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Sacrifice: Trixie's Lament

by Coldfire Hart
Trixie returns to Ponyville after the defeat of Tirek and raises suspicions as she seeks out Twilight and her friends for help to teach her about friendship and how to be a better mare... But is that the only reason for Trixie's return?

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AU with canon from S1-S5 intertwined
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Two-years after Tirek's defeat, an old acquaintance returns to Ponyville and sets up shop. Trixie Lulamoon, a twice-felled show mare with a boastful ego, comes to her rival seeking to become a better mare by learning the ways of Friendship.

But is that the only reason for Trixie's wanting to change, or could there be something deeper behind her reason?

Will Twilight and her friends be able to help Trixie change, or will she be herself through-and-through?

Much thanks to 0_0 for proofreading every chapter!
Beware of spoilers in the comments! It's no fun ruining an unread story for yourself, right? :raritywink:

Teen
Complete
Tragedy
Slice of Life
Alternate Universe
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
TTMO

16184 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read
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6 Chapters:

  1. A New Leaf 2015-06-14 20:29:34 UTC
    3523
  2. I Want to Change! 2015-07-17 01:36:11 UTC
    2620
  3. Her Kind Eyes, Pt.1 2016-01-01 21:23:27 UTC
    3744
  4. Her Kind Eyes, Pt. 2 2016-01-19 01:41:59 UTC
    6297
  5. Trixie's Lament 2016-12-05 22:03:26 UTC
  6. The Alone and Despaired Trixie 2017-01-14 17:29:22 UTC