Costumed
Flutter-Succubus
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SZ: Ahem, greetings. As you know, I posted this story not too long ago, and it already obtained a certain amount of dislikes, and one negative comment so far.
Anonymous: And on the first day no less…
SZ: Yeah…
Anonymous: In a response to a negative comment, Sean mentioned a friend came up with that idea. I am that friend. However, I wish to keep my identity unknown.
SZ: indeed. And as I mentioned in the response to that negative comment, I liked the idea. I thought it would be fun to try a story like this.
Anonymous: It’s also my first mature story, so it’s kind of special to me. I wish for you all to give it a chance.
SZ: Yeah. Just give it a chance. It might surprise you… and to those who are probably claiming Fluttershy is OOC in this… well… tell them, aibou
Anonymous: She’s married, I feel like with that, she’d get a bit more courage. Plus this is marked under “AU” so…
SZ: Yeah...there you go. And also for some translations for some of the words Silver and Fluttershy use in this...here it is.
Mou-man…
Tenshi-Angel
Hai-yes/right
Kun/chan-a term of affection
Iie-no
Baka-stupid
Ano-um
Anonymous: That about covers it.
SZ: eeyup. So please...once again, give this story a chance people.
Flutter-Succubus
“Fluttershy… wake up,” Silver Hawk nuged.
“No…” Fluttershy responded, curling up under her blankets, “I don't want too~”
“...Fine….you asked for it,” Silver shrugged as he crawled underneath.
“Silver, what’re you d-?” Fluttershy began before she began to laugh like crazy, “Hahahahahahaha! S-silver-kun, stop! I...i can’t-tee hee! breath!”
At the moment, SIlver Hawk was tickling her like crazy, switching between her feet, stomach, and armpits.
“St-hahahahahahaha-p!”
“Not until you agree to get up,” silver smirked.
“N-no fair, Silver-kun!” Fluttershy laughed before Silver began to tickle under her armpits again, “Okay okay! I’ll g….get up...”
Silver Hawk laughed a bit at this.
“...I’m gonna… get you… for that…” Fluttershy panted.
“Oh really? How?”
“Trust me… I’ll get you… when you least… suspect it…” Fluttershy panted as she crawled out of bed.
She didn’t know why, but Fluttershy honestly felt like she just wanted to relax, the pinkette currently taking a shower. She let the body wash rub off of her body and she stared at her reflection, moving a bit of her currently wet hair to the side. While she wasn’t as forward as most girls, she had to admit, she looked really stunning. Maybe being a model wasn’t so bad… then again, she’d probably faint from all those people staring right at her, eyeing her like a piece of meat. More than likely it’d be worse than the perverts who followed her in highschool. She was just lucky she had her ‘sister’ around to chase those bullies off. With all those guys just wanting her for her body, she thought she’d never find the right guy...that is, until she met Silver Hawk.
“I love him…” Fluttershy giggled as she held her hand over her heart. She simply looked at her reflection, the water dripping off her body as she turned the shower off.
While most guys tend to go after certain traits in girls, Silver didn’t care about she looked. To him, she looked like an angel. It was one of the reasons why she loved him. He was sweet, caring, a gentleman, and when she wanted it, he knew just how to please her.
Fluttershy soon walked outside, now in her undergarments, as she looked around her closet to look for something to wear. However, her gaze sooned turned towards the box of outfits she got last night, the pinkette eying the succubus costume in particular.
“...Hmm...I wonder…” the muttered to herself as she picked it up
She stared at it for a moment, looking at a nearby mirror as she held it over her body.
“...Well, I guess trying it on won’t hurt,” Fluttershy said as she slowly began to put it on. She slid the rose pink stockings on first before putting the fingerless light pink gloves on. Lastly, she put the pure black one piece on, the top showing a good amount of her assets while a pair of ‘batwings’ hung off her back, “...Ano, it’s a bit revealing, but it fits just fine. Maybe I sh-”
Suddenly, a wave of relaxation began to flow through Fluttershy’s body, her eyes widening from the sudden feeling before her pupils change from their normal greenish blue to a more rose-red color. She stared at her reflection, a small smirk growing on her face as she checked herself out, posing a bit.
Silver Hawk returned to the apartment and began to refill the ice tray, a pair of glasses with some ice and water in them resting on the counter.
“A nice and quiet day…” he said to himself as he put the ice tray back in the freezer, “Just a nice, quiet day with my tenshi-chan,” he smiled as he picked up the glasses of water..
He set them down on the table, but noticed that Fluttershy wasn’t there. There wasn’t any water running, so she wouldn’t be in the shower. There wasn’t a note, so she couldn’t have gone out or anything. There weren’t any game systems on at the moment, the TV wasn’t on, there weren’t any books removed from the shelf…
“...Did she go back to bed?” he wondered as he walked back to their room, opening the door to see it was nearly pitch black in there, “Fluttershy? Are you ok?” He asked in concern, only to get silence in response..
He was about to turn on the lights, but he heard something rustling in the room.
“...Shy-chan? D-daijoubu?” he asked a bit nervously, only to get silence in response, “...O-okay If this is getting back at me for this morning, you win.”
He began to walk in, when he heard the door close and lock.
“....O-okay, Fluttershy. This is starting to get a bit creepy,” Silver gulped before something blurred past him, “....H-hello?”
He heard Fluttershy giggle, making him look around the dark room before his eyes turned towards the bed, a pair of rose-red eyes opening up to look at him.
“Ano… Fluttershy… uh… did you… invite a friend, or are you… wearing contacts?” Silver Hawk asked, recognizing the eye shape.
“...you could say the latter~” Fluttershy purred out in a rather seductive tone, “Besides, I have something special for you, a-na-ta.”
Silver Hawk blushed a bit at the tone his wife was using before he shook it off, “Wh-what kind of surprise?”
He saw Fluttershy walk over to him, a heavy blush beginning to form on his face once he saw what the pinkette was wearing, upon her turning a lamp by her nightstand on.
“...I… I see you’re trying out one of the outfits Mr. Rodgers sent you last night,” Silver noted, “The uh… uh…”
“Succubus one,” Fluttershy reminded, moving a bit of her hair out of her face as she posed for him, “How do I look~?”
He blushed at the way she posed, giving him a good looks at her assets.
“...A.-ano… ahem! Y-you look...stunning.”
“Thank you…” Fluttershy giggled as she sat down on the bed, “Care to join me, anata?”
Silver just gave a small nod in response, the heavy blush still on his face before he shook it off and sat down next to his wife.
“You look…really handsome,” Fluttershy smiled as she put her hand on Silver’s face, moving it through his ice blue hair, before she moved her hand down and began to caress his cheek, “Do you… find me beautiful?”
“...I do…”
“Then say it to me~” she whispered into his ear.
He blinked for a moment, but decided to comply.
“You’re beautiful, Fluttershy-tenshi,” Silver said with a small smile.
The pinkette giggled happily at this, giving him a small kiss on the cheek.
‘Anything else?” she inquired as she continued to pet his cheek.
“...what do you mean?” he asked.
“Ugh…” Fluttershy gave an annoyed groan at this, ”I mean like what else do you want to say about me aside from me being beautiful?”
“Oh,” he stated, “...is this still you trying to get back at me for waking you up this morning? Or… is it something else entirely?”
She gave him a slap to the side of his head, causing him to wince in pain.
“Ow… what was that for?” Silver asked as he rubbed the spot Fluttershy smacked him in.
“I’m a succubus. We don’t like to toy around… unless it’s with someone we like.”
“Then why’d you smack me?”
“For being an idiot. So to make up for it, you’re going to have to do what I say. Got it?”
“Okay Fluttershy… no need to get so upset…” he responded.
“Mistress,”
“...huh?”
This resulted in him getting another, albeit lighter, smack to the head.
“Baka. You are to start calling me your Mistress! Do this, and I might do something special for you. If not, then forget about it.”
“Okay okay… mistress,” Silver replied, ‘What the heck’s gotten into her?’
“Good,” she smiled, “Now tell me, who’s the sexiest girl in the world?”
Silver Hawk blinked at what she just asked him, but he just decided to go with it… at least until he figured out what’s gotten into his wife.
“You are, my mistress.” he responded, ‘This has gotta be her revenge. Just gotta get through this...’
“Thank you…” Fluttershy smiled, “Just two more times, and you’ll get your prize… possibly. Now tell me… who do you love the most?”
“You, my mistress.”
“Good~” she giggled, her finger tracing around his chest, “Now… who do you belong too~?”
“....”
“Well~?”
“...I… I belong to you, mistress,” Silver replied.
She pulled him into a quick hug, making sure his head rested on her assets, causing him to blush more.
“Good boy. Now for your prize~” she purred, pulling his head up to hers before she pulled him into a deep kiss. She began to pet his back, moving her hand up and down on it.
Slowly, Silver began to return the kiss as he embraced her, wrapping his arms around the pinkette, but ducking them underneath the bat wings on her outfit. He soon felt her tongue pressing against the entrance to his mouth, the pinkette wanting to further deepen the kiss before he complied, letting her tongue dance around with his.
They stayed like this for ten minutes, but split due to the need for oxygen, a small bridge of saliva trailing from their mouths.
“That was… that was just… wow...” Silver commented.
“I know,” Fluttershy smiled, “But we’re not done.”
“Eh?” Silver blinked a bit at that before Fluttershy grabbed one of his hands and guided it to one of her breast.
“Go ahead… do whatever you want to them. Fondle, squeeze, suckle, whatever you want~” she purred, slightly moving some of the outfit off so he could have full access to them.
Silver just slowly nodded in response before his hand began to softly fondle Fluttershy’s left breast, which caused a small wave of pleasure to shoot up the pinkette’s back.
“Yes~Keep it up… your mistress commands it,” Fluttershy gasped softly.
“Of course…” Silver replied as he began to fondle the other breast, giving it equal attention while occasionally giving them a small squeeze, causing Fluttershy to give off a small coo.
The pinkette was in pure bliss at the moment, shivers going up her back as she gripped the bed sheets.
“Ano…” Silver Hawk began, “...you know, you were supposed to take a picture in that outfit, right?”
“...Don’t care at the moment,” she told him, “In a little bit…”
“Bu-”
“In a little bit..” she repeated, “I want to continue feeling your hands all over my body~”
‘...What is with her today?’ Silver Hawk thought as he kept it up, ‘I don’t mind occasionally playing around with her, but…she’s acting as if she’s in dire need for...wait… is she…? ...no no. if she was, I’d be the one on the bed right now.’
Fluttershy got up, resecuring her outfit, “...I need to use the bathroom really quick. Once I come out… eh, we’ll do that photo.”
“...Okay,” Silver nodded before Fluttershy gave him a small, quick kiss.
“Then after that, we can get to the real fun~” she whispered into his ear before she walked towards the bathroom, closing the door shut.
“‘Real fun’ what could she mean by…” he muttered, before it hit him, “...Oh…”
The picture was soon taken, the picture having Fluttershy in a rather seductive pose.
“Now then my sweet,” Fluttershy began, “We’ll-”
Suddenly, she began to feel dizzy and held her head.
“Mou...my head…” Fluttershy groaned as she fell to her knees.
“Are you okay?” Silver Hawk asked as he got down to help her up.
“...what… oh… my head…” she groaned in pain.
Suddenly, her eyes turned back to their normal teal shade, the pinkette panting heavily as the pain in her head slowly began to go away.
“You okay?” Silver Hawk asked.
“...hai,” Fluttershy nodded, her tone now back to normal, “...What happened?”
“Hmm?” Silver Hawk blinked.
Fluttershy rubbed her head for a moment, “...Ano...Silver-kun...what...happened?”
Suddenly, everything she had been doing the past few hours came rushing back to her, a heavy blush forming on her face.
“Oh… my….” she blinked, “...Silver-kun… was I really acting like that today?”
“...Yes,” he nodded.
“I’m… so sorry…” she apologized.
“...Wait, that wasn’t your revenge for me waking you up this morning?! Then why the heck were you acting that way?”
Fluttershy thought for a moment before she shrugged and gave an ‘I don’t know’ hum.
“....Soka…” Silver noted, “You may wanna go and change clothes…”
“Yea,” she nodded as she quickly ran to the closet, found some more decent clothing, and rushed to the bathroom to get changed.
A bit later, Fluttershy was making the two lunch to try and make up for how she acted.
“So… what would you like on your sandwich, anata?” Fluttershy asked.
“I guess some cheese, lettuce, ketchup and mustard,” he requested.
“Okay,” Fluttershy nodded as she got to work making him lunch. She gave off a small mischievous giggle as she did so.
After she finished her own, she walked over to him and handed it to him.
“Thank you dear,” Silver Hawk smiled, taking a small bite of his sandwich, “Hmm… Shy-chan? Did you... add anything a-” he paused before he felt a burning sensation in his mouth, “Ahh….ahh! Hot! HOT! HOT! HOT!”
Fluttershy laughed at him a bit, as he rushed to get some water, chugging it down until the burning sensation in his mouth as gone.
“...what… did you do… to my lunch?” he asked.
“That’s my revenge for you waking me up this morning. Instead of ketchup and mustard, I put mayo and relish on your sandwhich, ha. Ha. Ha,” Fluttershy told Silver Hawk, a small smirk on her face.
“....that doesn’t explain the spicy part,” Silver frowned a bit.
“Oh that? I may have snuck in a dash of hot sauce just before serving it to you,” Fluttershy giggled in response.
“Ugh…” Silver Hawk groaned as he sat back down, “...Well, I guess I had that coming then.”
“You did,” Fluttershy giggled as she pulled him into a hug, resting her head on his shoulder, “But that doesn’t mean I don’t love you any less.”
They hugged for a moment, simply smiling at each-other.
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