Beginnings of a Immortal Wirewolf: Prequel to Alfreda and El Quatros Locos

by Hairy Konquerer

Chapter 6: The Black Comet

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Alfreda scanned all the money in the safe before throwing out all the dye packs and emptying them into the sacks the Mane-iac and the henchponies brought. "Efficiency in money taken in heists is increased drastically thanks to new X-Ray scanners."

"Well Mane-iac, I didn't know you had a dictionary turned into a walking computer." A voice said behind them."wow look at your shiny new tin can" a stallion cloaked in a dull gray over coat and fedora his eyes hidden by black sunglasses.

"Who are you mother has no files on you" the stallion laughed at Alfreda while lowering his sunglasses revealing his slitted green eyes.

"I wouldn't expect you to."

"Well then won't you be an interesting one to interrogate and study? Seth, Prell, grab him." Alfreda commanded the two stallions who obliged only for the stallion to sweep Seth off his legs and give Prell a left hook. "Well this should be fun. Just wait for my friend to come in." The stallion said.

"Just who might your friend be?" Alfreda asked.

"To paraphrase the master..." A voice said before a mechanical bat flew in hovering over both of them. "A real mother bucking A.I."

"scanning scanning" Alfreda said emotionless his eye scanning the bat like machine who hovered over them.

"Machine lifeform, bat design, A.I. level...." his eye shifted to a blue color.

"....immeasurable" he said scarred.

"Is that fear i hear?" Vesperat said smoothly landing on his masters shoulder.
Alfreda's eye shifted back to red. "I told you not to come in while working." Back to blue. "But you never let me help with anything anymore." The eye went back to red one last time. "look just stay put and after this we'll talk later." He then pulled out two sabers and pointed them at the stallion. "Identify yourself at least, before I reduce your existence to piles of meat being dissected."

"Well since you asked nicely, I'm Black Comet, the stallion who's gonna toss what's left of you to the Mane-iac like a broken toaster." He tossed off his cloak and hat revealing a young finely built stallion his coat as black as a starless sky his mane was short and wild with locks of green mixed with fields of gold. His slightly curved horn and fur tipped ears caught Alfreda's eye.

"Are you the same species as Sombra?" Black just laughed before throwing away his glasses revealing his sickly green slitted eyes

"Trust me that fool is nowhere near my gene pool."

"A different species of Pony? Well won't it be interesting to see how you function?" Alfreda then charged at Comet, swinging his sabers cutting off a clip of his hair as Comet hit him in the eye, causing it to crack and half to be blue while the other half was red.

"Nice try boy" Vesperat started to circle around him making the left side of Alfreda quiver.

"What are you doing?" He asked between emotionless and fear.

"Henshin!"
"Vesper bite!" Vesperat bit into his arm causing green glowing veins to appear in his body and black chains to wrap around his waist before becoming a red belt. Vesperat attached itself to him becoming a buckle as symphonic ringing played and gothic armor foed on him

"You think your new, awesome and terrifying armor scares me? Even though I'm absolutely terrified?" Alfreda asked, his two halves agreeing on some parts, and his sabers quivering in his arms.

"Looks like it." Black Comet replied with a smile.

"lets play a game" He lifted his and sphere of swirling red and black energy gathered in his hoof. "Its called hot energy potato."

"Ummmm, no thanks" Alfreda pressed the sercurity button repeatedly as he shook.

"Too late catch!" With his long black cape bellowing he tossed the energy making Alfreda scream. He dodged as it blew a hole in the wall behind him.

"You didn't catch time for a....." Black comet laughed at him as several energy spheres formed around him. "Penalty game"

"Who and what are you!?"

"I am simply a bored pony seeking an apparent dangerous crime lieutenant for some fun" the green of his visor shined like stain glass as he stared down at Alfreda "But I'll give you some courtesy, in this form I'm Kamen rider Vesper"

"Wait if your bored i can help you!" Alfreda rolled back into the wall as the spheres got closer and closer.

"Don't care for any money or drugs you have bot."

"I can get six really strong opponent's for you!" The spheres disappeared as Vesper picked up the robot and dangled him.

"Alright I'll listen." Vesper sounded genuinely intrigued.

"I can get the power ponies here in like 20 minutes."

"Those six?" Vesper dropped the robot on the ground. "Well i am new here might as well get introduced to them now."

'Great thinking on your wheel Alfreda.' Logic told him having retreated into Alfreda's mind when Comet attacked.

'Let me help Alfreda. Ah could whip up sumethin to beat this feller.'

'Shut up Ezekiel. Last time I listened to you, my dream to bullfight was lost forever.' Alfreda replied as Alfreda quickly through a stock of dynamite at the door. He then took out his pistol and shot it causing it to explode as everyone took cover. Black Comet looked at Alfreda ready to strike when Alfreda took cover. "That'll get em here faster. It's worked the last 20 times."

"if they don't arrive in 20 minutes I'm gonna start eating your guys." Black comet sat down on the chair crossing his legs.

"Um what do you mean by that?" Alfreda asked backing away. He jumped as Vesper’s mouth guard slipped from his helmet revealing metal silver fangs that glistened in the moonlight.

"I'll rip my fangs into them, drain them dry of the of their life force!" Vesper shouted joyfully.

'A've got a good feeling about this fella.'

'SHUT UP EZEKIEL!' Alfreda told Ezekiel before he saw the familiar streak across the room. "Greetings Filli-Second." Logic said taking control before Alfreda managed to take it back.

"Alfreda every time to do that, we're gonna hit you even harder then the last time." Filli-Second said as the other Power Ponies came running behind her.

"I just wanted attention." Ezekiel said embarrassed.

"Okay what the hell is your problem?" Comet asked annoyed by Alfreda's mood changing on a dime.

"Whose the vampire guy?" Fillie second asked before alfreda was kicked away by said "vampire guy"

"You may call me Kamen rider Vesper" He bowed to her politely before raising and kicking her across the jaw

'Perfect.' Logic, Alfreda and Ezekiel thought at the same time as he got up. Alfreda rolled across the room as Marevelous went flying over the Mane-iac. "Mom, follow me and stay low."

"What about the others?" She asked.

"What about the others?" Logic pointed out before they began to crawl forward Mane-iac following suit.

"Oh its on!" Fillie second yelled silenced as she surrounded by magical aura with green lightning surging between her and Vesper’s crystal horn sheath.

"I agree" he flinged her through a wall with a chuckle. "Time for a dramatic entrance"

"Must you master?" Vesperat asked with a sigh

"Of course, its necessary its part of the shock and awe of my strategy." Vesper said walking towards the hole.

"Why does that involve constantly flurishing your cape?"

"Of course!"

"Why is that belt buckle talking?" Fillie asked stars flooding her vision.

"Excuse me, but he's a buckmothering A.I and I ask that he be called in such a matter as I've hurt alot of bad ponies to give him that title."Vesper said as if offended my Filli-Second's comment.

"Power Tackle!" Marevelous yelled jumping at Vesper who dodged. "You know if you stayed quiet rather then announce what you did, that would've hit closer to home."

Alfreda and the Mane-iac managed to make it out of the bank and made their way to the van. "All right. We just need to get in the van and don't look back." Mane-iac said getting in.
"I'll be right back mom, I think I forgot something inside." Alfreda replied rolling back in.
'Your stupidity is becoming less useful at times and more hazardous.' Logic said to himself, knowing that action would have painful consequences.


"Also you call that an attack name!" He placed a dark whistle into Vesperats mouth pressed it down.
"~Wake up nigou!~" Vesper’s cape bellowed in the wind as dark ominous orchestra music played from Vesperat. He crossed his forelegs as dark red mist surround him and the power ponies.
"What in the hay!" Marevelous seeing the red mist turn the moon blood red.
"What kind of magic is this!?" Matterhorn's horn glowed brightly charging an attack as she stared at the dark stallion.
"MOON RIDER PUNCH" the rider jumped into the air as hoof charging with red and green lightning before flying back down.
"Is that it!" Matterhorn fired a large beam at him. His hoof connected with the blast and blowed right through it his momentum unhindered and with a dark explosion blowing away the mist his hoof connected with her shattering her horn.

Matterhorn screamed in pain as she fell to the ground from the impact.Vesper smiled until he was sent flying into a wall. He turned around in time to see Saddle Rager charge at him in rage. On the other side of the room, Alfreda gave up his search when Matterhorn's horn hit him on the head and fell in front of him. "Cool, I'm keeping this." Alfreda said to himself as he picked it up.

"Wow that beam was pretty strong, that punch would of collapsed your skull and make you crap out your spine or blow up in an fiery explosion one or the other." Vesper said looking down at her horn stump. Marvelous tackled him to the ground and reeled back to punch him. "Hey your pretty cute"
Marevelous stopped her cheeks pink with a blush.
"What?" He kicked her off him chuckling at her. "Hey how about after this we can grab a coffee and cuddle after that."

"Shut it!" Marevelous yelled blushing.
"Not a shame to admit it." Vesper replied dodging a lightning bolt from Zapp.
"He's right, listen to your heart." Alfreda said earning a grin from Vesper as he looked at him. 'Why do I do things?' Alfreda thought as Vesper ran to him but luckily(In a way at least.) so was Saddle Rager

"Oh got a big friend, so do i!" He placed a purple whistle in Vesperat's mouth releasing a heavy baritone whistle.
"DOGRA HAMMER!" Purple energy surged into him as purple chains wrapped his shoulders and broke away revealing broad purple plate armor. And dropping from the skies atop Saddle rager head a massive Warhammer in the shape of clenched claw.
"This is my Dogga form, my physical strengths increases tenfold!"

"This isn't gonna get old anytime sooner and is ripe for abuse isn't it?" Alfreda questioned dodging the warhammer. 'maybe so, but we've got bigger ponies to worry about.' Logic said.
'Oh yeah? like who?'
'Saddle Rager.' Logic simply said before Alfreda dodged a hoof from Saddle Rager who diverted her attention to Alfreda for some serious payback.

"Oh don't worry i got him!" Vesper yelled before swatting his war hammer at Alfreda knocking him away off to the skyline screaming like a little filly. "He was supposed to be a girl robot?"
In a gify Fillie second punched him right in his now purple eye with a resounding crunch. Vesper sighed with her hoof against his face.
"You just broke your hoof didn't you?" Fillie second dropped back clutching her hoof.
"No you mook." Fillie second cursed before she felt what felt like a rhino ramming her stomach.
"Could a mook do this?!" He asked his purple plate hoof pulling back and giving her a gentle tap to head making her fallover clutching her stomach. "Anypony want to put money on her spilling her lunch?"

Alfreda screamed as he fell back down. "30 bits..." Alfreda said slurry until he found that he was in Saddle Rager's mane. Alfreda clinged on screaming as Saddle Rager tried to get him off like a bucking bronco. "If this is bull riding I want no part in it!" Alfreda yelled as Vesper laughed.

"I'll get you of.f" he placed the handle of his Warhammer across his waist infront of Vesperat.
"DOGRA BITE!" The mechanical bat bit down on the hammers handle spreading a purple wave through it. He smashed the handle into the ground and pulled a lever on the back of the hammer. The clenched claw opened revealing a red eye that stared down at the power ponies.
"What the buck is that!" Alfreda screamed before the eye pulsed spreading a purple glow to all them freezing them all even Saddle Rager in place.
"DOGRA WAKE UP!" a familiar mist spread around them before eclipsing the moon turning its white shine to purple. He raised his hammer into the air and continuously rounded a swinging strike a glowing spectral version of the clenched claw getting bigger and biggger as he rounded up.
"Why did you all stand there as he powered up!?" Alfreda shouted afraid.
"Oh shut up!" Fillie second yelled trying to vibrate out of her paralysis.
"POWER OF KAIJU, DOGRA SMASH!" With Vesperats roar Kamen rider vesper swung the hammer sending the now cargo truck size spectral fist into the power ponies launching them into the bay

Alfreda screamed his head off not only landing in the water, but then having Saddle Rager land right on top of him. The Mane-iac ran for the bay looking around. "He should be surfacing any minute." Lather said looking around, as a Alfreda floated to the surface like a dead fish. "Well I was half right at least."

Lather dove into the water and grabbed Alfreda before jumping out and throwing him to the ground. The center of his chest was indented so she comprssed it before she breathed into his mouth.

"Am interrupting?" Vesper asked dragging his hammer behind him sending sparks everywhere. "Because i see the most wanted criminal in the city."
"Mom....run" Alfreda coughed out.
"And I'm still hungry" He revealed his metal fangs hissing at her.

Alfreda thought up of something that as Saddle Rager floated to the surface barely conscious. Alfreda took out his razor and shaved off part of her mane and stuck it in Vesper's hoof before socking him in the face while doing so. Saddle Rager woke up and felt something was off. She felt her head and found part of her mane was shaved off, seeing that Vesper had shaved it off. She roared with anger as she charged at him slamming them both into a freighter. Alfreda then grabbed Mane-iac and they both ran out of the docks. "Don't look back, don't look back!"

"Dick!" Vesper threw his hammer smashing Alfredas lower body away to smithereens. He then jumped on Saddle rangers back using her mane as reigns as she tried to buck him off. "This is how its done!" He then made Saddle Rager ram through a wall repeatedly.

"ALFREDA!" Lather yelled.

"My wheel! I can't feel my wheel!" Alfreda yelled. Mane-iac growled with rage as she faced Vesper. "I'm gonna shove that buckle down your throat until it comes out your-"

"Mother no! It is not your time." Logic said as Lather dragged him off.

"Hey wanna play game!?" Vesper shouted excitedly still riding Saddle Rager like a bull.

"No more games..." Logic said angrily scaring Lather as he pressed a button on his chest. A pod launched out of the harbor and landing on top of him shifting around him until he stood there, now resembling a robotic wolf with a chainsaw on his back. "Lather, run." Logic simply told her before charging at Vesper.

"Oh hold on, I've got a test for the power ponies!" A magic seal of a mark appeared under him surging with purple lightning appeared beneath him.

The hammer levitated in place as new spectral whistle appeared in vesperats mouth.

"KAIJU RELEASE; PURPLE KING DOGRA!" Vesper’s armor flew up along with the Warhammer glowed as flew up and with a mighty roar a massive dragonic gorilla beast landed in the bay.

"Ok that's for them, for you i also have a blade wolf!" Vesper plugged a blue whistle into Vesperat's mouth a symphony of wolf howls released as blue chains wrapped his chest and left foreleg.
"GARURU SABRE!" the chains broke away revealing chrome blue chest plate with silver fangs running down his chest and a gauntlet and shoulder of chrome frozen flamed blue fur. With a howl a curving silver sword flew into his hoof his visor turning blue matching the wolf head sword guard.
"Come on Krypto, show me a good time!"

"This is merely form 1." Logic said before two chainsaws shot out of a nearby shipping crate. Logic got on his hind knees which shifted to accommodate him standing upright, the chainsaws attaching to his wrists. A Gatling gun formed on Logic's right shoulder as he drew his sabers charging some electricity into them. "I'm going to eviscerate you and use your gastrointestinal tract as a condom for when I fornicate with your skull."

"What?" Vesper asked.

"We're gonna Skull Buck You!" Logic, Ezekiel and Alfreda yelled charging at Vesper who dodged but not before The trio was able to deliver a slice on his cheek also charging him.

Purple King smacked Matterhorn back into the water, to which she surfaced and shook it off. "All right the direct approach was stupid. Any other ideas?" Matterhorn asked her teammates.
"Maybe Zapp should charge up Saddles with some lightning and Radiance put her in a cannon construct to shoot straight at that big lug's skull." Filli-Second suggested.
Matterhorn thought long and hard and realized she was right and smiled. "Let's do this."

Matterhorn charged whatever she could into the stub of her horn. It was incredibly painful, but she managed to blast Purple King at his legs keeping him stuck. Marevelous used her lasso to grab his arms and keep them down as Filli-Second ran away With Saddle Rager at normal size on her back. Radiance created a bat construct and shouted "Now!"

Filli-Second came running back, Saddle Rager transforming and Zapp hit her with some lightning just as Radiance hit her off of Filii-Second, sending Saddle Rager, no fully transformed and electrically charged, flying towards Purple King's head, then slammed right through his forehead, causing him to fall backwards into the water then exploding in fire-filled water spreading explosion. "Ok why did he explode?" Filli-Second asked as they heard another explosion and looked behind them.

Logic swung at Vesper with his right saber barely missing him as Vesper punched him in the eye. "I'm actually impressed. I didn't think you last this long against me."
"I'm just full of surprises." Logic replied.

"I don't what's funnier, you thinking your threatening or them thinking they're done." Vesper laughed out.

"Rrrrraaaaaaaagggghhhhhhh!"

"Oh Faust dammit!" Bolt cursed before being frozen by purple kings glowing glare.

"You really think you can beat me!" Vesper kicked alfreda in the stomach knocking him away as he held the GARURU sabre the wolf head releasing a growl alfreda. Vesper flicked a lever behind the wolfs head causing the wolf hilt to release a sonic howl at Alfreda. "I beat each of these kaiju, and transformed them for my own power, their the sole and strongest survivor of their races and i bested them all!"

"Best this bitch! Zeke, now!" Alfreda yelled as Ezekiel took control and pressed a button he placed on his back. Something rumbled under the water before beginning to surface, large spikes seen emerging before the beast came up. "What...is that?" Filli-Second asked.
"None of us even know. Came through a portal, Ah took it." Ezekiel clarified as the creature reared his head from the water looking similar to a bear in some ways. It raised it's head before bringing it down facing Purple king, unleashing a mighty roar as well.
"Get em Godzilla!" Alfreda yelled.

'We agreed his name would be Scrapdoodle!'

'You hear what you want to hear!'
"Um....that's not a Godzilla." Vesper looked at the large fin horns on the side of its head.
"Its a knock off species but not a very good one" He slashed Alfreda across the chest each slash echoed by a ringing howl.
"That's a Gomorrah!" Purple king punched the Gomorrah hard enough to break its nose spraying blood on the Power ponies

As Vesper swung his blade in time for Alfreda to catch it, causing a ringing yelp rather then a howl. "That son of a bitch gypsy lied to me! She said that it was him!" Alfreda yelled throwing Vesper across the docks.

'Does this mean ah can name him scrapdoodle?' Ezekiel asked.

'No!' Alfreda then turned to face Gomorrah as Logic took over. "You! Fight the other one or die! I don't care which!"

Gomorrah's giant tail came and smashed Alfreda, then lifted up revealing Alfreda unharmed with a shield protecting this. "Y'now what? Buck Purple Kings, BUCK GOMORRAHS, AND BUCK YOU VESPER!" Alfreda yelled before pressing a button, launching a missile into the air from the bay. "Ultimatum prick: that's a thermobaric bomb, full size. You stop it but I escape, or you catch me and it falls killing everyone at the docks including you. P.S. Logic has it set off an EMP before detonation so your suit won't protect you. So long and go buck yourself!" Alfreda told him before Logic took over crushing the detonator and dropping it like a mike then transforming into a mini tank like car then driving off to Mane-iac and Lather's location. "Inside, now." Logic told them before they got in and Logic drove off.

"Neat!" He swung his sword hard and with an echoing howl a blue slash wave flew up and slashed the bomb causing it to blow up in the sky.
"But no sigar!" He placed another whistle in Vesperat's mouth
"KAIJU RETURN!" His blue armor and Purple king turn into orbs of light flying into sky.
"Gomorrah!, join me or die!" Vesper yelled his eye's on a new prize.

Gomorrah one step forward before his head suddenly exploded, sending pieces of Kajiu all over the docks.

"Now no one gets Gomorrah." Alfreda quipped in his original body back at the hideout.

"Who are you talking to?" Moe asked.

"Shut up that's who. We almost died. Let's just go to bed and sleep this off like a bad dream.


"Aaaawww, always wanted one of those." Vesper said looking sad.

"Least I have a dragon castle thing" Vesper grumbled out sounding like spoiled child.

"Its okay master you'll get the next one' Vesperat flew off from his belt. It and the armor shattering away like glass revealing the stallion underneath.

"Yeah" Marevelous climbed out of the bay water and stared at him her cheeks becoming pink.

"What like what you see?" Vesperat smacked Black comet upside the head with his mechanical wing.

"Don't flirt with the enemies Master Black comet how many times have I told you that."

"Don't be mad cause I can't actually get laid." Comet replied smugly walking past the fiery corpse of Gomorrah.


Author's Note

Finally, I'm finished with chapter 6. Chapter 7 will hopefully not take as long. This was made with a collab with Rider Nocturnis Nemesis. Please support him if you wish to

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