Abomination in Equestria
Hunter's First Attack
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When switching between Abomination and Predator POV, I will put *** between paragraphs. Just to give you all a warning.
Hunter's First Attack
The Hunter bent down and lifted up a black object that shone in the light, he let out a few grunts and gurgles that translated to joy. Joy that he had found a trail, this trail led to his prey. No... Not his prey... Towards his target, he hunted this thing not out of pleasure, but to restore honor to his kind's name. He rose and activated his cloaking device, which made him completely invisible. He began to move and track his target, hopefully he's be able to get through without bringing attention to himself.
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The Abomination blended in perfectly with the darkness, he staked his prey, it was a cat like creature, with bat wings and a scorpion tail. It feasted on a rabbit that it had caught while the Abomination prepared to strike. He leapt out with his claws ready to dig into the flesh of the beast before him. He let out a loud screech as his teeth sliced the skin and muscle of the Manticore with ease. It had no time to react, for the attack had been simply to cripple the creature, it fell onto the ground, wounded and bleeding heavily. The Abomination looked at its crippled and injured victim as he grabbed onto its head by the scruff of its neck, placing the other clawed hand onto its shoulders, and began to pull and push at the same time, The Manticore let out yowls and cries of pain as the skin began to tear, followed by the muscle. There was small amount of resistance as the Abomination attempted to separate the head and spine from the body, it yanked as blood began to flood the ground, the grass was turning brown and the Manticore ceased making noises, and felt something snap, he continued to pull and eventually felt it break which caused the Abomination to stagger backwards. He held out the Manticore's head and looked at the blood dripping, with the spine dangling loosely under it. He dropped the head and began to walk away. He didn't know why he often felt compelled to do this, but he was one to give into certain instincts. Some of these instincts were stronger than others and he knew that this would be strictly looked down upon, so he would do it out here in secret. His amazing sense of hearing allowed him to hear Fluttershy's cries for him, most likely worried about his safety. He enjoyed being around her, maybe it was the place changing him, whatever was doing this he began to enjoy it, for now he would need to see what Fluttershy wanted of him.
The Abomination looked at the four that were in front of him, while two were taller, and two were the same height. Two appeared to be siblings while the others appeared to be in an intimate relationship. The Abomination was becoming overwhelmed with the multitude of scents that flooded his nose, he growled and began to crouch to the ground.
"No, no. These are friends, they won't hurt you." Fluttershy said, gently rubbing the top of his head. He began to rise back up, but still ready to attack if necessary, and began to listen to them.
"Fluttershy, are you sure it is wise to keep such an..." Princess Luna began, but stopped trying to think of a word that would hopefully not offend this creature. "Interesting... Animal in your home?" She finished, and Fluttershy nodded. The celestial sisters exchanged nervous glances as the Abomination began to dart his heard around, he let out a low hiss. The Abomination was seeing something that they couldn't, he could see the outline of a figure, looming over them. He let out a loud shriek and began to back away looking upwards at the intruder. He leapt upwards towards the monster and collided with it, which caused the creature to become revealed. It was muscular and wore a strange looking mask, with a mesh suit, two strange wrist gauntlets, and had long dreadlocks. The Hunter now enraged let out a loud guttural roar, and quickly punched the Abomination in his stomach, not harm or kill but to simply get some space between them. The Hunter began to charge and the Abomination who was now lying on the ground in pain, but before the Hunter could get a solid strike to the head, a blast of magic hit him, sending him flying a few feet.
"What was that thing!?" Rarity shrieked, she began to back away while the Hunter recovered. The Abomination leapt forward and pinned the Hunter onto the ground, before opening his mouth and letting out a loud hiss, the second set of jaws stretched out of his mouth and began to gnash its teeth, the Abomination moved to strike, then suddenly let out a sharp cry of pain, he fell back as the Hunter's hidden blades pierced his side, causing the acidic blood to heavily flow. This would not stop the Abomination who dug his claws into the Hunter's arm, his blood began to flow, while it was a darker shade of green, it also glowed even in the light. The Hunter roared and charged at the Abomination, tackling him and causing them to roll a few feet, before kicking the hybrid off and watching it get flung a massive distance. The Hunter began to follow the trail of acid blood and found itself heading towards a town, knowing that it would at this point be impossible to make it out unnoticed walked in without any form of cloaking, which scared the town's local inhabitants. The Hunter saw the Abomination had landed on a small wooden structure, breaking it and piercing his exoskeleton, the wood however was being destroyed from his acid blood. The Abomination felt pain all over his body, and was unable to move, he was still able to breathe and slightly lift his arms, but beyond that the agony was too great. He saw the Hunter step over him, and his wrist blades activated, he pulled back his arm to strike and... There was a second blast of magic that got his attention. The Hunter turned to his left in order to face the white Alicorn that stood across from him. Something on the Hunter's back moved, a strange object pointed at Celestia's forehead, and three small red dots creating a triangle formed, the Abomination had risen at this point, and charged just as the Hunter fired his weapon, the Abomination tackled the Princess, causing the orb of energy to miss and instead hit a building, breaking away a large chunk of it. The Abomination ran at the Hunter, and began to claw and bite, with full fury being unleashed, his primal and natural instincts took over. The Hunter was wounded, losing large amounts of blood, and had a large alien standing on his chest, but he was not dead, however he thought he would die when the Abomination grabbed onto his head with one hand, and placed the other on his shoulder, before pushing and pulling at the same time, which made the Hunter yell out in pain.
"Stop...! The Abomination heard, but ignored the cry. It happened again, but this time louder. Stop, please!" The Abomination recognized the voice, but was unable to process who it belonged to. "Mr. Abomination! Please stop! Leave him alone now! He's down!" The Abomination felt a pair of hooves press onto his back, he dropped the Hunter and slashed with his claws at the creature behind him, and then realized his mistake. Fluttershy took a few steps back, red blood began to drip from the long wounds that now ran down her forelegs, chest, and neck. Her eyes began to fill with tears, and the Abomination began to come back to his senses. The Abomination turned to face the Hunter, only to discover that he was gone. The Abomination moved by Fluttershy and wrapped its body around her again, although for the majority his wounds were healed, there was still a small amount of his blood that burned into her flesh, but she didn't even notice, at the moment she returned the hug and started to weep.
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