
Why Humans should never be allowed in Equestria
A comedy story of two teens entering Equestria
A parody fan fiction of Human in Equestria stories. Much of the scenes are based off the unrealistic actions HiE fics tend to create.
The two teenagers James and Scott have entered Equestria through a portal. The duo must fight to survive as their actions cause the world to fall into pieces around them.
Authors Note: While it is a parody, it does have a story which may or may not be unique, I honestly have no idea if I have accidentily ripped off it without noticing. No, the description is not intentionally bad, its just hard to not give away the plot points.


14038 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read
12 Chapters:
- Ponyville 2012-06-03 22:13:45 UTC1258
- Cloudsdale 2012-06-03 07:00:40 UTC1032
- Wasteland 2012-06-28 20:44:41 UTC1085
- Manehatten 2012-06-25 11:22:33 UTC1393
- Manehatten: Part II: Back With a Vengence 2012-06-08 22:36:20 UTC1007
- Canterlot 2012-06-11 10:05:01 UTC2116
- Crossroads of Destiny 2012-06-15 10:55:24 UTC560
- The End of Friendship (Alternate Ending) 2012-06-27 23:24:13 UTC865
- Pain and Suffering 2012-06-18 11:55:50 UTC1646
- Final Goodbyes 2012-06-27 23:12:07 UTC1757
- Just One Last Thing to do (Epilogue) 2012-06-27 23:12:11 UTC781
- Authors Notes 2012-06-27 23:12:14 UTC538