked as a barrier and pushed her away. She crashes on a book shelf by her back and landed on her flank.

Spike quickly went after and helped her to get up. “Rainbow Dash! Are you okay?” he asked.

Rainbow Dash recovers and places her hoof on her head. “I’m fine… Didn’t saw that coming.”

All of sudden, everypony else’s stones shined brightly and shot out their own beams of light and hit Twilight’s horn as well. Everypony froze from where they were. Twilight groaned in pain even more as the other stones sucks her magic as well.

“Not good!” said Applejack.

Twilight had her eyes closed during all her suffering from the stones. But then all of sudden, her eyes opened showing glowing white eyes. It’s a sign that she is going through one of her magic outbursts again, just like what happened before during the entrance exam for Princess Celestia’s School for Gifted Unicorns when she was a little filly. She started floating off the ground and shrieked in fear. Everypony got startled and stepped back. Her current state made the stones take even more magic as the stone glowed brighter and brighter. They all shielded their eyes as the stones glow too bright for them to see, filling the room, even Spike and the squirrel. Then a burst of light ignited and everyone yelled in terror from the hit. The burst was so powerful that beams of light came out from every window and opening of the library, and can be seen from outside as it also made sudden loud sound.

Some time has passed since the burst of light. Owlowiscious was outside doing his usual outing for food whenever Twilight lets him free for the night. Maybe it’s because of his animal instincts, he felt something was not right. He quickly flew as fast he could and rushed back to the library. On the way, he noticed several ponies woken up from the loud noise and a bright light that came from the library. They were all baffled and confused not knowing where it came from, but Owlowiscious might have guessed something happened to Twilight and the others, and that he hopes he is wrong. He entered the top floor window in which Twilight usually leaves it open for him. It was dark and noticed Twilight’s bed was empty. Afterwards he flew downstairs where there was still light. The first thing he noticed was Spike was unconscious as the squirrel that was with him was fine but tried to wake him up. Owlowiscious landed on Spike’s belly and pecked on his head a few times as he tries to wake him up. Spike soon regained conscious. He opened his eyes and noticed Owlowiscious.

“Hoo!” the owl greeted.

Spike backs away a few feet in fright. “AAAGH!.. Oh, it’s just you, Owlowiscious…Ugh, I kinda feel queasy for some reason.”

Spike closed his eyes and holds his head as he took a moment to recover. But then he remembers what happened…that burst of light. He soon jumped as he realized what the reason he was knocked out was. “Twilight and the others! I hope they’re all right.”

He, Owlowiscious, and the squirrel rushed to where their friends were. But suddenly they stopped from their tracks as they froze from shock. Their friends were there no more…instead they were replacing by six different ponies, all of whom were unconscious.

Spike places his hand in front of his mouth in shock. “Oh no… They’re gone! But who are all these ponies?”

Spike took a closer look at the group of ponies and realized that they are all mares. He notice one Pegasus with an awkward mane and tail style. It’s all silver and blown back but flow with spikes, also her mane had side-tails. She had gray fur and her flank had a strange cutie mark that look like it’s some sort of red-orange beam that it can be held like a weapon and behind it is a jug he never seen before that has some sort of foreign lettering.

The next one was a Unicorn who looked like she has the same color of her mane, tail, and fur like Twilight, except her mane and tail does not have the light purple stripe and that she has a much deeper purple color on her mane and tail, as deep as a grape. Her mane is flat but she has side-tails, her long mane was tied to two thin lower ponytails and that she was wearing some sort of forehead piece. Her tail is also flat as her mane but still long. This Unicorn has a cutie marks that look like some old yet strong and healthy tree with flourishing leaves and light colored bark.

Next to her lies a little filly Pegasus with her light bluish-green mane and tail. Her mane is tied into two high pigtails held by ornaments and her forehead is exposed showing some light blue marks. She has light pink fur and her flank is completely blank with no cutie mark.

After her, there was another Unicorn, and her mane and tail stands out more than the others. Her red mane is tied into a long high ponytail and it’s as spiky as the mane of the grey Pegasus, maybe more so. The front of her mane has a unique style that almost like it’s shaped into a crab and its exposing her forehead, and also have side-tails. Her fur is hot pink and she has a cutie mark that looks like a holographic laptop with a crab on the screen.

The last two mares are both Earth Ponies. First one has blonde colored mane and tail done in a fashionable style with slight curls while her mane is tied to a high ponytail and has slightly curled side-tails. Her fur looks like tan-colored and has a cutie mark of some sort of gelatin-like pink cube.

The other Earth Pony has dark green mane and tail, both long and sleek. Her mane almost reminded him of Pinkie Pie’s mane when it goes flat. She is wearing a red headband on her forehead. Finally, her fur was green and her cutie mark looks like some sort of badge with the initials “GXP”.

After Spike finished inspecting each of these ponies, it’s safe for him to assume that they’re not anypony that he could recognize from Ponyville, maybe not anywhere in Equestria for that matter. He can’t shake the feeling that somehow that these ponies are out of this world. Owlowiscious and the squirrel look sad at Spike, showing how worried they were that their designated caretakers and their friends were now missing.

Spike showed a determined look on his face. This is not the time to weep, he thought. He knows that he must take action for the sake of his friends. In fact, he knows what he must do. He quickly went for a parchment paper and quill and rushed into writing his letter to Twilight’s teacher and ruler of Equestria, Princess Celestia.

“Dear Princess Celestia:

“This is Spike.
“Something terrible happened tonight. Your faithful student, Twilight Sparkle, was just showing her latest magical project at the Ponyville Library to our friends Pinkie Pie, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and Applejack. It involved storing a spell she recently made into Magical Containers. But things went bad when Pinkie Pie got in the way, and the stones started taking Twilight Sparkle’s magic and forced her into going to one of her magic outbursts, and caused a flash of light.
“When I came to after that weird light, everypony went missing and in their place is a new group of ponies I never have seen before. I don’t know what to do now that Twilight and the others are gone. Please come quickly the library!

“Your faithful subject,Spike”

Spike shows a worried look. “I really hope you can do something about this…”

Spike breathed his magical green fire, burning the written parchment as it is instantly sent to Princess Celestia. All he can do now is wait and hope for the best. One thing for sure, something must have happened for a reason that her friends disappeared and were replaced by these new ponies, hence they might know something about this. But he is assured that his friends are out there somewhere. Spike only hopes that they are all fine, wherever they are.


Author's Note

GreatDragon AD here.

First off, thank you all for reading not only my very first MLP: FiM fan fiction, but the first ever fan fiction I ever made. I’ve been a long time writer for many years, but I’m only used to writing comic scripts about my characters and contracted as a comic script writer for a paid site. But the first thing I ever written was a Tenchi Muyo fan fic.

Seriously, I love anime so much and the Tenchi Muyo series has always been one of my favorite series. Well, my first attempt was very poor, especially when I tried writing on an email to the Tenchi Fan Fiction Archive and was a self-insertion. It was submitted, but I never counted it as my first real fan fic since I wasn’t so experienced. Years later, I’m a pro and a brony now. I read some MLP fan fics that were well done, especially “My Little Dashie,” and some crossover fics found on fanfiction.net.

When I thought about the Mane 6, something hit me like a ton of brinks. They are a group of six girls and the first thing I thought about was the girls of Tenchi Muyo, specifically in Tenchi Universe for adding Kiyone as the sixth Tenchi girl. I know some might not agree on how this crossover would work. But I took some time in brainstorming and I figured out how it would blend well and its by the idea of having both groups of girls not only to switch worlds, but to switch in forms too. I kinda felt it would click to see how Tenchi would handle the Mane 6 replacing Ryoko and the others, while they try to adjust being ponies themselves until they figured out how both parties get back to their proper worlds and forms.

Well, I hope you guys enjoyed the first chapter. I definitely put my heart and soul into it and wanted to prove my love for both series. This also definitely helped me to redeem myself from my first Tenchi fic. Also, big thanks to Capt. Rico Sakara for doing the cover art and designing the Tenchi girls as ponies, Jon Freeman for designing the human versions of the Mane 6, and Hinomars19 for doing the colored images of the Mane 6.

Capt. Rico Sakara: http://captricosakara.deviantart.com/

Jon Freeman: http://jonfreeman.deviantart.com/

Hinomars19: http://hinomars19.deviantart.com/

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Editor’s Note:

Hello everyone and everypony! Capt Rico Sakara here from Deviantart.

First off, a big thank you to Greatdragon AD for having me along on this new carnival trip that is No Need for Ponies. Like him, I too have been a fan of Tenchi Muyo since I first saw the series on Toonami when it first came out, and ever since coming here to FIMfiction to read some good stories, I’ve been waiting long and hard for someone to finally to decide on writing a Tenchi crossover with our favorite ponies. I just didn’t expect that person would be GD. But once he told me he was writing it, I went ballistic and told him, “MAKE. THIS. HAPPEN!”

Unlike GD, I have writing experience in writing fanfiction, as my first fanfiction was a short Digimon/Armored Core crossover I wrote back in 1999. I even tried writing a huge crossover novel between Eureka Seven and Sonic Riders: Zero Gravity, called “Gekkostate & Sonic Heroes,” back in 2009, and even made some artwork for it, which you view back in my gallery. Unfortunately, I lost interest soon after writing the first four chapters (although I still have a txt file on the full plot and synopsis).

Anyways, I want to write down my own editor’s notes here, and say that my editing style isn’t perfect. Even though I look like a better write from the editing I did, I know I still need a lot of work. So I wanted to say that if there are still any grammar errors in any of the chapters, please point them out to me so that I can correct them. Again, I’m not perfect, so either I missed something or my editing skills need work.

I also want to point out about giving the Mane6 pubic hair. I did that with GD’s permission, because after reading a couple of anthro and humanized clop fics, and seeing so much anthro and anime porn, I just couldn’t stand seeing any adult characters without pubes. In fact, I’m sick and tired of anyone writing (or drawing, for that matter) the character(s) with shaved clits. To me, that’s unnatural. If you want to look at or read about shaved or hairless clits, look at lolicon or cub art, K? Because the nude scenes in this fanfcition are for people who either have a pubic hair fetish or don’t mind seeing full bushes, OK? I have a pubic hair fetish, and have been since before I hit puberty (you can blame the spy camera scenes from Revenge of the Nerds for that). If you don’t like hairy pussies, than I’m sorry this fiction isn’t for you.

Anyways, with that said and done, I hope to look forward with how GD writes out this story, and can’t wait to see what happens next. And I hope you guys enjoy this too.

Until then, Live Long and Prosper!

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