Clouds

by Cloud Wing

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Weightless...

...Cold...

...And falling...

-=Flashback=-

"Cloudwing!" Somepony yelled, "What are you doing!?"

Cloudwing opened his eyes in time to see Rainbow Dash staring at him as he fell.

"Why is the the ground coming at me?" he thought. With a sudden jolt, he realized that the ground wasn't coming twards him, he was falling!

Trying to shake off his exhaustion, he flapped his wings and tried to pull up. Unfortunately, he was still so exhausted from last night that his wings beat sluggishly.

"No, not now!", he thought. "Not after everything last night!" Panic rose in his throat. He was only mere meters from the ground.

-=END OF FLASHBACK=-

Cloudwing had felt many types of pain but nothing prepared him for what he felt now. He couldn't flap his left wing and his neck felt like molten lava.

He tried to open his eyes but when it felt like he had, all he could see was darkness.

Sitting there in unbearable pain he thought of everything he'd done. He'd never told Rainbow how he felt about her, mainly because he knew she'd never like him due to his lazy nature.

After what felt like an eternity, he felt somepony touching his muzzle. For a moment, he was elated, glad he wasn't dead and stuck in an eternity of pain.

Once whatever was on his face was removed, he took in his surroundings. "Uh, hey Cloud." said a familiar voice from his left.

Attempting to turn and look who was speaking, he managed to knock his left wing out of the sling it was in and lay on top of it. He moaned in pain but pushed through until he could see...

"Rainbow?" Cloudwing was astonished. Rainbow Dash never really seemed to care for him other than when he was training with the other pegai. (yes that is the plural of pegasus.)

"I noticed that you fell asleep on one of the clouds again."

"Oh, uh yeah. Rough night last night." I lied.

"Oh really." she said. She seemed to be able to know when I was lying.

"So uh, how come only my neck and left wing are in pain rather than my whole body. I'm pretty sure there's no way I could've survived that fall."

"Scootaloo came by and noticed so she tried to save you but only managed to change the direction of your fall. Luckily you survived with just a broken wing and sprained neck."

"Visiting hours are over. Come by again tomorrow." said a voice from the doorway. I looked over and noticed that a nurse had stopped at my room. "Oh uh, I guess I should get going. Get well soon Cloud."

Was it my imagination or did it look like she was blushing.

I was about to push it aside when her face showed a malovent expression but was gone before I could blink...


I hope you guys liked chapter one of my first creepypasta. I know it may be a little lame with as little dialogue but there will be more. Remember to vote and comment. I'm Also accepting characters of your own to add.

For those of you who want to know where this fits in with the mlp creepypasta time line, it comes after cupcakes. There will be more plot twists soon to.

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