The Flyer Within (Edited)

by ABronyLife42

First published

After the massive tornado produced to get the water up to Cloudsdale, Derpy Hooves begins to realize that she is a lot better flyer than she used to be and could have the potential of being the best in Ponyville. Dash's jealousy gets the best of her and she insults Derpy and Fluttershy, so now Derpy is more determined to beat her in a competition, with the help of another pegasus, she will train long as she can to beat Dash at her own game.

This will be interesting. I had this new idea and i just had to see if i can do some thing with it. Enjoy.



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