the way magical mystery cure should have ended

by laughingjack013
the way it ended is not my way... so here is mine. it still has twilight and celestia but, everyone else no. sorry it is just not how my story goes.

twilight goofed.it starts out kind of like the magical mystery sure but then turns down a different path. story is different, but better.
you still get twilight and celestia but no one else really. this is a dark story so only teens can read it is my warning that you not read if you are a fan of twilight.

twilight hears a knock at the door. she opens it and there is a book on the ground that has a note from celestia. it says it is star-swirl the bearded's uncompleted masterpiece. she flips to the back and reads it. she then goes to sleep.

to find out what is different you have to read the story.

Teen
Complete
Dark
Sad
Tragedy
 

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