Prologue
(Narrator has British accent)
It was a dark day...when he was changed. Young Anon was walking home from school after another hard day of being bullied for his love for My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. Oh how he loved MLP. He just wished he could go to Equestria, and be one of them. To hang out with the mane six was his dream. Then… He was being pulled in. A portal had appeared out of nowhere. And he was being pulled in to it.
“AUGH, NO STOP IT!” He screamed, as he was being pulled through the portal, the burning sensation he felt was the worst pain imaginable. Was this it? Was he going to perish?... Alone? Without ever seeing his dream come true? But his screams were heard by no one...he was doomed.
…
He awoke, in a field. “Ugh, what happened?” He tried to stand, but his efforts were fruitless. He looked down at his legs to see what the problem was, only to find that the legs he possessed were not his own… They were that of an equine. he looked at the rest of his body, only to discover that he had became an ALICORN!
(Cut off by Phoenix Writer) “Wait, wait, STOP! That’s all WRONG!” He screamed, angrily at the narrator, fire in his eyes.
Why? What’s wrong?
“That’s not the story that we’re doing! This isn’t some stupid story about a boy becoming an alicorn.” He said, rolling his eyes at the narrator. “And would you STOP doing that? You don’t have to narrate what I’M doing.” He state-...
Oh. Alright then. What is this story then?
Didn’t you read the first chapter?
Um...Yes, but I thought it was boring and a bit dull.
It’s the story of Phoenix Legend, and it includes some of his friends. This is his story...their story…
Oh, alright! I get it!.. I’m the only one that likes a classic story of a boy turned alicorn…
Ya know what? Forget the prologue. You’re fired
WHAT?! But, you CAN’T do that! You NEED me!
No, I don’t think so… It’s a simple story. I believe that the readers are smart enough to get it
But...NO, I REFUSE! I won’t leave until this is done the RIGHT way!
Oh... umm… SECURITY!
(Security comes in and begins to drag the obnoxious narrator away)
YOU’LL BE HEARING FROM MY LAWYERS! I’LL DESTROY THIS FANFIC IF IT’S THE LAST THING I DO!
(He’s gone… Thank goodness)
(Sigh) Well, now that that’s taken care of; let’s get down to business...
Chapter One
“The train will be arriving in Ponyville shortly”
Those words… Who knew that they were to mean something amazing to me?
…
I stepped off the train, carrying my one bag with me. The rest of my bags had been sent ahead to my new house...well, new to me, that is. I was never the one to make friends.
I had lived in Canterlot my whole life, and the only people I really talked to were my parents. With the exception being Shining Armor. I had worked at the Canterlot Castle as a guard, and in my time there, I got to know him. He told me about Ponyville, the place where his sister made many friends. So, when I was discharged from service; this seemed like a good place to go.
As I walked through the small town, I noticed that it seemed...nice. I saw many friendly ponies throughout…
Then she bumped into me. A young mare, that looked to be around the same age as me. She had a light blue and pink mane, and a light blue body.
“Oh, I’m sorry...I didn’t see you there. My name is Phoenix, and I’m new here. I was just taking a look around this lovely town” I spat out. You could tell that I was nervous back then, It was SO obvious.
“Yeah, well watch where you’re going next time… Dumb bird” She said, casually, almost as if being called a ‘Dumb bird’ wasn’t an insult. Before my bird-brain could think of a response, she’d disappeared.
“Stupid Phoenix. You made a fool out of yourself to the first pony you met…” I said, angry at myself. I’d had enough looking around. Strangely, I felt hungry for some cotton candy at that moment. But I shrugged it off.
It was late, and I still hadn’t even been to my house. So that was the next place to go.
…
As I stepped through the door to my house, I couldn’t help but be pleased. I had seen pictures, but they didn’t show how much space the house had. It had two bedrooms, two bathrooms, and a very spacious kitchen. No upstairs or downstairs, but I liked that. My bed hadn’t been moved into my room yet. Heck, the mattress was just laying there on the floor. But I was too tired to do anything. It had been a long train ride, and I was tired. Without another word, or even a shower; I dropped on my bed, and drifted into sweet sleep…
Editor's notes:
Hello! I am Phoenix. This fanfiction, consisting of several chapters, is the story of one OC moving to a new town and making friends.
You: But Phoenix! This isn't original!
Yes, I know. This isn't an original idea, and I don't think it has to be. It will be a fun way for me to improve my writing skills, while at the same time; including my OC, and a few of my friend's OCs in the future of this story. One was already present ;)
So if you have any suggestions, then comment them down below...if that's where the comments are. Sorry, I've never commented on Fimfiction before XD
Suggestions are always appreciated, but don't be mean or hateful, plz.
So, until next time; Phoenix, out!
BROHOOF /)
