Abomination in Equestria

by King Xeno

Bad News

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It had been about a week since the Hunter had attacked, and they still had no clue as to where it could be, or what it wanted. Fluttershy stood in the market of Ponyville with Angel and the Abomination. The Abomination wasn't very comfortable in town, he was looked down upon, treated like a monster, and some of the ponies even turned their fear and hate of him onto Fluttershy. The Abomination sat next to Fluttershy as she spoke with her friend, Applejack, and felt something hit his head. It didn't hurt it was enough to annoy the large creature. He turned to face a group of unicorns most likely teenagers, who were lifting small stones using their magic and tossed them at the creature. The Abomination tried his best to ignore them, and he understood why they feared him, after what he had done to the Hunter, he even feared himself, now he was used to ripping off the heads of his victims, and promptly leaving them behind, but there was something more to that instance. He had been angry, not in the mood to hunt or even willing to fight, and as a result lost control. He looked at Fluttershy and took notice that the wounds were healing, they had scabbed over several days ago, and many had already disappeared, but those that remained saddened him. He felt another rock hit his face, this one larger, and pointed. While this stone was small, when the facts that it was thrown with magic and the sharp point on the end, it cracked his shell, he let out a quick growl of pain, which got Fluttershy's attention.

"Mr. Abomination? Is something wrong?" She asked, before noticing the unicorns. "Excuse me, but could you please stop? You're going to hurt him." Fluttershy said, which made the unicorns laugh.

"Us hurt him? We should be more worried about him hurting us. It's your fault too, keeping that monster around..." One said, but was quickly nailed in the nose by an apple. Angel let out a huff and hopped onto the Abomination's head, while the Abomination may have tried to eat him once, it was the past and the two had really bonded. Fluttershy ended her conversation with her friend and quickly began to make her way back to her home with the Abomination and Angel following. She let out a gasp when she saw her house, somepony had painted something on it.

Written in dark lack paint was "Get rid of the bug, or we'll get rid of you!" Fluttershy sighed and moved behind the house, she came out with a can of paint and a brush.

"You two head inside, I'll fix this up..." She said with a sad tone. Angel hopped inside but the Abomination stood by the door, eyeing the road to the small house, he didn't want Fluttershy out here alone after what happened last time.


The Abomination rushed out of the house, to see Fluttershy was surrounded by griffins.

"You've refused to get rid of the bug, so we're going to teach you a lesson..." One said, and they began to attack her, with their beaks and claws. Fluttershy let out cries of pain and utter fear as they griffins beat her. The Abomination tried to get to her, but felt something wrap around his neck, it was a chain made of an unknown material, but he couldn't break it with his strength. The griffin tied him to the house and he tried to reach his friend, but was unable to get far. He could only watch as she was beaten causing bruises and welts to form, the Abomination only knew of one way to help his friend, so he clawed at his own arm and broke the shell, causing his blood to melt the chain. Now that he was free the Abomination charged, scattering the griffins, as the fled they laughed and shouted horrible things at the two. The Abomination scooped Fluttershy up in his arms and rushed towards town, causing many of the ponies to glare, shout, even spit at him, but he made his way to the library, before slamming his tail on the door, which was opened and revealed Twilight. She gasped as the Abomination held out Fluttershy with a worried expression. Twilight took the pegasus indoors and did everything she could to help her friend.


He pushed the thought out of his head and noticed an approaching figure, he let out a warning hiss, which prompted Fluttershy to look, but she flew down and began to explain that it was one of her friends. Pinkie Pie approached with a basket bouncing on her head with each step. She gently patted the Abomination on his head and he pressed his forehead against hers.

"Hi Fluttershy. Hi Mr. A." Pinkie said, using the nickname she gave him, and placed the basket onto the ground. "I heard about what happened in the market, so I brought you some cupcakes to hopefully cheer you up!" Pinkie said, with a large bright smile.

"Thank you Pinkie. How did you hear about what happened in the market?" Fluttershy asked, now curious to hear this story.

"Well, it's been going around town that Mr. A chucked an apple at a unicorns face for throwing stones at him." Pinkie said, and Fluttershy frowned.

"Angel threw the apple... They just don't like Mr. Abomination, but if they gave him a chance then maybe, just maybe they would see that he's a big sweet heart." Fluttershy said, pressing her hoof on his back, he let out a happy sounding growl and let out another warning hiss. Approaching was the Mayor, although she had a sad look and held a letter in her mouth.

"Oh, hello Mayor. I wasn't expecting you. Would you like to come in?" Fluttershy asked, nervous about the reason she had come.

"I'm afraid I can't, but I have bad news. There have been many complaints about... Him..." The Mayor began, pausing and pointing at the Abomination. "To the point where they started a petition to... Remove him from Ponyville..." The Mayor continued, which made Pinkie and Fluttershy gasp. "I'm sorry to say that they had gotten almost everypony's signature, the only ones having not signed it being you, Pinkie, and myself." The Mayor continued, which shocked Fluttershy.

"You mean... Rarity... Twilight... Applejack... And... And Rainbow Dash... All signed it...?" She asked, and the Mayor slowly nodded with a frown.

"I'm sorry to say that you have three days to..." The Mayor paused again, trying to think of a polite way of saying this. "Find him a new home..." She finished.

"What will happen if she doesn't?" Pinkie asked, while the Mayor looked at the ground. "What will happen?" Pinkie repeated.

"I'll be forced to... Evict you from your current home..." The Mayor said. Fluttershy didn't respond, she stared at them, before turning and running into the Everfree, leaving a trail of tears as she ran. The Abomination began to chase, but when the Mayor moved to assist he hissed at her, she backed off and continued to chase Fluttershy, hoping that she wasn't hurt.

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