The Human Equestrian war

Hello guys American Brony here and I just want to say a few things. First off the story I admit wasn't the best I think I can do but still if you liked or disliked this story please leave a comment telling me why if you don't like it and suggest ways I could fix it. For those of you who liked the story please leave support down below and tell me if you want more or not.

   The 2nd thing is that I am thinking of making another story in the same conflict but a actual story not just a little section of a battle. The story would most likely show the more stages of the war and I could get other countries in the mix but as I said your choice. The story would show both the pony perspective and the human perspective both on the battlefield and off.

   That's all and now i am just going to try to get the 1000 words so i can publish this.

   How's your day. (Insert answer)

   Sounds good well mine has been just fine (Insert a comment about your favorite story)

   That's a very good story if I do say so myself and well mine is ............. what is my favorite story. Be right back *leaves the computer with sounds of explosions and gun fire in the background then about 5 minutes after I return* ok i found it. It's The War Of The Worlds by H.G. Wells.

   (Insert comment about have we reached the 1000 words mark yet)

   No we have about 138 worlds left to do but less now so for the rest of the time here are the lyrics to Imagine Dragons Monster

Ever since I could remember,

everything inside of me,

Just wanted to fit in (Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh).

I was never one for pretenders,

Everything I tried to be,

Just wouldn't settle in (Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh).

If I told you what I was,

Would you turn your back on me?

And if I seem dangerous,

Would you be scared?

I get the feeling just because,

Everything I touch isn't dark enough

If this problem lies in me

I'm only a man with a candle to guide me,

I'm taking a stand to escape what's inside me.

A monster, a monster,

I've turned into a monster,

A monster, a monster,

And it keeps getting stronger.

Can I clear my conscience,

If I'm different from the rest,

Do I have to run and hide? (Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh).

I never said that I want this,

This burden came to me,

And it's made it's home inside. (Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh).

If I told you what I was,

Would you turn your back on me?

And if I seem dangerous,

Would you be scared?

I get the feeling just because,

Everything I touch isn't dark enough

If this problem lies in me

I'm only a man with a candle to guide me,

I'm taking a stand to escape what's inside me.

A monster, a monster,

I've turned into a monster,

A monster, a monster,

And it keeps getting stronger.

I'm only a man with a candle to guide me,

I'm taking a stand to escape what's inside me.

A monster, a monster,

I've turned into a monster,

A monster, a monster,

And it keeps getting stronger.